SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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ReelyROSExx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Marybarton
Wow, he didn't even fill her mang. I am mad as hell!

😆 Welll... u r going to go "insane " in the coming epis

PS : travelling , ll read n comment later 😊

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Gayatri is a wounded tigress here licking her wounds . She has not even spared badi rani maa and rajmata 😆 and I really do not feel she is wrong in any way . They wronged her and she lashes back for the coward convenient step they took rather than the right one .

Bedroom part was awkward 😳 was Rana in a fix seeing Gayatri all disheveled still looking like a "doll" ❓😳

Muh dikhayi rasam again Gayatri was pretty red seeing that she had to wear something that Rana selected . Best part was their conversation where she states she is opinionated that's why she reads books related to feminism in this case politics ; although him complimenting her surprised her . Gayatri seems pretty cool off discussing sulokshana even analyzed her perfectly 👏

Loved the update ❤️

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Marybarton

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: tes_v1
Gayatri innocently: Raj Mata, aap hi bataiye, my father paid good money, why should I not get the bigger suite? 🤣 🤣 🤣

The girl has gall! Seeing Gayatri's conversations with Indravadhan in the past few updates, I was actually wondering if she was a fan of Mary Wollstonecraft and clearly she is! And Ranaji approves! It's amazing that she always holds her ground and doesn't even bend to authority.
Seeing Rana's response to Gayatri's question about Sulakshana makes me wonder if they truly did know each other - and if that's where you are going with the story. It is sad but will pave the way for Indravadhan to move on. As always, a fab update! Can't wait to read the next part. :)

Btw, do you read historical fiction?

Very perceptive 😉

Yes, I do read historical fiction.

Edited by Marybarton - 10 years ago

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

So beautiful ...

Hope gayathri behaves in the same way ...on tv

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Suhasinni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

I absolutely love what you wrote. I can't wait for the next update!

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Kavya

@AriyaLilyOrchid

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Lovely n awesome
Poor gayatri loved the fact that she is fighting

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ss2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

interesting concept. read it one go. Keep writing.

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mandu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

I too saw a lot of names from the ipkknd days...and when I saw you had started a story...I had to read it..

Thank you for this wonderful start and waiting eagerly to read a lot more, impatiently

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Superbly written. Read all 4 parts in 1 go.

Loved the way you made Gayathri full of love but full of esteem too... The knack of bringing out her nature, the direct and clear conversations ...love it.

Like that you have made, our Raja, Ranaji 'feel' that he is in the wrong. Not the high end attitude...I would love see that in the series.

At present, in the series, Ranaji, feels he is the only one who has sacrificed. He wallows in his 'wife's' loss but does not see other people's sufferings. He feels that the marriage is a samjotha but what about Gayathri's feeling...

You have done great in bringing it out...Loved it that he put sindoor on her maang and the red dupatta scene...creates chemistry...love to read such scenes more and make Gayathri intelligent in her handling of palace politics...