VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 8

Awesome amazing ... Wow I read last two parts together ... Loved it yaar... Dono parts mein Baldev was different ... You wrote it very well ... Orr uss Karan ka band baja diya maza aa giya :)

The last two updates have been amazing...

Baldev makes me blush.. 😳 Who wouldn't want to have a man like him ? ☺️☺️

Wow!!! Baldev is freakin hotness personified in your story gurrl!

oh my god that was awesome di!!!

Heroic entry...wow

Wow,awesome update!:) baldev the awesome angry young man lover boy hero.looking forward to reading the next update!:) thanks for the pm!

[NOTE:Once again thank u friends for such warm comments on my 1st ever OS!😳Love u all!🤗Nd ur lovely comments make me keep on writing and writing and writing!!!😆Phew!So dis is da finale..Nd just lyk so many of u told me to do so..Here is a warning..!😉

Please read carefully!😳Its ummm just Veebalicious moment,and a bit..Well I mean those who get offended by such intimate scenes please stay away..Nd I hope I dnt get chappals nd rotten tomatoes thrown at me for my effort!😳So I present you the FINALE,the ending chapter of my 1st OS: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT...😉
Do scroll down and read on..😛]

Part-3,page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100662523

Part-4(FINALE).

As Veera looked into his deep dark anger filled eyes burning into hers,her heart beat escalated,and her breathing became heavier..

He was not moving,or saying anything..And that had was making her even more nervous,as she gulped down another knot of tension..

She really could not believe that Baldev could be so angry..Angry was a small word to describe how furious he looked..She inhaled another long steadying breath,desperately trying to calm her racing pulse,and try to take control of things..

Suddenly he clenched his hand tight,making her jump with a start at the sudden movement.

Veera now understood how nervous she actually was..

Suddenly she heard thunder rolling in the distant..

And at the same time he spoke up..

"Vaddi maze me thi tu,hai na..?

[You were having a lot of fun,weren't you..?"He said in a cold chilling voice,that sent icicles dripping down her spine..

"Mm-..Matlab ki hai tera?

[Wh-..What do you mean?]"She stammered out,not able to break her gaze from his burning dark eyes.

He leaned closer to her side,making her lean back nervously..

"Waah!Aab vaddi massoom ban gayi tu!Kuch der pehle to ekdum philmi heroine jaise uske baho mei gir rahi thi,latke jhatke de rahi thi,aur to aur usko jhappiya bhi-.."

[Wow!Now you are acting very innocent!Only sometime ago you were falling into his arms like filmy heroine,dancing with him,and also giving him hugs-..]"Baldev was stopped in mid-sentence by Veera.

"Apna mu sambhal ke baat kar Baldev!!Main kab usko jhappiya de rahi thi?!!"

["Control your tongue Baldev!!When was I hugging him?!!]"

"Achcha!To wo jab aise tera haat pakra tha,tab hasa kaun tha?!

[Really!Then when he held your hand like this,who was laughing?!]"Veera was stunned when he suddenly grabbed her hand in his tightly..

"Aur aise jab teri kamar kaaske pakra tha,tab maza le rahi thi na tu..?!

[And when he held your waist tightly like this,then weren't you enjoying it..?!]"Veera gasped out,as his large rough hand encircled her waist,and pulled her close to him..

As he did so,she nearly lost her balance,and in her attempt to steady herself,she placed one hand on his he hard chest,while the other fell on the dashboard for support..

Suddenly music started coming out from the radio,which her hand seemed to have turned on..And simultaneously the rumble of thunder came closer,as breathing heavily she looked into his eyes,now so close to hers,as she almost completely leaned onto him..

" Tu hi ye mujhko bata de..

Chahu mai ya naa..

Apne tu dilka pata de..

Chahu mai ya naa.."

Veera was getting lost in his dark eyes that darkened some more now,with something that was hotter than his anger..She could make out his dilated pupil,as thunder light lightened up the sky..

" Tu hi ye mujhko bata de..

Chahu mai ya naa..

Apne tu dilka pata de..

Chahu mai ya naa.."

His hands tightened round her waist..His eyes looking into hers with a need and hunger,that was melting her with its intensity..

"Itna bata doon tujhko

Chahaat mei apni mujhko

Yun tto nahi ikhtiyaar

Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne

Ab jo laga hoon milne

Poochhu tujhe ekbaar.."

His face was now coming closer to hers..She could clearly see the small specks of dark brown in his iris,as they darkened with need and passion..

" Tu hi ye mujhko bata de..

Chahu mai ya naa..

Apne tu dilka pata de..

Chahu mai ya naa.."

He pulled her closer roughly this time,making her lose her balance,and this time her hand on the dashboard turned the radio off..

She was drowning in his eyes,as thunder rumbled one more time,and suddenly it started raining heavily..

She gasped out as the chilling drops of water fell on her body,making her break the gaze and move away..

Quickly she looked for cover,and noticed a huge tree close by..And before he could react,she jumped out of the jeep,and ran towards the tree,trying to save herself from the pouring rain as much as possible..But she was already soaked through the skin..So as she tried to dry her hair unsuccessfully,she did not notice Baldev had followed her out of the car,and was now approaching her with a dark hot expression on his face..

Baldev walked upto her slim wet form,as she tried to dry her wet hair..

Her purple lehenga clung to every nook and cranny of her slim but curvaceous body,making his blood heat up some more..

The chilling rain water had no effect on him whatsoever,as his body heated up with undeniable need and passion darkened his eyes..

She was just moving her fingers down her hair,when his hands closed over her hand and whirled her around,making her gasp and fall against his chest.

He took both her hands in his,and pushed her up against the huge tree trunk,trapping her hands above her head,with one hand..

And with the other he gently caressed her soft cheek,and watched her close her eyes,as her skin heated up..

Slowly with his rough fingers he traced her cheekbones,her eye brows,her cute small nose,and then his thumb brushed against her soft rosy lips,making her gasp out..

"Veera..Tu meri sherni hai na..?Dekh mere taraf..?

[Veera..You are my tigress aren't you..?Look at me..?]"He said in a husky voice,that sent liquid thrills running up and down her sensitive nerves..

Slowly she opened her large beautiful eyes,and looked into his dark ones..Baldev took in along shattered breath,as his body heated up some more..

Droplets of rain water on her beautiful face,made him even more eager to..

He took in another raspy breath..

He wanted to see her hair..

Slowly he raised his hand and untied her hair that was tied at her crown..Taking out the clips one by one,and throwing them on the ground..

And then finally when he had removed them,he let her hair fall..Wild soft,long,dark,thick locks fell all around her beautiful face and entangled his fingers in their silky seductive web..

Baldev breathed heavily,his heart thudding like a maddened thing,as he knelt down and nuzzled her hair,drowning in its beautiful fragrance,that were driving him insane and making him crave for more.

His hand still held hers trapped,while with the other,he raised her chin up,and started kissing her throat..Licking at the drops of rainwater that glistened on her milky soft skin..

She shivered out,making his body harden and heat up in response..

Like a drugged man,drowning in her seductive fragrance,he moved his lips along her throat..

"Baldev.." She moaned out softly,making his blood sing..

The rain was increasing in intensity and so was their passion and need for each other..

Baldev let go of her hands,and held her waist with the same hand..

She was breathing heavily and looking at him with glazed wide eyes..

Baldev's hand tightened round her waist,as thunder rumbled above them again,as if reflecting their own stormy emotions.

A drop of rain water fell on her soft rosy lips,and Baldev's eyes fell on it..The tiny drop glistening on her rosy full bottom lip,was asking him to..

Before he could think further,his mouth swooped down on hers,sucking and licking on her full bottom lip..Making her gasp and moan out against his mouth..

But Baldev knew he could not stop now,as he kissed her with all the need and desire,all the hunger and yearning that had been building up within him for some days now..

His hand on her waist found the slip between her top and skirt,and touched her soft warm naked skin,making her gasp out against his hot mouth and lean onto him,while his other hand crushed her silky soft hair,pulling her head closer to his.

Baldev's blood soared and sang with endless pleasure,as he sucked and nibbled and licked at her lips..

Veera's hand clung to the front of his kurta,her nails digging into his hard chest..

Baldev's hand caressed the soft sensitive skin of her waist,and gently squeezed their making her melt in his arms,and then his tongue entered her mouth,and she forgot to think altogether..

The storm intensified as one hot kiss was followed by another hotter kiss,and her moans were followed by his deep husky groans..They got lost in each other,in the passion their need had created..

Finally an eternity later,he pulled his mouth off hers,and breathing heavily,stared down at her glazed eyes..She was breathless just like him..

His eyes taking in her swollen lips,her rosy cheeks,and her satisfyingly messed up condition which were the compliment of his handiwork.

A smile came on his lips,as he knelt her forehead against hers,and softly kissed the top of her nose tenderly..

His hands circled round her waist tightly,crushing her soft pliant body completely against his hard one.

"Aab to tainu yakeen ho gayi hai na..?Ki tu sirf aur sirf mera hai..!Iss Sher ke liye sirf ek hi Sherni hai puri duniya wich..Aur wo hai tu-meri Veera...!

[Now you believe it don't you..?That you are only mine..!There is only ony one tigress for this tiger in the entire world..And that's you-My Veera..!] "He said in a husky voice,his eyes still burning hot..

His fingers brushed her swollen lips tenderly..

"Now that I have marked you as mine..!No one can take you away from me..No one!!!I'll fight the entire world and even God himself to get you now..!"He whispered huskily,just before his lips once again captured hers for a long passionate kiss..

And Veera sighed out in satisfaction,as his mouth again claimed hers,and readily melted in his tight hot embrace..

The storm outside had stopped,but the storm inside the lone couple kissing each other to oblivion had just started..

The dark night had been colored with splashes of their new found feelings for each other and blossoming love..

An owl hooted somewhere far,but the couple was lost in each other and their passionate kisses only..Lost..In the heat of the night..

*******~THE END~******

OS-2:LOVE FOUND ITS WAY,page-17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100970309

Wowww yaar awesome update... Lekin finale kyun kiya itni jaldi... I love ur writing style... Keep writing and make us fall for VeeBa more n more...

Just 4 parts...No...😭