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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Amazing so ranaji is fallingnand he wants to gayatri to come out nice way to elaborate waiting for next

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simran_singh_24

@simran_singh_24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Loved this Bertie.

You named the horse and what a name!👍🏼
RM is more humane MIL,playing cupid, liked that.
Liked the way you gave G a reason to go to his room, rather than as someone waiting to ambush him as we saw in the show.
Poor Gayathri, is going to be more confused after this encounter.😆
RNJ😲 reminded me of DD's previous show which had RK forcing Madhu to give a massage.Though as a woman i cringed at the sexual harassment i watched it with perverse fascination.Same here.
Nice to read a normal convo between these two about the librarian.Openly fangirling G was nice to read.
Great way to end it with the teardrop.👏

Edited by simran_singh_24 - 10 years ago

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Wow

That one word is surely enough ..m loving it .. Thanks for the next part ..

Its too good ..

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

He recalled the fanciful notion he had had as a child, to keep riding till he reached the end of the world and then fall off it! Of course, he now knew the world was round and he would never fall off, not until it was time! The morbid thought quickly brought the memory of Sulakshana along with it. He was surprised to find that it no longer felt like scraping a raw wound. More the remembered pain that a healing scar evokes! He did not want to follow the line of thought though! He quickly walked into the en suite even as he shrugged his shirt off.

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Amazing, Bertie. The whole piece was an absolute delight to read. I loved this bit, especially. You seem to know RNJ inside out. 😳

You gave that scene an entirely different direction...beautiful. 👏They could have adapted some of this, to make that scene look less abrupt. 🤔

Keep writing, girl. ❤️

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Danseuse

@Danseuse

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

@BertieWooster : 👏 👏 👏

-Rekha

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: komol
Seriously you should be the writer of etr2.
I wish .

Oops...I don't even know what to say...but thank you I guess 😳

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991
Amazing so ranaji is fallingnand he wants to gayatri to come out nice way to elaborate waiting for next

Rana ji doesn't know what he is feeling 😆

But his queen's indifference bothers him big time...and he wants to shatter the facade that he thinks she's putting on...

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Beautifully written

Thank you 😊

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24
Loved this Bertie.

You named the horse and what a name!👍🏼
RM is more humane MIL,playing cupid, liked that.
Liked the way you gave G a reason to go to his room, rather than as someone waiting to ambush him as we saw in the show.
Poor Gayathri, is going to be more confused after this encounter.😆
RNJ😲 reminded me of DD's previous show which had RK forcing Madhu to give a massage.Though as a woman i cringed at the sexual harassment i watched it with perverse fascination.Same here.
Nice to read a normal convo between these two about the librarian.Openly fangirling G was nice to read.
Great way to end it with the teardrop.👏

Thanks Simran 😊

When even the sword and the plane have names, how can I let the horse go unnamed...hopefully they will have some nice Indian name for him too...but I couldn't think of any 😕

I really find it cute that he names all his possessions.. it is almost like he is giving them an identity...!

Oops...sexual harassment 😕 he wouldn't have done it if he had not seen the crack...the flicker of emotion prompted him to probe more...he wouldn't have pushed her though...but of course, he knew she wouldn't back off from a dare...

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: chicksoup
He recalled the fanciful notion he had had as a child, to keep riding till he reached the end of the world and then fall off it! Of course, he now knew the world was round and he would never fall off, not until it was time! The morbid thought quickly brought the memory of Sulakshana along with it. He was surprised to find that it no longer felt like scraping a raw wound. More the remembered pain that a healing scar evokes! He did not want to follow the line of thought though! He quickly walked into the en suite even as he shrugged his shirt off.
👏

Amazing, Bertie. The whole piece was an absolute delight to read. I loved this bit, especially. You seem to know RNJ inside out. 😳

You gave that scene an entirely different direction...beautiful. 👏They could have adapted some of this, to make that scene look less abrupt. 🤔

Keep writing, girl. ❤️

Thank you Chick 😊

Much as I may like to build Gayathri into a strong woman, RNJ is my one true love 😉😆