Veeba FF:~**The SCANDAL!!!**~,Chapter-2,page-9...

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Midhula3110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow...😎now dats a soooper start..😃

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ZainXAliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Veera kidnapping Baldev? Well that's kind of new, I was hoping it to be the other way around, but looking forward to read more about this story.

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virgo24

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Muna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing Start continue ASAP!!

Hehe very nice update!!

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sunny303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Hell yeH continue this bud!

Your writing is always so much fun...and this concept is freakin amazing. I totally believe our girl is capable of this! Looking forward to reading more!

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sunny303

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Lol yes you do confuse the genders, I'm used to it now and change it I my mind...Veeba needs the Hindi/Punjabi for me to "hear" them in my head if you know what I mean!

Awesome job!!!

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Unreserved my comment on Pg 1 :D

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pinkrose90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome start!👏 Veera kidnapped Baldev!🤣 Looking forward to the next update!

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Veera kidnapped baldev seriously 🤣 🤣
Nice prologue tehsina
Continue soon dear and thanks for the pm

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Sach me bhaag gaye he? But i thik their reason is no where near of the what the villagers are thinking. Eager to read more. Bt a lil sad that what ever it takes is going to end.