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hey all 😛 sabse pehli baat- kal meri birthday hai 😆 yaad hai na sabko 😕😆. isiliye meri taraf se sabko treat.. 🥳 ye fiction.
well, it's not an OS, neither an SS nor an FF, it's just my imagination for the time being. i really donno how many parts it will have, but i am just starting it now.
ALERT- this Fiction can cross the limit of hotness 😳 so beware...😆 and my feeling during imagining/writing the scenes are within curly brackets- { 😳} ...here i go...
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~VeeBa- Ishq vaali MANMARZIYAAN...<3 ~
OS-1
(Part-1)
Scene-1
(baldev in his jeep, driving rashly and in a haste.)
(he is looking tensed😕).
Baldev (thinking)- Pata nahi ki ho gaya hai veera nu? aise kaise bhaag sakti hai kahi aur?? agar use kuch ho gaya toh?... lekin mai ye sab kyu soch raha hoon?? 😡ye kya ho raha hai mujhe?? 😡
(he stops the jeep in anger.)
(he garbs the steering tightly )
Baldev- mai kyu aaya hoon yaha use dhoondhne ke vaaste? ki ho gaya hai mainu? uss kabootri ke liye mai inni mehnat karoo? aur vo bhi jo uss karan ke dhokhe ke baad ghar se bhaag gayi? bhaad me jaaye aisi ladki.!!!!😡
(he plans to reverse his jeep when he finds someone standing at the midst of the forest aside.)
(he gets down and tries to find out who that person is)
baldev- kaun hai utthe?😕
(he goes to the person and finds out that it is veera.)
(she is full on depressed.🤢)
baldev- veera... ae ki hoya? itthe ki karr rahi hai tu?
veera- baldevv.. jaa yaha se... mujhe akela chadd de.
baldev- tu toh paagal hai ye mainu pata hai, lekin mai paagal nahi hoon jo inni raat nu tenu akela chadd ke chala jaao.
veera- jaao baldev. please.
(just then baldev hears a horn from his jeep. he turns around to see that few over-smart people have stolen his jeep and they are taking it away)
baldev- dekh teri vajah se ki hoya.!😡
veera- meri vajah se nahi... teri vajah se, tu jeep lock karke kyu nai aaya? abb jaa yaha se mainu kisi se baat nai karni.😭
baldev ( grabbing her hand)- lekin mainu karni hai tujhse baat. abb mai ghar kaise jaoonga? haan? 😡
veera- bhagwaan ki daya se tere paas do pair hain, usi pe chala jaa... lekin jaa yaha se.😭
(veera takes away her hand from his grip and runs away crying.)
baldev- veeraaa... ruk!! veraaa...hatt! abb apne peeche bhagaayegi ye ladki.
(he runs behind her.{😆})
(he tries to find her everywhere in the jungle but is unable to locate her.)
baldev- kitthe marr gayi ye veera...!!!!😡😡
VOICE- " AAA"
(it was veera's voice and baldev was taken aback.)
baldev- veeraa...😲😲😲.
(he runs here n there to find out from where the voice was coming.)
baldev- kitthe hai tu veera...😕
veera's voice- itthe hoon mai...
baldev- itthe kitthe yaar??😕😕.
(he looks down to see a small and just a bit deep pit, in which veera has fallen down.)
baldev- hey bhagwaan!!!!! dekh ke nai chalte banta kya tenu?😲
veera- abb gir gayi hoon na, toh jaa yaha se, mainu lecture matt suna.🤢
baldev( extending his hands to her)- aa jaa bahar.. jaldi.
veera- nahi... mai nai aana...
baldev- oye aati hai bahar ki mai andar kood jaaon??😡
veera- nahi nahi... mai aa rahi hoon.😕😕😕.
(she gives her hand to baldev. he gently grabs it but still its a strong grip. veera feels something, something unknown. a feeling which somehow gives her a reflex to withdraw her hand, but at the same time to keep it in his hands forever...)
(baldev pulls her out, and this dis-balances veera, she is about to fall when baldev pulls her close and holds her tightly by her waist.{😳})
(they share an eyelock {}. baldev is lost in the pain in her eyes, while veera is happily shocked to see her pains reflect in baldev's eyes { it is a super sensuous eyelock😆😳☺️} .)
(time had stopped for both of them, but someone had to break the rule and speak.)
baldev ( in a whisper.)- tu theek toh hai?
veera- h...( she gets flashbacks of karan's betrayal)... NAHI!!! chadd mainu.😭😭.
(she again tries to run away, but this time, baldev grabs her arms and pulls her back.)
baldev- abb bohot ho gaya tera veera...chal mere saath ghar.
veera- kyu jaaon mai ghar? nai jaana mainu?? tere kehne pe kabse kaam karne lagi mai???😡
baldev- mere liye nahi... apne veer jee ke liye toh chal. jaanti hai...usne subah se ek daana muh me nahi daala...
(veera gets tensed😕😕)
veera- kya?😲 (she realizes how silly she had been behaving for so long)
baldev- haan... apne uss veer jee nu baare me toh soch, jisne tere vaaste na jaane...
veera- bass.. mai jaanti hoon... tu... tu lecture matt de... mai chal rahi hoon tere saath ghar. chal.
baldev- hmm.. chal...
veera- chal...
baldev- haan chal naa.. tu chalegi na aage.. mainu ki pata bahar jaane ka raasta.
veera- ki?? tenu nai pata? aur tenu aisa kyu lagta hai ki mainu pata hoga?😲
baldev- tenu bhi nai pata hai ki? 😲arre paagal, tu rote huye yaha bhaagi-bhaagi aayi na, toh tujhe hi pata hoga na rasta...😡😡.
veera- gadhe. mai toh ro rahi thi...hosh me nahi thi.. leking tu toh tha.😡😲.
baldev- abb tu apni galti nu mere matthe matt daal. samjhi.😡😡.
veera- chup! ekdum chup! abb ladne se kuch nahi hona hai. hume yaha se bahar nikalne ke liye kuch sochna hoga.
baldev-aaahh.. haan.. mai bhi yahi bolne vaala tha...
(veera rolls her eyes.)
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(VeeBa roaming in the forest, its a dark and cold night{😉}.)
baldev- kuch samajh me aaya tenu??
veera- nahi... tu chup nahi reh sakta do minute.. mai
(she turns around to see that baldev is not the usual baldev, he is in pain. he is holding his head and feeling drowsy.)
veera- baldevv... ki hoya?😲
baldev- kuch nahi veera.. tu chal aage...🤢
(Veera notices blood stains on his shirt.)
veera- baldevv!!!! 😲😲(she runs to him and checks to see that he is hurt in the upper part of his left arm near his shoulder, slightly at the back .)
veera- ye kaise hua baldevv???😲😲😲.
baldevv- vo...aaj ...vo...😕
veera- bol kuch!😕
baldev- aaj subah vo.. surjeet singh ke aadmiyo se ladai ho gayi thi toh... bass... choti si chot hai.😕
veera- kyu hui aisi ladai?😕
baldev- kuch nai...avai...
veera- avai???😡 haan??😡 sach bata mainu...
baldev ( with his cute and innocent face)- vo...tere baare me ulta seedha bol rahe the.
(veera felt something in her stomach. and she was confused. but she was blushing.)
veera-aur..aur..ye chot?😕
baldev- kuch nahi bass vo talwaar se kat gayi.
veera- talwaaar??😲😲 aur tune davaa lagaayi thi?? patti ki thi?? 😲😲.
baldev- nahi.,.. time nahi tha...😕😕.
veera- tu gadha ka gadha rahega... abb... chal mere saath kahi ruk ke teri patti karni hogi.
baldev- chadd na veera.
veera- tu chup karr...
(she holds him lovingly and finally they find a lonely hut of a woodcutter. he lives there alone with his family)
baldev-jee vo hum na kho gaye hain... toh aap saddi madat karr do jee...
woodcutter- jee?😕😕.
veera- (hitting baldev on his foot)- aapka naam ki hai?
woodcutter- jee mera naam jaswant hai, ye meri patni hai heer.
veera-arre vaah jaswant jee.. aapnu toh sach me heer mili hai...
jaswant- jee koi kaam tha aap dono nu?
veera- vo... hum dono na kho gaye hain... aur ise chot aayi hai toh...
heer- haa haa koi nai... aap log aa jaao... hum aapko subah yaha se bahar jaane me madad bhi karr denge... aa jaao aap dono andar.
(they get inside the small hut.)
(there is a very small room with a cot and a night lamp{😉}.)
heer- ye lo jee.. aap yaha ruko mai davaai leke aati hoon.
veera- jee..
(heer leaves)
veera- chal baldevv...
(she takes him to the cot and makes him sit. she sits next to him and analyses the condition of the wound.)
veera- bohot gehri chot hai baldevv.. ..
baldev- jo ghao tujhe diya hai uss sujeet singh ke bete ne... usse zyaada nahi veera.
(veera looks down, and just then heer enters with the medicines.)
heer- ye lo jee.. aap log araam karo. mai bahar hoon.. koi kaam ho toh bata dena...
veera- jee...
(heer leaves.)
veera- chal baldev... tu... tu... abbb... ahh...😕
baldev- ki hoya? 😕
veera- vo mujhe davai lagaani hai... toh tu... tu... 😕
baldev-toh mai ki karoo?? 😕
veera- tu..(she says these words fast) jab tak apna kurta nai utaarega mai kaise lagaaongi davaa?😕 {😉😳😆}
(baldev feels embarrassed for a while)
baldev (smiling and then laughing😆)- haan toh theek hai... isme inna sharma ki rahi hai...😆
veera- bakwaas band karr...
( baldev takes out his coat and then his kurta, now he is in his black vest.{ haaye raam imagine him uff mai marr gayi })
(both of them feel a bit uncomfortable but veera is keen to cure him so she starts putting medicine on his wound while baldev watches her intensely{intensely matlab BOHOT ZYAADA intensely 😳.})
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Precap- (baldev is sleeping on the cot and veera is sitting next to him applying wet cloth on his forehead as he is having fever.)
(baldev suddenly opens his eyes.)
baldev- veera... ☺️( with intense look and feeling)
(the feeling was so intense that it compelled her to stand up and she tries to go away but baldev hold her arm and pulls her to him and she falls on him {☺️ abb kya karoo mai apne inn khayaalo ka 😆})
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☺️ kaisa laga sabko? please batao... 😳 and galti ke liye maafi ..plzz...😳 and next part abb kal hi milege...😳 lekin mujhe toh pata hai ki kya hone vaala hai 😛😆😉.
plzz jaldi jaldi batao kaisa tha...😃 me waiting fr ur comments 😃😃😳.
PART-2 ON PG-3😃
OS-2 (part-1) Page 7
OS-2 (part-2) Page 10
OS-2 (part-3) Page 15
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