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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-2
(so the chaabhi is lost and baldev and veera are locked up inside. they are sitting at the two corners of the room)
Baldev- beeji... kabb aaoge aap?😕
Veera- haan tu yahi karr.. baith ke apni beeji nu yaad kar...!!!! aur kuch toh kar nahi sakta.😡
Baldev- accha... toh ki karoon mai? filmo ke hero ki tarah naachoon??😡
Veera- hero sirf naachte hain ki? kabhi-kabhi darvaaza bhi kholne ka tareeka nikaalte hain! hai na mahaan film critic baldevv??😡
Baldev- cricket? oye tu 'Lagaan' film ki baat karr rahi hai ki?
Veera- aaahhh!!!!!!😡😡😡
Baldev- accha mai darvaaza todne ki koshish karta hoon.
Veera- arre vaah baldevv... inni akal kab se aa gayi tujhme? 16 somvaar ka vrat rakha tha kya?
Baldev- tu na jaake fevicol khaa le... din bhar muh chalaati rehti hai...!
(veera just rolls her eyes and baldev goes to break the door. he tries his best and the door cracked a bit... but... suddenly he recalled something)
**Flashback****
Bansuri- baldevv... puttar... ghar ki koi bhi cheez na tootni nai chahiye... theek hai...😊
Balwant- inne pyaar se ki samjha rahi hai... keh de ki mai rakh ke doonga ke kaan ke neeche agar ghar ka kuch bhi nuksaan kiya toh.!!!!😡
**Flashback ends**
Baldev- 😕... nai.. mai eh nai kar sakta...
Veera(getting up)- oye ki hoya... tod na darvaaza...!!!
Baldev- nahi.. mai nai tod raha...
Veera- kyu?
Baldev- mere ghar ka darvaaza hai.. mainu nai todna.. bass!!!!
Veera-... baldevv!!!!😡
Baldev- accha ruk... ek tareeka hai. iss kamre ki ek aur chaabhi hai ... vo gunjan ko pata hogi...vo jaise hi aa jayegi vo kamraa khol degi...
Veera- huh!! thank God... abb jaldi se unhe call karke bata do.
Baldev- theek hai.
(Baldev calls gunjan but she tells him that due to fog, the roads are blocked and it will take time for her to reach back. so VeeBa have to wait.).
.
.
.
(It has been 2 hours now and Veera and baldev's distance has reduced a bit. The night is growing dark.)
(both of them are nearly asleep, tired of waiting)
(suddenly veera hears a noice)
veera- kaun hai?😕
(no response, she looks at baldev who is asleep)
Veera- kaun hai???
(she hears weird sounds... again and again.)
Veera- bachaaaooo!!!! bachaaaoo!!!!
(Baldev gets up and runs to her.)
Baldev- ki hoya veera? ki hoya???😕😕
Veera- Baldevv...😭
(she hugs him tight)
Veera- baldevv.. yaha kuch hai... bhoot hai shaayad!!!!!
Baldev- 😆 oye tereko mere se gale lagne ka aur koi bahaana nahi mila??😆
Veera- (breaking the hug and pushing him back)- baldevv...😡😡😡 mai yaha dari huyi hoon... mujhe ajeeb si avaaze aa rahi hai...
(Baldev was busy making fun of it, when suddenly he too hears a weird sound...)
Baldev- 😕 oye... sach me.. mainu bhi kuch sunaai diya... ki ho sakta hai...
(They suddenly hear a loud song- Gumnaam hai koi... )
Baldev- bhaaagooo!!!!!!!
Veera- kya?? haan?? bhaagooo!!!!!
(They start running across the room... the song is going on... suddenly veera stops and makes baldev stop as well)
Veera- baldevv! baldevv! ruk!!! soch!! soch ye kaun gaa rahi hai??pata laga...
Baldev- koi chudail hi hogi yaar...
Veera- uffo!!!! toh kaha se aayi chudail yahaan??
Baldev- mainu ki pata usi se poooch le...
Veera- shut up! ye voice iss gaane ki original singer ki hi hai.. yaani ye song kahi play ho raha hai.

(they search for the voice, and finally they feel it is coming from somewhere below a big carton. )
Baldev- veera matt uthaana ye baksaa...
Veera- haan mainu bhi darr lag raha hai..
Baldev- ruk mai uthaata hoon...😕
(Baldev slowly picks up the catron)
Baldev- 😲😲😲AAA
Veera - kya huaaa?????
Baldev- 😆🤣
Veera- ki hoya?😕
Baldev- arre ek chuha radio ke upar chal raha tha, isiliye aisi avaaze aur gaana bajne laga...😆
Veera- 😆😆😆 thank God! sab theek hai!

Precap:- VeeBa listening to radio. song playing- Hum tum.. ek kamre me band ho... aur chaabhi kho jaaye...😉.
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i wrote that really quick ... huff!!! sorry fr any mistakes and if it was boring then so sorry ... i haven't rechecked it so sorry for errors.. and blunders if any..
PS- sorry if i forgot to pm some1 i really don't have much time.. forgive me plzz...
don't forget to drop a comment and hit a like...😳
Rimi❤️
Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Heheh awesome!!!! Looking fwd to the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

Part-2
(so the chaabhi is lost and baldev and veera are locked up inside. they are sitting at the two corners of the room)
Baldev- beeji... kabb aaoge aap?😕
Veera- haan tu yahi karr.. baith ke apni beeji nu yaad kar...!!!! aur kuch toh kar nahi sakta.😡
Baldev- accha... toh ki karoon mai? filmo ke hero ki tarah naachoon??😡
Veera- hero sirf naachte hain ki? kabhi-kabhi darvaaza bhi kholne ka tareeka nikaalte hain! hai na mahaan film critic baldevv??😡
Baldev- cricket? oye tu 'Lagaan' film ki baat karr rahi hai ki?
Veera- aaahhh!!!!!!😡😡😡
Baldev- accha mai darvaaza todne ki koshish karta hoon.
Veera- arre vaah baldevv... inni akal kab se aa gayi tujhme? 16 somvaar ka vrat rakha tha kya?
Baldev- tu na jaake fevicol khaa le... din bhar muh chalaati rehti hai...!
(veera just rolls her eyes and baldev goes to break the door. he tries his best and the door cracked a bit... but... suddenly he recalled something)
**Flashback****
Bansuri- baldevv... puttar... ghar ki koi bhi cheez na tootni nai chahiye... theek hai...😊
Balwant- inne pyaar se ki samjha rahi hai... keh de ki mai rakh ke doonga ke kaan ke neeche agar ghar ka kuch bhi nuksaan kiya toh.!!!!😡
**Flashback ends**
Baldev- 😕... nai.. mai eh nai kar sakta...
Veera(getting up)- oye ki hoya... tod na darvaaza...!!!
Baldev- nahi.. mai nai tod raha...
Veera- kyu?
Baldev- mere ghar ka darvaaza hai.. mainu nai todna.. bass!!!!
Veera-... baldevv!!!!😡
Baldev- accha ruk... ek tareeka hai. iss kamre ki ek aur chaabhi hai ... vo gunjan ko pata hogi...vo jaise hi aa jayegi vo kamraa khol degi...
Veera- huh!! thank God... abb jaldi se unhe call karke bata do.
Baldev- theek hai.
(Baldev calls gunjan but she tells him that due to fog, the roads are blocked and it will take time for her to reach back. so VeeBa have to wait.).
.
.
.
(It has been 2 hours now and Veera and baldev's distance has reduced a bit. The night is growing dark.)
(both of them are nearly asleep, tired of waiting)
(suddenly veera hears a noice)
veera- kaun hai?😕
(no response, she looks at baldev who is asleep)
Veera- kaun hai???
(she hears weird sounds... again and again.)
Veera- bachaaaooo!!!! bachaaaoo!!!!
(Baldev gets up and runs to her.)
Baldev- ki hoya veera? ki hoya???😕😕
Veera- Baldevv...😭
(she hugs him tight)
Veera- baldevv.. yaha kuch hai... bhoot hai shaayad!!!!!
Baldev- 😆 oye tereko mere se gale lagne ka aur koi bahaana nahi mila??😆
Veera- (breaking the hug and pushing him back)- baldevv...😡😡😡 mai yaha dari huyi hoon... mujhe ajeeb si avaaze aa rahi hai...
(Baldev was busy making fun of it, when suddenly he too hears a weird sound...)
Baldev- 😕 oye... sach me.. mainu bhi kuch sunaai diya... ki ho sakta hai...
(They suddenly hear a loud song- Gumnaam hai koi... )
Baldev- bhaaagooo!!!!!!!
Veera- kya?? haan?? bhaagooo!!!!!
(They start running across the room... the song is going on... suddenly veera stops and makes baldev stop as well)
Veera- baldevv! baldevv! ruk!!! soch!! soch ye kaun gaa rahi hai??pata laga...
Baldev- koi chudail hi hogi yaar...
Veera- uffo!!!! toh kaha se aayi chudail yahaan??
Baldev- mainu ki pata usi se poooch le...
Veera- shut up! ye voice iss gaane ki original singer ki hi hai.. yaani ye song kahi play ho raha hai.

(they search for the voice, and finally they feel it is coming from somewhere below a big carton. )
Baldev- veera matt uthaana ye baksaa...
Veera- haan mainu bhi darr lag raha hai..
Baldev- ruk mai uthaata hoon...😕
(Baldev slowly picks up the catron)
Baldev- 😲😲😲AAA
Veera - kya huaaa?????
Baldev- 😆🤣
Veera- ki hoya?😕
Baldev- arre ek chuha radio ke upar chal raha tha, isiliye aisi avaaze aur gaana bajne laga...😆
Veera- 😆😆😆 thank God! sab theek hai!

Precap:- VeeBa listening to radio. song playing- Hum tum.. ek kamre me band ho... aur chaabhi kho jaaye...😉.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
i wrote that really quick ... huff!!! sorry fr any mistakes and if it was boring then so sorry ... i haven't rechecked it so sorry for errors.. and blunders if any..
PS- sorry if i forgot to pm some1 i really don't have much time.. forgive me plzz...
don't forget to drop a comment and hit a like...😳
Rimi❤️



🤣 🤣...OMG!!! Good one...😆😆😆 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Yaar. you're writing all the Os's with these awesome scenarios.. aur ab mere hopes bahut high ho rahe hain. aur ye sab ab show mein ni hua to khoob pitunga,🤪
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Nice part yaar continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome Rimzy ... Again very much funny and that song was really very much situational ... Love these lines

Veera- arre vaah baldevv... inni akal kab se aa gayi tujhme? 16 somvaar ka vrat rakha tha kya?
Baldev- tu na jaake fevicol khaa le... din bhar muh chalaati rehti hai...

Both r very much funny and made for each other ... Ek dooje ki baat ko na girne ni dete ... Thanks for the update and for the pm also :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
hahahahaha loved it update soon👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
hum tum ek kamre mein band ho...rofl... Awesome yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
OMG!!!! ROFL!!!!
Loved it!!!
Can't wait 4 d nxt update!!!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Lol rim. U really cracked me up. It was super good. Ha ha how i wish v get to see dis in the show

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