Veeba FF:~**The SCANDAL!!!**~,Chapter-2,page-9...

TehsinaJFJ thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#1
[NOTE:Hi friends!😛Like I had said yesterday I have a new story idea,so here it is..I will continue wid dis aftre I wrap one of my other FFs..Or maybe earlier,it depends..😆😉Okay do lemme know if u r interested or should I just leave it..😛Thank u for bearing wid me and my craziness for so long!Love u all!🤗
Tehsina(Sina)..❤️]


~ **The SCANDAL!!!**~

Prologue:

The entire village of Pritampura was buzzing with the news..

Billo's grandmother to Pinto's mother everyone was talking about it..Everyone shocked by the news..Everyone scandalized..

No one could believe what they had heard,and still the proof was there..

Raghu had himself seen the proof..

And of course the proof was there in the form of absent couple and of course heart broken mother..

The entire vilagers of the small village of Pritampura was buzzing with the news..Even people from close by villages had come running hearing of it..This was a first time among the villagers..

People were gathered mostly in Pritampura's sarpaanch's house where the heart broken and shattered mother of the boy was weeping her heart out and telling everyone how her poor one and only son was kidnapped forcefully by the girl..

Everyone was shocked and stunned that something like this could even happen..

Some people were gathered also around the girl's house too,but here the scene was different..Everyone and everything was quiet here to the gossip monger's disappointment..

The gathered curious people were peeping in and trying to overhear some hot tidbits on the girl and her nature so that they could share the news with friends at tea in the evening..

An old man peeping in,was almost chased to death by a furious looking and screaming shouting healthy old woman with a broom,for all his efforts..

The gathered crowd had to move back in fear of getting beaten by that huge broom,as the woman stood at the door to their house and screamed at everyone to stay away,and look for amusement elsewhere..

The people concluded the entire girl's family must be crazy and the girl might have inherited the gene from the crazy old woman..

Pritampura was scandalized that the renowned but now dead Sarpaanch's only daughter Veera Sampooran Singh had kidnapped the present Sarpaanch's one and only son Baldev Singh,and forced him to run away with her..

No one had ever heard of a girl kidnapping a guy ever before..

So The SCANDAL had truly scandalized everyone who heard the news..

Unaware of the buzz they had created the couple stood at the bottom of a mountainous forest..

Both stared at each other,after seeing the high climb ahead,and then the girl smiled sweetly and flattered her eyelashes at the boy making him gulp and step back..

"Mainu iss pahaar ki upaar taak pauchne mein madad karega na tu Baldeva..?Warna-..

[You are going to help me to reach till the top of this mountain,won't you Baldeva..?Or else.."She left the sentence hanging in midsentence..

"Warna..Warna ki karegi..?!Nai karta main madad..!

[Or else..Or else what will you do..?!I won't help you..!]"

She stepped closer menacingly at his words making him step back nervously again..

"Warna main tere kandho pe chadhdh jaungi!Dayaan ki tarha!

[Or else I'll get on your shoulder!Like a witch!]"Her words seemed to make him more nervous and uncomfortable.

"Waise kaunsi insaan hai tu!Achcha aa madad karta hu..!Lekin yahi aakhri baar hai..Thik hai?!

[Anyways you are not really a human!Okay come I'll help you..!But this is the last time..Okay?!]"She nodded with a sweet smile,and was about to hug him in happiness but he moved away again,making her frown in confusion.

Finally they were climbing up the mountain through the forest of trees there..

Baldev Singh had found an innovative way of keeping her from touching him..

Veera was confused why she had to climb the mountain holding onto one end of a stick,whose other end was in his hand,when she could easily be holding his hand in the first place..

But she was glad that he was carrying her huge backpack himself atleast,and she only had to carry his small bag of clothes and minor necessities..

Meanwhile the scandalized Pritampura was lost in gossiping about them..The girl who had kidnapped and ran away with the boy..The SCANDAL was all everyone talked,discussed,argued and thought about everywhere that day in the whole village and surrounding areas..


Chapter-1,page-5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102716640

Link to my VEERA works😈:

Tehsina's VEERA Writng Index:Come,Live The Love..:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102274391




INDEX:-


Prologue:Above!😛

Chapter-1,page-5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102716640

Chapter-2,page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105892490







Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

62

Views

14.3k

Users

37

Likes

199

Frequent Posters

sladjana333 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#2


A good start, thanks for the pm.
_SilentSoul_ thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Reserved! Loved your OSs so going to read it as soon I'm home. :-)

*Edited*

Gosh! Veera kidnapped Baldev 🤣 Baldev's nervousness when Veera came closer and threatened him to sit on his shoulders if he didn't help her 🤣 This is hilarious man! 🤣 But why did they run away? Eager to know! Update sooon! 😳
Edited by -MohanKiMeera- - 11 years ago
CrazyBilli thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Hahaha...It's got a funny and entertaining start...continue it soon.. ;)
.GrangerMalfoy. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
I love your FF's

but you always confuse the genders in hindi.

😆
Sparkling-eyes5 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#6

A good start, thanks for the pm.
princy48 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Kyaa..??
Ballu ki kidnap voh bhi veera...wow ..its something new..trying t process it in my mind..till then keep writing...plzz update soon..waiting 4 a new chapter of veeba's lyf..
TehsinaJFJ thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: ASRaddictKKG

I love your FF's

but you always confuse the genders in hindi.

😆




Eeeks!!!😲😲I know!🤣M not an indian so basically try to keep away from writing it..😳But Veeba dialogues dusnt seem complete widout hindi..😕But if u want I cud stop..😛Well tried to correct dis update too..😳Nd da genders r always my weakness in hindi..
Krazzy4u786 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Awesome start!!
Different concept...Luvd it!!!
Can't w8 4 u 2 update!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!
.GrangerMalfoy. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ




Eeeks!!!😲😲I know!🤣M not an indian so basically try to keep away from writing it..😳But Veeba dialogues dusnt seem complete widout hindi..😕But if u want I cud stop..😛Well tried to correct dis update too..😳Nd da genders r always my weakness in hindi..


No. It's okay. You've corrected it now. :)

And they seem more VeeBaish in Hindi :D so please continue with Hindi :)


and update Playing with Fire!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".