Ishq vaali- ~MANMARZIYAAN~ part-2Scene-1
(veera is applying medicine on baldev's wounds and he is staring her with intensity. Winds are blowing through the window. she is engrossed in applying the medicine so that it doesn't hurt baldev. But due to the breez, her hairs are coming in front, thus, troubling her.)
( baldev is lost in her, he is losing his sense seeing such a lovely and sweet side of her... her touch , her care was so ..so loving for him.)
(He unwillingly brought up his other arm and tucked veera's hairs at the back of her ear tilting his head a bit as if he was romancing her {😳}).
(Veera looked at him and realized how close he was and how sensuously he was looking at her. Although she didn't want to but she backed up a bit. which made baldev come back to his sense.)
(he backed off too)
baldev- ki hoya? tenu theek se dava bhi lagani nai aati ki?
veera- laga toh rahi hoon...
(she starts dressing his wound)
veera (whispers)- gadha.
baldev- gadhi hogi tu!!!!
veera- huh!
(she presses his wound to tease him)
baldev- aaahhh!!!!
veera- ki hoya? zor se daba diya ki??
baldev- haan!
veera- sorry sorry sorry!!! mainu maaf karr de vo main...
(baldev puts his finger on her lips)
baldev- shhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(they look at each other as if time has stopped.)
baldev- 😆😆😆. darpok kahi ki!!!! mai sher hoon sher... dard nahi hota mujhe.
veera- paagal!!!!!
(veera finishes dressing his wound. she gets out to get some water for them.)
(when she comes back she sees that baldev is lying on the bed, his eyes are closed.)
(she keeps the glass of water and goes to sit next to him.)
veera- (whisper)- baldevv...
(no response.)
veera ( hesitantly keeps her hands on his head)- baldevv?
(she suddenly jumps back as she finds his head hot.)
veera- baap re... ise toh bukhaar hai...patti karni padegi.
(baldev is in his sleep, he has no sense due to high fever. he moves his head a bit and holds veera's hands)
baldev- veera... mainu accha nahi lag raha ... haath pair dukh rahe hain...
veera(caressing his head)- kuch nahi hoga baldev... mai abhi patti karr deti hoon tujhe bukhaar hai.
(she gets up and prepares everything. then she sits next to him and applies wet clothes on his forehead.)
(After a while, veera almost slept there only in her sitting position baldev opened his eyes.)
(he saw the ultimate innocence on her face. he hands still on his forehead and she is asleep.)
baldev- veera ☺️ ...
(veera looks at him and that look on his face was more than enough for veera to feel nervous and stand up and try to run.)
(but baldev held her hand and pulled her to him. she fell on him.)
(she was lying against his stong chest. she was getting very very nervous and her heart beat was racing faster... and faster as it matched with baldev's)
(baldev looked at her with all passion)
( wind started coming in again letting veera's hair to fall on her face again. but this time baldev didn't move them back through his hands, he did it with a soft blow...{}).
(veera felt shivers... she was blushing like anything. she had no idea what was happening, but she was liking it.)
(she closed her eyes... her hairs were still coming on her face. baldev held her by one arm and extended the other to touch her face softly and remove the hairs.)
(veera felt weak on her knees, she was melting)
(when this wasn't enough, baldev started speaking in his low whisper.)
baldev- veera... mujhe chadd ke kitthe bhaag rahi thi?
(veera was unable to speak. his hands were still on her head, they were running through her hairs.)
baldev- bol...bol na...
veera- vo... vo mai...
baldev- mera kinna khayaal rakhti hai... tenu shukriyaa keh sakta hoon...
veera- hmmm... your welcome.
baldev- abhi kaha thodi hai... tu shehri hai na... toh shehri tareeke se kahoonga...
(veera looked down as baldev pulled her head close...very close to him and kissed her ...{😳} on her forehead. {😆 relax guyzz...😆})
(veera sat back as baldev loosened his grip.)
(she was still having that melting feeling.)
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scene-2
( veera was sitting outside, it was about 4 am)
(she felt someone come next to her. it was baldev, in his kurta and coat again. {😆}.)
(he sat next to her.)
baldev- ki hoya veera... tu soyi nahi.
veera- neend nahi aa rahi thi... tera bukhaar theek hai abb?
baldev- haan theek hai... tune inni mehnat jo ki raat bhar.
veera- phir bhi tu aur beemar ho gaya...😕
baldev- matlab?
veera- rehne de...
baldev- tu ro rahi hai...? hai na?
(veera looks at him with tears and they roll down her cheek.)
(baldev lovingly wipes them off.)
baldev- matt ro veera...mainu accha nai lagta...
veera- jab mainu khud inna rulaata hai tab ki?😭
baldev- arre... vo toh saddi dosti hai.. hai na...?
(veera looks at him in anger.)
baldev- nai... accha...
(veera smiles and hugs him tightly...)
veera- mai toh kabhi kisi ko chadd ke nahi jaati ... sab mainu chadd ke chale jaate hain baldevv...
baldev- (hugging her back)- mai kahi nahi jaa raha veera.. kahi nahi... kabhi nahi...
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ok.. ye thi mere b'day ki party 😉😉😉. jaldi jadli bataao kis-kis ne attend ki and kisko kaisi lagi????😃😳😳
Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 11 years ago
Ganesh Kartikeya
