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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Nice update gayatri is doing all works for her husband everyone notice it im sure one day ranaji will also see its not bad thing that gayatri scared n got worried seeing her injured husband yes she is queen but a wife also n wife reacted like this when something bad happen with her husband n clearely ranaji doesnt understand a wife's care or worry cant blame him he never got it he just want his queen to stay strong n clam in every situation but hope some day as a husband he will understand his wife nice part thnx 4 update

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sishtyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

I m speechless jags ,how can u write with such a perfection ?? 👏 (i think i need to take some lessons from u !!)
u made me cry jags,the way g does all the work of ranaji without asking ,so sweet 😳
nd then the way she gets frightened when ranaji comes ...he scolds both queens nd g feels responsible for it ...this calls for a confrontation from g's side to rana nd rana 's proper apology,his realization!!
😭 i want more !!... 😆
Ok mai wait karungi lekin jaldi update karna like a gud girl ... 😆 😃

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kuhelidebbarma

@kuhelidebbarma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Amazing update...you write so well 👏

Waiting for the next update!

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kuhelidebbarma

@kuhelidebbarma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

@Abiza

The writer of etr2 should take lessons from jags..

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sishtyfan

@sishtyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma
@Abiza
The writer of etr2 should take lessons from jags..

Absolutely richie!! Meri maane to jags ko hi script likne keliye bol de ,i bet trp rocket ki tarah udne lage gi nd our show will be one of the best in india !! ⭐️

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chinkidrashti

@chinkidrashti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

I am surprised how Ranaji is not noticing who is doing things for him with perfection, usually Raja appreciate loyal people right? So y Rana not noticing the change especially if shez pressing his legs when hez sleeping? Liked that truth that he understood that Gayathri is still not feeling at home in mehel. Last part was sad, poor gayathri, shez not accustomed to this, how can he be angry, hope he understands her and apologize in next update. Loved gayathri effort to make a place in his heart :)

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Amazing update, loved it, Gayatri is performing all the duties of a wife and i am sure one day Ranaji will notice it and he is going to fall for Gayatri.

Continue soon, waiting for the next update.

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Really nice and superb update

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jagrutid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Nice update gayatri is doing all works for her husband everyone notice it im sure one day ranaji will also see its not bad thing that gayatri scared n got worried seeing her injured husband yes she is queen but a wife also n wife reacted like this when something bad happen with her husband n clearely ranaji doesnt understand a wife's care or worry cant blame him he never got it he just want his queen to stay strong n clam in every situation but hope some day as a husband he will understand his wife nice part thnx 4 update

I think you summed it up perfectly, hes never really been around a lady who has been wifely in that sense. Subharna has been bought up to be queen and with the way things happened she never really got chance to be wife to him so she settled for that. As for sulkashana she was more a lover than a wife, this is all new to him.
Upcoming chapters will hopefully see some development..

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jagrutid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: sishtyfan
I m speechless jags ,how can u write with such a perfection ?? 👏 (i think i need to take some lessons from u !!)
u made me cry jags,the way g does all the work of ranaji without asking ,so sweet 😳
nd then the way she gets frightened when ranaji comes ...he scolds both queens nd g feels responsible for it ...this calls for a confrontation from g's side to rana nd rana 's proper apology,his realization!!
😭 i want more !!... 😆
Ok mai wait karungi lekin jaldi update karna like a gud girl ... 😆 😃

Thank you very much you are too kind with your words!
Honestly i do not set to make anyone cry or laugh or set out to portray anything really when I begin to write I simply go with what comes to mind, writing probably is as an outlet to convey some of my feelings I suppose sorry if you cried lol 😆
One thing I do try to do is keep my characters as human as possible and so Gayatri's is trying her level best to make her mark on him but hasn't quite yet, Ranaji on the other hand is just reacting in the moment. What he feels he conveys and I suppose he was more a king at that point than anything else.. a worried one.
I think you will like the next chapter! 😉

Edited by jagrutid - 9 years ago

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