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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rachufan

CONGRATS DEAR ๐Ÿฅณ

What an updatefabulous mindblowing excellent perfect
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
kalpi's family is sooo happy seeing
kalpi and raghav's strong bond their love for each other
Her dada tease her and raghav support him sooo cute
their light moments was awesome
Wow kalpi gave ravhav punishment poor raghav
๐Ÿ˜†
now priest started sealing her power
raghav cant see her in pain

Waiting for daly dose in new thread


Thanks Rachu!! Oh that new thread ๐Ÿคข That is going to be a chore to create now ๐Ÿ˜† Is it weird I was secretly hoping to finish the story on one thread? But oh well...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vidya, First of all Congo for the completion of First Thread. Cannot wait for next update in Second Thread. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿฅณ

Now to my comment for Parts 24, 25 and 26.

Part-24: Wow, Kalpana the wife! She rocks, and gave Pakhi a very well deserved slap. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ She stood by the faith and trust she had in her husband. How cute, that she knows her husband so well. Loved those lines "And even if I did not witness..."

Afterwards both finding solace in each other, Raghav calming Kalpi down and also helping her in controlling her power. They are each other's strength. Loved their decision to leave Maharaj Fort that day itself. But Prem was upto playing his game again! before that loved Ragna moments, especially how Kalpi made Raghav wash his lips before allowing him to kiss her. ๐Ÿ˜†

Okay, my heart had started thudding loudly when Raghav gulped down the wine. Suspected some foul play then and then when Raghav lost consciousness, his last thoughts being his wife's safety my emotions felt his fear and got more anxious. That cheapo disgusting man Prem, tried to force himself upon Kalpi, hurt her and dragged her. Her cries were heard even by Raghav apart from other Northsmen alerting them. Her cries gave Raghav the strength to fight his drowsiness and give Pakhi a befitting lesson. Even then he asked forgiveness from God for hurting a woman. Such a respectable and ideal man he is.

Finally Eaghav was able to come in the nick of time to save Kalpi and all truths came out. Prem hurt Raghav and blinded him! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Kalpi also got to know of Prem's true colors. She underwent so much but the fact that Prem had hurted her husband and he wanted to kill Raghav, she couldn't bear and her power triggered.

Loved the fact that even in this state she distinguished between her Lord Husband and Prem.

PART-25: The way Kalpi strived for and saved her Northsmen soldiers, her husband's men fell in love with Kalpi. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ There Raghav cared for nothing but his wife's safety, trying to battle all and save his wife. He was able to save her just as she lost all energy and fell off the balcony. In this update, I truly felt the essence of ypur title of this FF. "The Lion and the Panther"- ๐Ÿ˜ณ Raghav and Kalpi both would always be with each other and fight together, for each other.

Finally they were at Athma in a safe place. Kalpi regained consciousness after three days and her eyes searched for only Raghav. Loved the way her soul fought inside to return for her love. Raghav was guilt-ridden and the way Samar made him realise his mistake was commendable.

One request and question: will we see a happy-ending or a happy-story for Samar too? ๐Ÿ˜ณ he too deserves happiness after all he does for his friend and his homeland.

Kalpi was also guilt-ridden and both need only each other to get rid of those thoughts. Her husband tried everything to not let her feel guilty, telling her even in that state she stood for Raghav and his men. Then Raghav finally broke down in front of his wife, after seeing bruises on her body again. Kalpi forgetting all her pain helped her husband let go of those feelings.

Loved how Kalpi told Raghav that "I know you will put his head on a spike and all of Greyland will look upon his diseased form in scorn and disgust... I know you will give me this gift... You have never denied me anything before..." ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

PART-26: A Chapter dedicated to Kalpana's family witnessing Ragna's true love and how their bond has grown to become strong and strength of each other. I read it thrice you know. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loved first scene where Raghav and Kalpana go together for ceremony dedicated to their fallen Northsmen warriors. The soldiers muttered Thank You to Kalpi and the burden off guilt lessened in her. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Raghav and kalpi are so much into each other, come to admire and love their love, bond even more with each Chapter you write. Please please let it be so, never separate them. Loved all teasing sessions and Raghav letting go of formality unconsciously and almost addressing his Lady Wife as "My Love". Loved their open display of affection for each other and satisfied Vitthal-Kamla.

Their bedroom scene Raghav is enjoying carefree avatar of his wife but at the same time cannot help but bewitched by the naked beauty of his wife. Kalpi caught him staring at her chest and then when she confronted him teasingly, loved Raghav's reply "Ah well..." - Raghav lowered his gaze and bit his lips with a small smile- "I do love those as well. Are they getting bigger?" โ˜บ๏ธ

Both are lost in the dreams of their child, hope the child is safe and sound. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Teji scene and her happiness on seeing her friend happy was also cute and Oh, loved Ragna sleeping together on Cot. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The healing ceremony is there and even I am scared. Loved blood taking scene,especially of Raghav. Love how you write all these as if such practices in fact happen. As the ceremony progresses, Kalpana's pain increases and Raghav is horified and concerned. Really hope the ceremony is complete without any obstruction successfuly! Loved the entire update. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

Awesome updatee

raghav and kalpana bidding farewell to there falling warriors and there gratitude
The warriors thanking kalpana for saving there life and kalpana felt better
the dinner was awesone pakya teaaing kalpana hehe
even raghav joined palya in the teasing session
raghav slip of tougue
hmm pakya teasing on having twins
love kalpi and raghav convo in there chambers
kalpi punishment to her lord husband but kalpi couldnt sleep without her lord husband
the sealing ceremony raghav is the most scares and nervous



Thank you Ayesha! And yeah Raghav has good reason to be nervous because the ceremony is a painful one. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Thank you Ekta!
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Posted: 10 years ago
VI.. im late again!
Unres on pg 150 ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
VI..
When is ceremony of second thread opening dear..?๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
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Last two update they were just mind blowing i love every bit for them ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Kalpi even under the effect of that power saved her army I thought see might hurt her or their child in this process but thanq god both are safe

prem is just hurt i thought he will be dead by 1st blow of fire ๐Ÿ˜† but he is main villan ethne asane se how will he die ๐Ÿ˜› n paki when kalpana walked out of prems room i thought it was paki's number next ๐Ÿ˜† woh bach gaye warna uska kubsurtha as she think it is chehra would have been damaged

Raghav is feeling guilt but samar is such a true friend i love his character his teasing and they way he reason for raghav's fear and make him realize thing is beautiful ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Pakya and raghav teasing i enjoyed that part and then kalpi's punishment too ab the main part to seal her power again hope it goes well fingers crossed ๐Ÿ˜†

wonderful updates ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

It is awesome update Vidya I read it back to back...I love the way kalpi save raghav and his army...raghav is so guilty that he can't protect his kalpi at that time...but samaj as a good friend always der for him and make him realise her pain...I love the way kalpi make.raghav understand that he is very good husband and ask him gift but yes I also want that gift soon...but in second update you make me laugh so much everyone is teasing kalpi and even raghav too...pakya is so much funny well it's d hint that lord and lady will have twins?? Well waiting for it but seriously north men have so much strength that they can put two children in one go...raghav was so embarrassed at that time...love this bubbly kalpu so much...and raghav too enjoy it...and as usual ragna romance is fabulous... Now waiting for next update what will happened in sealing process...waiting for tomorrow


Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Vidya, First of all Congo for the completion of First Thread. Cannot wait for next update in Second Thread. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿฅณ

Now to my comment for Parts 24, 25 and 26.

Part-24: Wow, Kalpana the wife! She rocks, and gave Pakhi a very well deserved slap. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ She stood by the faith and trust she had in her husband. How cute, that she knows her husband so well. Loved those lines "And even if I did not witness..."

Afterwards both finding solace in each other, Raghav calming Kalpi down and also helping her in controlling her power. They are each other's strength. Loved their decision to leave Maharaj Fort that day itself. But Prem was upto playing his game again! before that loved Ragna moments, especially how Kalpi made Raghav wash his lips before allowing him to kiss her. ๐Ÿ˜†

Okay, my heart had started thudding loudly when Raghav gulped down the wine. Suspected some foul play then and then when Raghav lost consciousness, his last thoughts being his wife's safety my emotions felt his fear and got more anxious. That cheapo disgusting man Prem, tried to force himself upon Kalpi, hurt her and dragged her. Her cries were heard even by Raghav apart from other Northsmen alerting them. Her cries gave Raghav the strength to fight his drowsiness and give Pakhi a befitting lesson. Even then he asked forgiveness from God for hurting a woman. Such a respectable and ideal man he is.

Finally Eaghav was able to come in the nick of time to save Kalpi and all truths came out. Prem hurt Raghav and blinded him! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Kalpi also got to know of Prem's true colors. She underwent so much but the fact that Prem had hurted her husband and he wanted to kill Raghav, she couldn't bear and her power triggered.

Loved the fact that even in this state she distinguished between her Lord Husband and Prem.

PART-25: The way Kalpi strived for and saved her Northsmen soldiers, her husband's men fell in love with Kalpi. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ There Raghav cared for nothing but his wife's safety, trying to battle all and save his wife. He was able to save her just as she lost all energy and fell off the balcony. In this update, I truly felt the essence of ypur title of this FF. "The Lion and the Panther"- ๐Ÿ˜ณ Raghav and Kalpi both would always be with each other and fight together, for each other.

Finally they were at Athma in a safe place. Kalpi regained consciousness after three days and her eyes searched for only Raghav. Loved the way her soul fought inside to return for her love. Raghav was guilt-ridden and the way Samar made him realise his mistake was commendable.

One request and question: will we see a happy-ending or a happy-story for Samar too? ๐Ÿ˜ณ he too deserves happiness after all he does for his friend and his homeland.

Kalpi was also guilt-ridden and both need only each other to get rid of those thoughts. Her husband tried everything to not let her feel guilty, telling her even in that state she stood for Raghav and his men. Then Raghav finally broke down in front of his wife, after seeing bruises on her body again. Kalpi forgetting all her pain helped her husband let go of those feelings.

Loved how Kalpi told Raghav that "I know you will put his head on a spike and all of Greyland will look upon his diseased form in scorn and disgust... I know you will give me this gift... You have never denied me anything before..." ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

PART-26: A Chapter dedicated to Kalpana's family witnessing Ragna's true love and how their bond has grown to become strong and strength of each other. I read it thrice you know. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loved first scene where Raghav and Kalpana go together for ceremony dedicated to their fallen Northsmen warriors. The soldiers muttered Thank You to Kalpi and the burden off guilt lessened in her. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Raghav and kalpi are so much into each other, come to admire and love their love, bond even more with each Chapter you write. Please please let it be so, never separate them. Loved all teasing sessions and Raghav letting go of formality unconsciously and almost addressing his Lady Wife as "My Love". Loved their open display of affection for each other and satisfied Vitthal-Kamla.

Their bedroom scene Raghav is enjoying carefree avatar of his wife but at the same time cannot help but bewitched by the naked beauty of his wife. Kalpi caught him staring at her chest and then when she confronted him teasingly, loved Raghav's reply "Ah well..." - Raghav lowered his gaze and bit his lips with a small smile- "I do love those as well. Are they getting bigger?" โ˜บ๏ธ

Both are lost in the dreams of their child, hope the child is safe and sound. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Teji scene and her happiness on seeing her friend happy was also cute and Oh, loved Ragna sleeping together on Cot. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The healing ceremony is there and even I am scared. Loved blood taking scene,especially of Raghav. Love how you write all these as if such practices in fact happen. As the ceremony progresses, Kalpana's pain increases and Raghav is horified and concerned. Really hope the ceremony is complete without any obstruction successfuly! Loved the entire update. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thanks for the well articulated comment Charu! As for Samar well remember he said in the previous updates that when a Northern man loses his heart he does not take it back. And Raghav even told Kalpana it is a code of honour for them even though some men remarry for the sake of their children...after which ofcourse Raghav made the blood vow to never remarry regardless of the circumstances. Samar is the same. He wouldn't remarry and since he doesn't have a child he doesn't have a reason to. But you can wait and see if his happiness plays out in different ways. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

RES!
Unres!!

VI.!!!!
Update was such a beautiful one yaar!!! I totally loved it! โค๏ธ all the scenes were so lovely! Especially ragna's teasing! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ LOL.. I was imagining ashish n samita in real life, in that twin's teasing session! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† thats ain't my fault! ๐Ÿ˜› but I really liked that teasing session.. it was too cute n funny! ๐Ÿ˜‰
And VI.. u wouldnt leave us untill n unless, we ll be hangng at the edge of the cliff!! im too damn curious.. dunno whats gonna happen! Waiting impatiently fr it!! ๐Ÿ˜Š


๐Ÿ˜† Thanks Vyshu. You will have to hang on the cliff a bit longer. I will update tomorrow maybe lol
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Last two update they were just mind blowing i love every bit for them ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Kalpi even under the effect of that power saved her army I thought see might hurt her or their child in this process but thanq god both are safe

prem is just hurt i thought he will be dead by 1st blow of fire ๐Ÿ˜† but he is main villan ethne asane se how will he die ๐Ÿ˜› n paki when kalpana walked out of prems room i thought it was paki's number next ๐Ÿ˜† woh bach gaye warna uska kubsurtha as she think it is chehra would have been damaged

Raghav is feeling guilt but samar is such a true friend i love his character his teasing and they way he reason for raghav's fear and make him realize thing is beautiful ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Pakya and raghav teasing i enjoyed that part and then kalpi's punishment too ab the main part to seal her power again hope it goes well fingers crossed ๐Ÿ˜†

wonderful updates ๐Ÿ‘


Thanks Santhi! Fingers crossed ๐Ÿ˜›

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