A King size Love - vignettes - update on page 12 - Page 5

Originally posted by: komol

Seriously you should be the writer of etr2.
I wish .

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Amazing so ranaji is fallingnand he wants to gayatri to come out nice way to elaborate waiting for next

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Loved this Bertie.

You named the horse and what a name!👍🏼
RM is more humane MIL,playing cupid, liked that.
Liked the way you gave G a reason to go to his room, rather than as someone waiting to ambush him as we saw in the show.
Poor Gayathri, is going to be more confused after this encounter.😆
RNJ😲 reminded me of DD's previous show which had RK forcing Madhu to give a massage.Though as a woman i cringed at the sexual harassment i watched it with perverse fascination.Same here.
Nice to read a normal convo between these two about the librarian.Openly fangirling G was nice to read.
Great way to end it with the teardrop.👏

Originally posted by: chicksoup

He recalled the fanciful notion he had had as a child, to keep riding till he reached the end of the world and then fall off it! Of course, he now knew the world was round and he would never fall off, not until it was time! The morbid thought quickly brought the memory of Sulakshana along with it. He was surprised to find that it no longer felt like scraping a raw wound. More the remembered pain that a healing scar evokes! He did not want to follow the line of thought though! He quickly walked into the en suite even as he shrugged his shirt off.

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Amazing, Bertie. The whole piece was an absolute delight to read. I loved this bit, especially. You seem to know RNJ inside out. 😳

You gave that scene an entirely different direction...beautiful. 👏They could have adapted some of this, to make that scene look less abrupt. 🤔

Keep writing, girl. ❤️