VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113..

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Anupama

@prem_diwani

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

☺️ awesome... i can imagine baldevs temper in the episode would ultimately erupt this way... possessive, caring n PASSIONATE

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Totally awesome...i hope u can come up with another Veeba ...thanks 4 pm

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Amazing OS!!Very romatic!!Continue With another Romantic OS...waiting eagerly for your OS/SS/FF!!

Please try to write an romantic SS!!

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Nicely written. Can see baldevs passion and anger causing a result like this, obviously will never see it ob an Indian show. Maybe u can write a story where the tables are turned and veera is the angry passionate one.

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

WOW!!! Really HOT update!!😳

Luvd baldev's confession!!!

Beautiful ending!! Loved it!!!

Luv ur style of writing!!

Thnx 4 d pm!!

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Wow...*fans herself*...that was one hott...explosive finish!!!

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5
Lovely update

Thank u! 😛

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: monumolu
Wowww yaar awesome update... Lekin finale kyun kiya itni jaldi... I love ur writing style... Keep writing and make us fall for VeeBa more n more...

Dis one was a OS so da finale! 😃 But dnt u worry many more wil be forced onto u! My stupid writings! 😉 😆