SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Another amazing update

I am sure rana will soon fall in love with gayatri

I hope something similar happens in the show as well but we have the CVS to spoil all such dreams...

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simran_singh_24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Loved this!

I enjoyed your FF on QH forum and glad to see this show is inspiring you to write.

I like your Gayathri.There were strong & independent women in all times and India had lot of them during the freedom movement. Women like Captain Lakshmi & Rukmani Devi had interesting lifes & achieved more than what many women dare to dream of today.

This story gives a different perspective seen from Gayatri's pov and I hope we get to see atleast of teh fireworks that you've written in the show.

Looking forward to the next update.👍🏼

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ScarletGWTW

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Awesom update. Like the red to Jane Austen heroines. Suddenly Ranaji must be feeling how boring Sulo was lol.. Keep it up you are doing a great job of the narrative enjoy reading your updates.. Update soon

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Zaalima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

i like you story

wish they protary Gayatri in this show no pati vata type

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Beautifully written

Loving this gayatri

It seems gayatri is enigma for ranaji. ..I am liking the way he handling the situation he is calm and composed and knows how much hurt she was..waiting for the next one