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At the least 3 more pages could have been added to make it last till 50 jag and i really am sad that it went at a speed and ended. i had guessed that u are making subarna die to bring raga together forever but i feel it could have gone a bit ahead with a little twist in tale.
i have a suggestion for u bring the sequel back if not then do continue this in another ss where ranaji gets close with subharna or subharna could turn negative , where gayu fights for her love and etc etc.
that was just the suggestion take it if u want but definitely i look for ur creativity and u have it all that it takes to have a wonderful writing. plus i can understand why u want to end this soon cause there have been less reply to the stories and u feel u are writing it to yourself only but then i guess some are around the world waiting to lighten and brighten their days waiting for ur tales just like me.
so thank u for the effort and ur replies
just keep on writing more and i am following your every story
its that this is he only one that i have read . i am not fan of ipkknd so haven.t read those creations but then lets see .
be back soon dear 👏
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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