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Hey Vidya first of all thank you so much for incorporating the translations in your chappy.🤗
Now coming to the story. Its damn interesting and a very different concept.I haven't watched Game of thrones so have no idea what is it exactly but have listened about it through friends.
Anyways coming to the updates, I am really liking this royal love story which was basically arranged and now they both are deeply in love with each other. Raghav is an honourable man and Kalpana is a sweet adoring as well simple wife which has her own strength of not distinguishing between people and love for all (the way she took the baby in her arms forgetting that she is Lady of North) which makes her worthy of being Lady of North.
Prem and Pakhi as well as Neetu I think the way you have characterised them is commendable since they are villains and we are suppose to hate them and I'm actually hating them (My comment on your post for translations).
Coming to Sammy wow another Honourable man who knows his friend in and out. Loves to pull his leg and Raghav being sweet get in easily. (Preggy rules...when they were heading towards east)
And now coming to the main which I am guessing is somewhere core of this story, the inherent power that Kalpi possess of controlling fire which diminishes her own strength everytime when she is in extreme pain. The scene that I visualised while reading in the last three updates was something spellbinding. She knows she is captivated once the power starts ruling her yet she didn't harm her man nor her army was amazing.
All in all Vidya for me you have surpassed your own benchmark in terms of story from your previous FF "The twisting Kaleidoscope". 👏
Looking forward to read more...
Thanks for giving us such an amazing story😊
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