SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Fantastic and awesome update, wow loved Gayatri's attitude

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Super duper attitude Rani Gayatri Devi. The idiot King keeps asking...as if by asking, she'll bear her disappointment to his glare...

Beautifully written...

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Tia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Oh, how the tables have turned! From Gayatri being the one struggling for Indravadhan's attention and affection, it's gone to him doing just that - for her attention, if not affection. Yet. I wonder what will it take for Raniji to mellow down - would be interesting to read.

This part ended waaay too soon. *Sigh*!

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ViratHolic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

loved the OS ...Well this gayatri and serial gayatri quite same so am expecting these type of attitude from her ..waiting for next part update soon

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Shailaja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Ranaji has been riding the high horse ever since the show began when it had to be Gayatri who ought to be doing it. I love how your Gayatri royally ignores Ranaji. He thinks he can make things better for her? It is really a very helpless position for any woman to be in a loveless marriage and not even complain about it. At first Gayatri was vocal about her disappointment now she is showing her protest by not even acknowledging the presence of Ranaji in her life. I hope he realises that she wants nothing but unconditional love. Loved this part a lot. Do update sooner.

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fanraya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Oh it was too short, 😊what an amazing update, really heart touching, Gayu is one strong woman, love her character.. cannot wait fo the next one..

Edited by fanraya - 9 years ago

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CoffeeLover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Gayatri in this should be every girl's spirit animal. Loved how indifferent she is to Ranaji and handling her responsibilities with grace. She's not complaining nor expecting anything. So far it has been a great developing story.

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Sonali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

well done, Gayatri is going through so much due to her disappointments, hope she is able to rise above all, and find a good niche. I hope her and Ranaji can live like husband and wife eventually