SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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007130

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Excellant update the best so far continue soon

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Shailaja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Another superb update! You even brought in A Vindication of the Rights of Women. That was very interesting in bringing out a facet of Gayatri's character. I loved the spat Gayatri had with Badi Rani. It shows how much she detests being objectified. She was traded into what she thought was a marriage. I really appreciate the Ranaji for being very patient with her. We also got to see how Raga have common interests and how they are talking about books, views, and opinions instead of quarreling with each other.

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fanraya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Wow, what a wonderful chapter, love your Gyatri, such a strong and lovely character, I so wish her like this in the show too, beautiful story.. Gayatri is perfect partner for Ranaji,Great work..

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Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

This was mindblowing ...👏
Really loved it ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

amazing update gayatri didnt wear ranaji's saree but she had to wear his dupatta wo first time ranaji won aganist gayatri i liked the line 'because it was yours 'gayatri doesnt fear RM or BRM liked her answer to them they surely thought she will be abla nari but she gave them shock with her attitude loved last part convo between gayatri n indravadhan lovely part thnx 4 update

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Niharika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Reading it in one go was such a bliss. I would love to take some vocabulary classes by you 😳. Rana ji gets bowled each and every pretty time hihahaha . Loved it.

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Tia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Gayatri innocently: Raj Mata, aap hi bataiye, my father paid good money, why should I not get the bigger suite? 🤣 🤣 🤣

The girl has gall! Seeing Gayatri's conversations with Indravadhan in the past few updates, I was actually wondering if she was a fan of Mary Wollstonecraft and clearly she is! And Ranaji approves! It's amazing that she always holds her ground and doesn't even bend to authority.
Seeing Rana's response to Gayatri's question about Sulakshana makes me wonder if they truly did know each other - and if that's where you are going with the story. It is sad but will pave the way for Indravadhan to move on. As always, a fab update! Can't wait to read the next part. :)

Btw, do you read historical fiction?