VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 11

Originally posted by: athirakt

good update

Thank u! 😛

Originally posted by: princy48

huh...one more breath taking update❤️...luvd ur writing yaar..

bt u ended it...okay then..keep up the gud wrk..waitin 4 amazing writings lyk these 4m u..tfs

Thank u so much! 😛 Will ofcrs kip on writing. .By nw u must have understood m addicted to writing! 😆

Originally posted by: tamzin43

Emergency Emergency extreme heat overload😳😳Loved it😳😉Thanks for the pm dear👏

😆 Wasn't really dt hot. 😳 Was it..? 😉 Thank u so much! ! Always love ur comments nd luk forward to dm! 🤗

Originally posted by: ST0207

Hotness ☺️!!! Lovely OS yaar ! Love your writing style👏👍🏼And Ballu😳☺️

Thank u so much buddy! 🤗

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

This was HOT HOT HOT😆!! Loved the heated kissfull😉encounter of sher n Sherni hehe !! The rain simply added the extra tadka to the already scorching heated scene !! Sigh..didn't wanted the update to end at all lol !! Awesome job, Tehsina😛😛...

Now waiting for an equally hot new fic from you ASAP heheh...loved it to the core😉!!

New fictions r all on da way! Just u wait buddy! 😆 Thank u so much! 🤗

p.s. I forgot to add I always love nd luk forward to ur awesome comments buddy! 😉

Originally posted by: desikahani

Very beautifully written!! Egg u on for more of your work :) really look forward to more of your work and updates .

Thank u so much sweetheart! 🤗 I will update nd kip writn more as long as u all kip commentn! 😆 Thank u so much for always cheern me wid ur awesome comments! Always mks my day nd mks my fingers move! 😉

Originally posted by: piya05

I m speechless yaar

😲 Hope dtz on a positive light! 😳 😆 Thank u sweetheart! 😛

Originally posted by: sunny303

Wow!!!
I thought Id sign on and see what's up...I read this while sitting for breakfast...suffice it to say my breakfast is still sitting here untouched!

Amazing update!!! What a finale!!! How will I concentrate on work now is beyond me lol!

I'm sad this ended but I'm excited to see what you write next!

😳 Thank u sooo much! 😃Ur comment jst md my day too! 🤗 I hope u kip on readn nd givn such awesome comments nd ofcrs I'll kip writn more! 😉

wowww Angry baldev ahhh died:D
loving d update totally !

Baldev lost himself seeing Veera in traditional outfit.Seeing Karan touching her he broke d glass in anger n hurt himself.Veera is only his.how will Veera react 2 this?