Raga SS : Yeh moh moh ke dhaage, chapter 4 ,page 9 Completed ! - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Beautiful updts,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: BelleFilleDD

Lovely update loved Gayatri and Rana moments Gayatri could not believe he is for real but she makes him go promising she will meet him the next day at the mandir



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Fantastic update, loved RaGa.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys , im extremelly sorry for the late update , so this is the last chapter hope you all enjoy it and please leave your feedback and likes 😃😃⭐️⭐️


Chapter 4

Gayatri and her friend left for the mandir and her bhabhis followed her.

Geeta . Gayatri , hum toh library ja rahe the toh...yeh mandir ... ( gayayri we were going tothe library the... This temple )

G. Mujhe ranaji se milne jana hai ( i want to go to meet rana ji )

Geeta. Oh... ! Ranaji se milne jana hai !??( she said teasingly ) toh main mandir mein pooja dekh kar chali jaungi ( oh you have to go to meet rana ji , then ill see pooja in mandir abd thrn leave )

G. Theek hai( ok)

Gayatri stops in frobt of rana ji and geeta goes to the mandir . There bhabhis see gayatri but dont see rana jis face exactly , just his body , s there were many people coming and going through their way ,

B1. Yeh gayatri kisi admi ke saath , ( this gayatri with a man ? )

B2, zaroor kuch toh baat hai, pata lagana padega( definitely sth is goibg on , we need to fibd out )

B1. Are nahi !!!! Humbina pooche ghar se nikle the sasuma hamein dhoond rahi hongi ! Chalo !!! ( no !!!,we came here without asking , mother in law must be looking for us ! Lets go !! )

B2. Are haan !! Bahut bada panga ho jayega !!! ( yes ! A big mess could happen !

And they left.

Ranaji looked at gayatri , she was looking at him lovingly , he got completely lost in herbeautiful big light brown eyes... In that moment

... someobe by mistake pushed her and she was about to fall ,but rana ji held her waist and pulled her towards him , she collided with his chest , she looked up , to see a worried rana ,

R. Ap theek toh hai na ? ( r u alright ?)

G. Haan rana ji mainbilkul theek hoon( yes rana ji im perfecttly fine )

He released her

R. Chaliye kahan shaanti si jaga chalte hain ( comes lets go to a silent / relaxed place )

G. Ji rana ji hum pehle mandir mein chaltein hai phir hum chalte hain( yes raba ji first well go in the mandir then well go )

R. Haan( yes)

And they went in the mandir and , then , they went to a waterfall side .

they sat on the huge stones , next to each other , and few steps behind there was the water falliing from the waterfall to the river.

it was cloudy , . ... Rana ji was looking at gayatri and she was looking at him ...

G. Rana ji ... Mujhe apki bahut yaad aati hai rana ji ...

And saying this sge rested her head on his shoulder , rana ji carresimg her hair said

R. Hamein bhi .. ... ... Gayatri aaj maine soch liya hai. . ... Aaj hum dono ghar ja kar apne parivaar ko bata denge aur samjha denge hamari shaadi ke bare mein ...

G. Haan rana ji ...

and she stood up and then ... She stepped wrong and fell from the cliff to in the river ... Ranaji jumped into the river to save gayatri...

He grabbed gayatri in the water ... He was now holding hr waist and she had her hands on the nape of his neck ... They were both staring at each other... With a strong intensity in their eyes...

Some wet hair locks were coming on gayatris face ... Rana ji gently tucked them behind her ear touchng her skin while he was doing so... Gayatri closed her eyes to feel his touch...

Rana ji leaned forward slowly ... Reducing the distance between them... Gayatri was breathing really fast... His grip tightened on her waist and his face was really close to hr... Their noses almost touch ... And few dropletsfell on gayatris face from Ranajis wet hair... Ranaji looked at her lips ...gayatri lowered her eyes in shyness ...

G. Rana ji... Koi aa jayega ...

Ranaji smirked and placed a soft kiss on her wet cheek ... Gayatri blushed heavily ... He then lifted her in his arms and got out of the water with her in his arms ... And kept her on the grass... He was on his knees now...

R... Tum theek toh ho na ?

G. Ji... Ranaji ... Ab kaafi der ho gayi hai.. Hamein ab ghar jana chahiye ...

R. Haan

He helped her to get up ... And he droppefmd her home . In their respected houses... They had a tough time conving their parents to accept on their marriage as they were already married. At last ... They agreed and held a grand royalwedding ... And The king and the queen lived happily ever after together .

The end

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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Read all 4 chapter in 1 go...
A couple who worked to ensure their marriage is accepted...loved the concept.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely ending.
Finally,sab maan gaye for RaGa marriage.
RaGa romance was lovely.
Will miss this story a lot.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Read all 4 chapter in 1 go...

A couple who worked to ensure their marriage is accepted...loved the concept.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

Lovely ending.
Finally,sab maan gaye for RaGa marriage.
RaGa romance was lovely.
Will miss this story a lot.
Thanks for the pm.



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