VeeBa- Aur chaabhi kho jaaye ;) Pg-6 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me= Dazzler 😃. Usi khushi me i have written this funny OS on VeeBa.
Sorry for errors and mistakes...
enjoy...😆

(Veera, Gunjan, Ranvi and Baldev are alone at Baldev's house, since their guardians are out of pind 😆 for a marriage.)

(awesome foursome are sitting in the dinning room)

Baldev( irritated.)- mainu ki pata tha ki tum dono bhi itthe aa maroge... varna mai bhi chala jaata beeji ke saath...🤢.
Veera- oye! hoye! sahi kaha tune... tujhe toh beeji ke bina humse darr lagta hai na... beeji ke puttar...😛.
Bladev- muh band rakh veera... ye mera ghar hai.😡

Ranvi- bohot ho gaya tum dono ka... abb shaanti se yaha baitho... mai gunjan nu uski dost ke yaha chadne jaa raha hoon...
Baldev- 😲 oye mai marr gaya hoon ki??

Veera- nahi toh... marr gaye hote toh abb tak mai duniya ko party na de chuki hoti ...😛.
Baldev- 😡.

Gunjan- veer jee... meri dost nu na, ranvi se kuch kaam hai... isiliye vo chal raha hai mere saath.
Baldev- abb usnu ranvi se ki kaam hai???😕😕😕.
Veera- haan veer jee... aapse ki kaam hai?😕
Gunjan- abb savaal nai... mai jaa rahi hoon... chal ranvi.😊
(they leave)

veera+baldev= 😲.

Veera- eh ho ki raha hai? 😕
Baldev- vahi toh mai bhi socchuu... in dono ke beech aakhir chal ki raha hai...😕
Veera- hmmm pata lagaana padega baldevv... kahi.. gunjan didi meri bhabhi na bann jaaye!!!! 😆😆😛.

(Baldev gets up from where he was sitting and charges towards veera)
Baldev- chup kar! meri behen di shaadi kabhi mai uss ranvi ke saath nai hone doonga.. samjhi!!!😡.

Veera( getting and up facing him)- kyu?? ki kharaabi hai mere veer jee me...????😡
Baldev- oye accha ki hai usme??😆

Veera- 😡😡😡 i will kill you baldevv...

(Just then the light goes off 😉😆)
Veera- baldevvv...!!!!!!😕
(she grabs him tightly.)
Baldevv- oye! chadd mainu... 😕

veera- lights ko ki hoya baldevv... kuch karr!!!!😕😕😕

Baldev- hmmm sheher jaake tu bigad gayi hai ye toh mainu pata tha... lekin inni jaada bigad gayi hai ye nahi pata tha 😉

Veera- oye matlab?😕

Baldev( holding her chin as if she is a child)- oye matlab... tu akeli ek ghar wich battiyaan bujhne parr keh rahi hai , vo bhi ek ladke se, ki 'batiyaan bujh gayi hai... kuch karo' 😆😆😆.

Veera- baldevvv abb dekh mai ki karti hoon...😡.

(they start a tom and jerry race, in the whole house, even with no lights they were able to chase each other.)
(finally baldev is alone and veera is nowhere to be found)
Baldev- veera... veera... kitthe marr gayi tu????😕😆.
(with no reply, he grows tensed.)
Baldev- veera...😕😕😕.

(he roams about and finally reaches the door of a room. veera's voice is coming from that room)
Veera- baldevv!!!!! darvazaa lock ho gaya hai.. nikaal mainu yaha se!!!!!
Baldev- 🤣.
Veera- baldevv😡😡 tu hass raha hai????
Baldev- gadhi!!! phass gayi na andar... oye ye kamra aisa hi hai... darvaaja kharaab hai iska... andar se band ho jaaye toh bahar se kisi ko chabhi se hi kholna padta hai 😆😆😆.
Veera- toh ki mere chudail banke tujhe aadesh dene ka wait karr raha hai??? JAA JAAKE CHAABHI LAA!!😡.

(baldev laughs all along and brings the keys to open the door. when he opens the door he finds veera sitting on the floor afraid.)
Baldev- 🤣 😆.
Veera- teri toh baldevv... tu abhi bhi hass raha hai.. yaha andhere me meri haalat kharaab ho rakhi thi... chal abb bahar... khotyaa!!🤢
(veera starts to go out and just then the door gets closed due to strog wind. they are locked again.)
Veera- 😲. baldevv... eh ki hoya???😲😲...
Baldev- 🤣 phir se lock...😆.
(Veera charges to him and grabs hi collar)
Baldev- 😲😲 ki hoya??? makeup utar raha hai ki? inne gusse me kyu hai???😆
Veera- bakwaas band karr baldev...!!! abb hum bahar kaise jaayenge???
Baldev- arre tu bhi na.. darrti bohot jyaada hai.. abhi mai apne naukar ko phone karke bulaata hoon, vo apne kamre wich hoga... vo aake khol dega bahar se...😆.

Veera- Thank God.!🤢

(Baldev calls his servant.)
Baldev- oye! kaka... zaraa upar vo store room ki chabbiyaan laake khol diyo kamraa...😆
kaka- jee sahab, chabhiyaan kaha hai?
Baldev- aur kaha hongi... mere paas hai...😆😆.
(he cuts the call)
Veera- Baldevv😡😡😡
Baldev- ki??😆😆😆
Veera- chabhiyaan kaha hai????😡😡😡
Baldev- mere paas hai...😆😆😆

(Veera looks at him with straight face)

Baldev- mere paas hai oye ki gal hai??😆 😕 arre baap re baap...chabhiyaan mere paas hain???😲 abb ki karenge...😲
Veera- hayo rabba... mai kitthe phass gayi 😭.

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kaisa tha guyz...???? plzz comment karna...😳😳😳. next part shaayad aaj hi update karr doon...😊
PS- mai dazzler ban gayi ... partyyy 😳😳😳

Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks a lot fr the comment..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!! Nice post... 😆😆😆...Am missin Veeba during weekends...😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadollar

OMG!!!! Nice post... 😆😆😆...Am missin Veeba during weekends...😭😭

me too... 😭😭😭...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh god.. i laughed so much... cant tell u.. lol rim please write funny OS.. read too many romantic ones.. this was classic seriously..😆
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Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

me too... 😭😭😭...


Rite now am watchin friday's hilarious episode...😆😆😆 and Baldev's fight with that man who was teasin veera...Just couldn get over his expressions when veera fell near him & he cries beeji...🤣..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: namratavyas

oh god.. i laughed so much... cant tell u.. lol rim please write funny OS.. read too many romantic ones.. this was classic seriously..😆

ok NJ, next time i will pm u 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadollar


Rite now am watchin friday's hilarious episode...😆😆😆 and Baldev's fight with that man who was teasin veera...Just couldn get over his expressions when veera fell near him & he cries beeji...🤣..

oye! me watched that epi 10 times already 😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow rimi it was hilarious kahan se aate hain aise ideas tumhe
and congrats dear now u r a dazzler
Edited by SONAL30 - 11 years ago

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