VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 52

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[NOTE:Hi friends!I guess most of u have read dis in da OS contest..But if u did not dnt forget to press da like button and comment!😛I am just adding it in my OS collection..😳]

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*~SHARING IS CARING..~*

The sky loomed darker and darker with signs of the upcoming storm..

No one was about except one lone figure,who sat by the now dark fields,staring up at the thunder flashing sky..

Baldev seeped from the alcohol bottle,as pain gnawed at his senses..

Numerous broken bottles were fallen in a heap close by him..And yet went on getting drunk..Trying to drown his pain and insult in the intoxicating drink..But to no avail..

Today he had faced to bitterest realities in his life..

Primarily he had lost the Sarpaanch election to Ranvi,and that also by a huge insulting margin..

Secondly,and strangely the most painful realization was when he overheard Veera talking to her friend on phone..She had been saying that she had been deliberately acting to be in love with him,to get rid of him for good..!

Rage had took over his entire being,blinding his vision,when he had walked upto a surprised Veera and declared he officially had broken up with her.And then pain tore him apart,at the sight of jubilation on her face,that she tried to hide instantaneously,but it did not escape his razor shape eyes.

With a sneer he took another long sip from the bottle,as the thunder sound became louder..

It seemed God was reflecting the turbulence of pain in him through the weather.

How could Veera do this to him?!!

He closed his eyes to the strange pain that clogged his brain and being.

His nostrils flared as he got flashbacks of the beautiful times he had spent with her,and now he had to face the bitter reality that it was all a dream..A DREAM!!!A nightmare more like it!His heart squeezed painfully once again.

Angrily he wiped off a stray tear that had appeared at the corner of his eyes,and again took a long swig from his alcohol bottle.

Why the hell wasn't he getting drunk senseless?!!By now he should be drunk senseless shouldn't he?!

He stared into the bottle in confusion,before he took another swig from it.

Suddenly a subtle noise from behind him made his ears perk up in alertness.

Was he hallucinating or was that the sound of anklets tinkling..?!He could smell a very familiar sweet scent,that teased at his nostrils..He was hallucinating for sure!!!

How could anyone or least of all She be out in this dark stormy night?!!

The noise stopped just behind him..

And suddenly Baldev had a thought,as his eyes widened in realization.

He had heard of ghosts roaming around in stormy nights..Could it be..

He gulped down a knot of discomfort,as goosebumps rose at the back of his neck..

Was he sitting under some haunted tree?!

He was even afraid to look up..

Strong wind whistled at the leaves of nearby trees,and made the apparition's ornament jingle..

What was it he was supposed to pray when such encounters took place,to save himself..?

He cursed his stupidity for sending Billa and Jaggi away..!Now if they were here with him then-..

"Baldeva..?"He went rigid as he felt the thing's hand on his shoulder..

Oh God what should he do?!Should he scream for help?!

"Baldeva suun?!

[Baldeva listen?!]"The thing squeezed harder,and suddenly Baldev felt a familiar warmth seep in though his shirt..

This only happened to him whenever She touched him..!

Instantly he whirled round,and right there Veera was standing,with the most innocent guilty look on her face.

Baldev stood up within seconds,as rage took over his entire being.He hated the way his heart started beating whenever she came close to him,even now!

He took a step back putting some distance between himself and her..

"Tu iththe kiu ayi hai?!Mere jale pe namak chirak ne?!

[Why did you come here?!To sprinkle salt on my wound?!]"He gritted out through angry clenched teeth.

Veera shook her head,and took another step towards him extending her hand towards him..

Baldev instantly stepped back,but suddenly he noticed a wrapped up box in her extended hand..

"Tere liye cake layi thi main..

[I had brought cake for you..]"She said in a hesitant small voice.

Instantly his fury rose by leaps and bounds..

"Cake?Kiu?!Mere haar ki jashn manane ke liye?!!

[Cake?Why?!To celebrate my failure?!!]"He gritted out,his anger nearly blinding him.

"Baldeva tu mainu galat samajh rahi hai-..

[Baldeva you are getting me wrong-..]"Veera tried to hold his arm,but instantly Baldev pushed her away and turned to leave..

"OUCH!!!"

Her exclamation of pain,made him stop in his track,and instantly turn towards her.

"Veera tu thik hai na?!

[Veera are you alright?!]"

Slowly she raised her face to stare at him,and the sight that greeted him would have made him burst into laughter,if he was not so worried and also in a sour mood..

The packet of cake with the cake in it was now destroyed,as Veera had fallen flat on it..And the entire chocolate cream was now smeared on Veera's face.

He quickly went and sat close to her where she had fallen onto the ground.

The thunder light flashed again giving him a glimpse of her wobbly lips and glazy eyes.

His heart squeezed as he realized she was at the brink of tears.

"Mainu..mainu maaf karde Veera..!Tu..tu ro maat!Tainu bauhot dard ho rahi hai ki?

[Forgive..Forgive me Veera..!Don't..Don't cry!You are in lots of pain,are you?]"

Baldev was not sure how to reassure her,and yet at the same time he did not know why,but he felt like cuddling her in his arms and protecting her..

Her lips wobbled dangerously again,and baldev felt his hear squeeze once again.

"Cake..Pura cake kharaab ho gaya!Main tere liye kinne pyaar se layi thi-..

[Cake..The whole cake has been destroyed!I brought this for with s much love-..]"She suddenly drifted off,when she realized what she was saying..

A warm glow started spreading through Baldev's insides at her words.Forgotten were his earlier rage and fury at her..

"Mera matlab..Matalb tainu khilane ke liye-..

[I mean..I mean to feed you-..]"She looked away..

Suddenly Baldev pulled her into his lap,surprising her.

"Baldeva tu ki-..

[Baldeva what are you-..]"

Veera drifted off,as Baldev suddenly swept a finger across her cream mashed cheek,and looking into her eyes,he placed the finger into his mouth..Gently sucking the chocolate cream..

Veera felt her heart thud crazily at the act,and her body warmed up fast..

And then he had taken another another dollop of cream off her face,and extended the finger to her mouth.

Questioningly she looked at him,when he gave his magical seductive smile at her,taking her breath away with the warmth and beauty of it.

"Mere liye layi hai to kya sirf main hi khaunga?!Mil baatke khate hai..!Wo angreji main kehte hai na..Sha..Shaaring-..

[You have brought it for me,so does it mean only I will eat?!Let's share it..!What is it called in English..Sha..Shaaring-..]"

Veera took his finger in her mouth and gently sucked the cream away with erotic sweeping movements of her tongue and lips.

"Sharing is caring.."She said softly,looking into his eyes,that reflected the fire burning in his..

Thunder loomed closer,and suddenly it seemed both were trapped in a spell.

And before Veera could blink,Baldev had lowered his face to hers,and was licking away the cream smeared across her face..

And then finally when his lips claimed hers,Veera felt her heart burst with the joy of it.As his firm male lips moved over hers, she kissed him back with all the pent up emotions within her..

He tasted of heat,warmth,chocolate,and something that tasted even more delicious..He tasted of love..

As his lips sucked and nibbled and kissed her mouth with intense passion,the sky burst open and drowned them in its torrential rain,and yet they went on kissing..

Veera suddenly realized that she really cared for this BEWAKOOF(STUPID) of hers...Who only did stupid things to impress her..And this time she truly realized,she cared a lot for him..Maybe she had fallen in love with him..

His lips moved hungrily than ever on hers,and he pulled her closer to his hard body,making her moan out,as she felt her wet rain soaked body plaster to his wet one..

Today Veera had finally understood the meaning of the saying SHARING IS CARING..And all thanks to her Baldeva..Yes only HER Baldeva..

She hugged him back tight,and returned his kiss with afresh eagerness..After all they were sharing their first kiss..And SHARING IS CARING..

Hai ki nai?!!😉😈


*~Passion,Paradise and Poland..!!!~*

Part-1,page-85:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108176624




Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful..sharing is caring 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow. . . awsome update. . .really sharing is caring. .loved it.
Edited by vinnithelover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
[NOTE:NIkki dis one is for u!And Muna u too!And of crs alda Veeba fans!🤗Hope I am not too late though!😆U get it Nikki right!😉Here I go..Dnt forget to give me ur views and comments guys!Love ya!🤗❤️]

INDEX:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100607096


~*Passion,Paradise and Poland..!!!*~

Part-1.

Baldev stretched his arms as he stood outside the airport..

He breathed in the air..

A car drove past nearby making him open his eyes..

"Aarey waah!Baldev Singh!Tu akhir videsh pauch hi gaya!Hai ki nai?!

[Wow!Baldev Singh!You finally reached a foreign country!Right?!]He chuckled happily to himself.

"BALDEVA!!!Kiththe hai tu?!Jaldi aa!

[BALDEVA!!!Where are you?!Come fast!]"An all familiar voice called out to him,breaking into his happy trance.

He made a face as he turned towards the source of the voice.

"AAA RAHA HU!!!THORA THANDAK RAKH!!Ye bhootni se mera picha nai chorne wala itti jaldi se!

[I AM COMING!!!HOLD YOUR HORSES!!This bhootni won't leave me so soon!]"He grumbled,as he walked to where Veera stood beside their combined luggage.

Veera was lost in thoughts of the farmer when she noticed Baldev grinning from ear to ear,and staring at a group of polish girls,as theor car drove by them.

She gave him a hard push with her elbow.

"UFF!Ei ki tha Veera?!Videsh pauch gayi tu par teri badtameezi khatam nai huyi abhi taak?!

[UFF!What was this Veera?!You have reached a foreign country but your bad manner has not ended?!]"He frowned angrily at her,as he massaged his ribs where she had just hit him.

"Aise besharam ki tarha ladkiyon ko ghurne ko kya tameez kehte hai,oye?!Aise data dikhata rahega to saari ladkiyan aiweiei bhaag jaegi!

[Is it called good manner to stare at girls like this?!If you keep on shpwing your teeth like this,the girls will run away no matter what!]"

"To tainu pata hai in videshi ladkiyon ko kaise patana parega..?Mainu bhi sikhana?

[So you know how these foreign girls should be impressed..?So teach me too?]"The last part of his sentence was said in a whisper,as he moved his face a bit closer to her.

Veera suddenly felt warm all over..

Her eyes were held by his dark ones for some time..And she felt something happen to her just then..She inhaled a short sharp breath,as his eyes suddenly lowered to her lips,and her lips started tingling for no reason at all..Finally when he looked up into her eyes again,Veera felt her stomach muscles clench,like it usually did whenever he gave her those dark intense looks..

Her heart was racing fast,her breathing quickened..The smile had faded from his face,and was replaced by a haunting strange look..The same look that make her go hot and cold all over at the same time..

"Dost hai na tu mera..?

[You are my friend aren't you..?]"His words sounded deliciously husky,and was going to be her undoing soon,she was sure.

She inhaled a steadying breath, rolled her eyes at him and quickly looked away..

Why did this guy have this strange effect n her?!

She wondered irritatedly as she looked at the passing scenery and tried to concentrate on it..

Baldev looked away too..

He had just lost control just then..

Anyways she was just his friend,and he could always share his prospective girl friends or wife with her,couldn't he..?

He reassured himself,that all was well,and decided to enjoy the ride to the hotel..After all it was not every day that handsome young man landed in a foreign country..!

After placing their luggage in the hotel Veera and Baldev had come out for a little sightseeing,and have their lunch as well.

It was while they were sitting at a table,waiting for their ordered food, in a roadside cafe,when Veera's patience broke..

Baldev wolf whistled loudly,making her turn and stare at what he was whistling at..

A couple of Polish girl in the skimpiest miniskirts and tight tops were getting into a car parked by the cafe..

The girls stared at Baldev and giggled as they got in the car,and sending him flying kisses drove away..

"BALDEVA!!!"Veera snapped out,pulling him by the collar of his jacket..

It was an instant reaction,but she realised too late that it was a mistake..

She had not done pulling him,when his chair overturned,and he fell right on top of her,making her lose her balance and fall down too..

Breathing heavily,she looked up into his dark eyes,as he lay half on top of her,and half on the pavement..

Part-2,page-88:/forum/ek-veer-ki-ardaas-veera/3905904/veeba-os-col-os-12-a-midnight-rendezvous-pg113



Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res😈 Unres!
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Aww, you wrote this OS for us! Thank you so much!🤗

So Veera is jealous! And baldev is staring at polish girls!😆

Can't wait for more updates! Continue soon! Please write more then 3 parts!pls!😃
Edited by DazzilerDizzy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great... OS for this wonderful trip to Poland occasion😳
Loved it! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow a new os on veeba
Love you dude for writing so much on veeba
And loved this update too
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Posted: 11 years ago
Veera's confession n Baldev's reaction n dialogues were too good.Kiss was very sweet.proposal was sweet.Sirf pappiyan se to kaam nai chalegi na..? was funny n cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
os on Poland track.cool.liked veera getting jealous.girls r impressed by baldev?
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely. . .
continue soon.
and thanks for the pm
Edited by vinnithelover - 11 years ago

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