Veeba FF:~**The SCANDAL!!!**~,Chapter-2,page-9...

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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

First of all ,welcome back sina 🤗
N nw..abt d story...aww I'm loving this baldeva t d core...on reading d first half...I was likely...okay dis is somewhat different..aur y is ballu controlling himself??? Wat wid be d reason???bahuth saare doubts aaye..
N on reading d 2 nd half..omg d sina fragrance is back...u never disappoint my expectations Yaar..luv u 4 dat...bt dat was lyk a trailer..ummeed hai.. .picture..bhi jaldi dikhaogi...
I 'm getting a new feel ind dis story..nt only d hot romance bt also d New new love type..cute n sweet luv stry..hope dat u will continue dis flavour in evry update ..hmm..Tfs..waitin 4 d nxt..continue asap..

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HarshaMawra

@HarshaMawra

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

This is awesome

After aashlok, veeba z my favourite couple

Thanks a lot for the pm

Loved it

This suits their character well

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wuFi

@wuFi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Finally u r bacKk [:D/] wo bhi wid lots ov veeba's jhappiya te pappiya 😈

Cming to da chap 😎 it was simply awesome 👏 hayee beared cheek kishi ☺️ my heart was also dhadking so fast fast jst lyk his ☺️ 😉 but aye ki kaha stop kardita updt 😒 nw plzz cheti cheti updt kariyOo 😳

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Very nice update, loved it😊

Btw, what is Veera exactly upto in the hill?

Update soon and thanks for the pm😊

Edited by Veebafan - 11 years ago

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Awesome update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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manishasatpathy

@manishasatpathy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

nice update veera dsuddenly wanted to trek pagal h puri

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

"MMMUUUAAAH!!!!!" for this utterly butterly delicious update,chooo chweeet 😳

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

wow dat was quite an interesting start

do update soon

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Part one is so intresting...can't wait for next...

Amazing dear...

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

You should hv written a lil more 😆
Nevertheless it was awesome, way too cute and hot as well in the end
I love ur descriptive writing style, very vivid and helps me imagine the scene perfectly! Keep rocking and waiting for the next chap😃