VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113..

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Very hot veeba moments...

There kiss is so sansesnal...

Very romantic update...

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Princy

@princy48

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

huh...one more breath taking update❤️...luvd ur writing yaar..

bt u ended it...okay then..keep up the gud wrk..waitin 4 amazing writings lyk these 4m u..tfs

Edited by princy48 - 11 years ago

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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Emergency Emergency extreme heat overload 😳😳 Loved it 😳😉 Thanks for the pm dear 👏

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Kehkelungi

@Poohjabear

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Hotness ☺️ !!! Lovely OS yaar ! Love your writing style 👏👍🏼 And Ballu 😳☺️

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

This was HOT HOT HOT☺️ ☺️😆😆 !! Loved the heated kissfull😉 encounter of sher n Sherni hehe !! The rain simply added the extra tadka to the already scorching heated scene !! Sigh..didn't wanted the update to end at all lol !! Awesome job, Tehsina 😛😛...

Now waiting for an equally hot new fic from you ASAP heheh...loved it to the core 😉 !!

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desikahani

@desikahani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Very beautifully written!! Egg u on for more of your work :) really look forward to more of your work and updates .

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Wow!!!
I thought Id sign on and see what's up...I read this while sitting for breakfast...suffice it to say my breakfast is still sitting here untouched!

Amazing update!!! What a finale!!! How will I concentrate on work now is beyond me lol!

I'm sad this ended but I'm excited to see what you write next!

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

very very very very verygoood...

such an amazing writer u r👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

when u were describing abt ballu's anger in the 1st part i was having all the feeling's that veera was going through,ur writing have such an impact on the readers,thax a ton,love u...🤗🤗🤗