Lost and Lonely(RagNa FF) ch Last part and Epilogue on pg 147 - Page 91

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Posted: 8 years ago

Epilogue


30 years later

Somewhere in the world in a snowy day, a 70 years old, old man was sitting on a bench and was watching kids were playing with the snow. All of a sudden 5 and 6 years old two boy and girl ran toward him and said, "Dada ji, dada ji, we came here to hear the story hiding from our mom. Please tell na what happened at the end?" hearing kids, the old man said, "Beta it is not good thing to hide." After thinking something the girl said, "What about the hero of the story that also hid himself from everyone." The old man smiled and said, "Though he hid himself from everyone but not from the person who he wanted to see."

The boy: is it possible?

Old man: hm. When you will grow up, when someone will come into your life as a blessing, when you will fall for that person then you will understand.

In the meantime hearing kids mom calling them, "Mom is calling. We will come back again," saying so kids left from there. Few seconds later, seeing a 20 years old young woman coming toward him, the old man said, "why did you take too long? I was waiting for you." The woman said with a smile, "I was here. Seeing you with the kids I hid myself." Then she sat beside him. Looking at her, he said, "I missed you a lot." The woman said, "I missed you too." Both had an eye lock. He hugged her. She hugged him back. They were in each other's arm for a while. After breaking the hug, the old man said, "I didn't sleep for a long time. I am very tired. I want to sleep." "Ok, sleep here on my lap," she said with a smile. Then the old man laid down on the bench and rested his head on her lap. She started caressing his hair lovingly. His body relaxed. Welcoming sleep.

Half an hour later both kids came back. Seeing the old man sleeping peacefully on the bench, kids called him, "Dada ji, wake up. We came back." When he didn't wake up, kids called their mom. "What happened?" kids mom asked. "Mom, dada ji is not waking up," kids said. Then kids mom tried to wake him up by tapping his shoulder. When he didn't response, kids mom took his hand in her and checked his pulse. Looking at the kids, she said, "your dada ji is no more. God took him to his." She felt kids feeling sad.

Mom: Don't be sad beta

Kids: He will not come back anymore?

Mom: if someone goes there he never comes back.

Kids: then who will tell me the end of the story?

Mom: story?

Kids: hm. Do you remember one day I told you a story where a hero left everyone when he lost his beloved one?

"Hm," saying so kid's mom looked at the old man and added, "Who knows it could be his own story."

The End

Edited by farhana04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago




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Thank you all for your love and support that you have given me while I was writing this story. Love you all. 🤗


Edited by farhana04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional ending😭 It was a wonderful story. Do continue to write more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story but ssd they die
Lovely
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update. Beautiful ending to a very beautiful story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for such a lovely story...very emotional update...beautiful ending
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional story
Still crying
Thank you so much for beautiful story
Will be waiting for your new story and please give epilogue for nikah ek saal ka
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Posted: 8 years ago
😭😭😭 Such an emotional ending but can feel the love of RagNa. It still hurts to see Kalpana leave Raghav. Gurl your story is awesome but emotional. It was written really well the the right emotion capture and it was realistic. I didn't want Kalpi to die but I don't think it would have fit well so if possible I would like to give standing ovation cause you rock. Keep up the good work and can't wait for you to finish your other stories 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update I was crying beautiful love story but sad ending very well writing fara love u dear nd thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanx faru for such beautiful story.. very emotional n heart breaking update.. thanx for preparing us for this end by giving us clue earlier or else would have got a big jhatka n cried a lot... loved it so much.. lots of love n hugs :)

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