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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

wow loved it u wrote the scene perfectly gayatri's attitude was too good i feel his ego was hurt seeing her behaviour everything he did to break her but he didnt see a drop of tear in her eyes n this effected him very much ranaji finally meet his match loved it

Edited by Drashtilove - 9 years ago

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nicwly written ranaji thinking of raniji's behaviour instigating her still rani gayatri behaved comoletwly different good

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abba12

@abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Wow back to back parts ..a treat to read ..

Take a bow ..

Once again amazing description on scene ..he went to fetch her and she did come without any counter discussion .. But the fact that she didn't cry coz she is a Queen made the update worth reading ..

Just loved it ..

And again rana g left in confusion ..where she is the innocent girl , the player or the Queen .

Keep writing, for next scenes too . . don't make it TS hehee

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Beautiful Three Shots, loved it.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Firstly, please do not end this Three Shot. Make it into FF. It's really really interesting.

Saccharine sarcasm - that's how dear Gayatri was...I'm already in love with this Gayatri... Join the team of ETRETR CVs.. please

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Please bear with me for thanking all of you in a single post. Thanks to the spamming restrictions. i am not allowed more than 20 posts in a day. Don't want to miss thanking anyone on account of that...

So here goes...

@sush Thank you for that...I normally don't write unless I am really bothered by the screwed up versions we are presented with...you know how bothered we have been...just thought to write this for myself even, just so I could feel better playing it out in my own head...and yes, I have finished it with the dining table sequence...see if it makes you feel any better..😊

@dhruvika1991 thank you so much for liking it 😊

@chicksoup Thank you Chick...so glad you liked it 😊

Blame the creatives for where they are taking BRM though...I merely followed their lead, with minor changes in presenting a point of view...the why and what are the same...just the how is different 😆

The dreams...yes, it would helped the audience and even the actor connect better with the character's current angst..

@geetdrashti Thank you so much for liking it 😊\

@jazzym Thank you for liking it 😊

I too wrote down only what I would have liked to see on the show...!

This is just a variation of what was shown. Not a standalone FF really!

On joining the creatives, what do I say 😳

@keepdreaming 😊

@abba12 thank you so much for liking it 😊

I really hope I don't have to write more..you know what I mean 😳

@simran_singh_24 Thanks so much for liking it 😊

Sort of like a dream of how we would have liked it to play out...we've discussed so much about it after all 😆

@drashtilove Thank you so much for liking it 😊

@sarcy Thank you so much for liking it 😊

Am really glad you enjoyed reading them! Yes, wish Gayathri on the show could be variation of this.

Ranaji's point of view needed to be presented right...you can't hold one half of the love equation in contempt, can you?

@ananya2010 Thank you for liking it 😊

Edited by BertieWooster - 9 years ago

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

You are a closet Gayatri fan, Bertie!😲Thats it! 😆

Loved the way you have taken Gayatyri...I am hoping to see this Gayatri when the Sula truth hits her...exactly this...hope the creatives can deliver this well.

Till then, Gayatri is off my radar. 😉

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BertieWooster

@BertieWooster

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: chicksoup
You are a closet Gayatri fan, Bertie!😲Thats it! 😆
Loved the way you have taken Gayatyri...I am hoping to see this Gayatri when the Sula truth hits her...exactly this...hope the creatives can deliver this well.

Till then, Gayatri is off my radar. 😉

Hahaha..

I can't write weak, silly women, Chick...not even if my life depended on it!

I wanted to have Rana ji's outburst because I did not find it completely out of place. The man was a volcano waiting to erupt! Just toned it down a bit, not getting into too much detail on the happenings behind closed doors!