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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

chapter 25
Awesome updatee
kalpi using her power to protect the northsman
she used her power to kill the eastern gaurds
love the part
The northsman were so thankful to there lady for saving there lives
raghav saved her on the nick of time
raghav feeling guilt he couldn't protect kalpi and the pain and distress he went thorough
sammy lectured him for behaving like that as he thoroughly cared for his frnd and kalpi but in last he understood what raghav was going through
kalpi feeling guilt that she harmed someone with her power and feel like a murderer but raghav explained her so nicely and made her believe she did nothing wrng and saved his northsman lives
both thinking they dnt deserve each other
totallyy love the updatee
soo beautifully written



Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkiarora093

Wow ..what of kalpi have twins... plzzz make it happen. It will be a gr8 suprise... teasing session was super . Nice part keep updating.


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sukchandu


I know, that was so cruel way of killing him. I'm looking forward to see Joffrey get what he deserves 😡

And 2 updates on same day 🥳 🤪

I would love to see if they have twins, i love twins specially when its a boy and a girl 😉😛

Left us with a cliffhanger again 😆, but thats what makes worth the wait. I hope to see Kalpi all well with the power sealed in her😕

Thank you for double updates Vidya and i say again it is a marvellous update 👏🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Wow hey rendered their thank n pray t warriors dead in the battle
Hmm fun teasing kalpi
Kalpi fire seal ceremony
Update soon


Thank you Sweety, Niru, Nandini! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Superb updates dear. Relieved that Ragna and baby are safe. Raghav thought he is not deserve to have kalpi and kalpi thought same that for herself . She was looking for her lord husband desperately after waking up and thought that he is angry with her.on other hand Raghav w as thinking that he failed as a husband and didn't do enough to protect her.both of them are deeply madly in love. .

Love there dinner time with jhadavs. Pakya is too much. Northern men's too are strong , and they can produce 2 babies in one go😆😆, it was so funny and Raghav felt embraced in front of his in laws 😆😳.kalpi 's parents are relived to see their daughter ' happy married life. Want to see prem's head bow in kalpi's feet and begging his life but don't want any mercy for him. Why Raghav 's 1000 men are taking long to join him...hope thethereis not any problem. ..
This sealing process seems scary. Poor kalpi has to go through a lot. Hope everything will go as they aspects. 👏👏


Thank you Riaka 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Superb updates dear. Relieved that Ragna and baby are safe. Raghav thought he is not deserve to have kalpi and kalpi thought same that for herself . She was looking for her lord husband desperately after waking up and thought that he is angry with her.on other hand Raghav w as thinking that he failed as a husband and didn't do enough to protect her.both of them are deeply madly in love. .

Love there dinner time with jhadavs. Pakya is too much. Northern men's too are strong , and they can produce 2 babies in one go😆😆, it was so funny and Raghav felt embraced in front of his in laws 😆😳.kalpi 's parents are relived to see their daughter ' happy married life. Want to see prem's head bow in kalpi's feet and begging his life but don't want any mercy for him. Why Raghav 's 1000 men are taking long to join him...hope thethereis not any problem. ..
This sealing process seems scary. Poor kalpi has to go through a lot. Hope everything will go as they aspects. 👏👏


Thank you Riaka! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: b.baheti

Hey Vidya first of all thank you so much for incorporating the translations in your chappy.🤗

Now coming to the story. Its damn interesting and a very different concept.I haven't watched Game of thrones so have no idea what is it exactly but have listened about it through friends.

Anyways coming to the updates, I am really liking this royal love story which was basically arranged and now they both are deeply in love with each other. Raghav is an honourable man and Kalpana is a sweet adoring as well simple wife which has her own strength of not distinguishing between people and love for all (the way she took the baby in her arms forgetting that she is Lady of North) which makes her worthy of being Lady of North.

Prem and Pakhi as well as Neetu I think the way you have characterised them is commendable since they are villains and we are suppose to hate them and I'm actually hating them (My comment on your post for translations).

Coming to Sammy wow another Honourable man who knows his friend in and out. Loves to pull his leg and Raghav being sweet get in easily. (Preggy rules...when they were heading towards east)

And now coming to the main which I am guessing is somewhere core of this story, the inherent power that Kalpi possess of controlling fire which diminishes her own strength everytime when she is in extreme pain. The scene that I visualised while reading in the last three updates was something spellbinding. She knows she is captivated once the power starts ruling her yet she didn't harm her man nor her army was amazing.

All in all Vidya for me you have surpassed your own benchmark in terms of story from your previous FF "The twisting Kaleidoscope". 👏

Looking forward to read more...

Thanks for giving us such an amazing story😊



Thank you!! 😊 And once again it is nothing like Game of thrones really. Look at my note on pg 137 😊

And thanks Abextz!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

RagNa and the others paying their last respects to the fallen warriors was nice
I like that Kalpi feel a little better after hearing the Warriors thanking her for saving their lives...
Pakya teasing Kalpi throughout their dinner was amazing
And Raghav was no different lol
I like that they all had some fun after so long...
Kalpi punishing Raghav for a few minutes was fun 😆
The sealing ceremony is in full session. Poor Raghav is more worried than anyone
He love his lady wife so much...
Beautiful update and as always I enjoy reading



Thanks Nats! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

fabulous update

start was realy sad and emotional. North lost 100warriors coz of prem's did its disappointing😒 raghav n kalpana did their farewell with respect and gratitude.
Northernmen thanks kalpi for saving their life making her guilt less/vanish was touching.😊

raghav's love was true and it was visible to kalpi's parents as well, through raghav's slipped of tongue and their bonding with each other. Care, concern, understanding and love are so much between them.

Lol...pakya's teasing abt twins was realy funny😆 bt it wl love to see ragna having twins..one girl and one boy😳
and even raghav tease kalpi and kalpi punish him telling him to sleep on couch🤣
bt at last both end sleeping on cot😃

finaly day come when kalpi's power going to seal. And priest start their procedure. It is all new for me, i never heard abt dis power as well.
Vidya, i have one que. Isnt kalpi's palm get bruise when she hold that fire ball at Maharaja Fort?😲

hope kalpi n child will be safe.

Marvelous update😃


Glad you enjoyed the update Shonali! 😊 And thanks as well Swity Mango
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Magnificent update ! You must have done some research on all these 'ceremonies' to describe it well. Thanks for all the 'pain' you take to give us such thrills with mixture of romance in you story !!


Thank you! 😊 But research? Research from where? 😆 That's the thing about fantasy stories. You make things up. So all the ceremonies in this story I just made up. I stare at my ceiling and think of how I want it to flow.😆 It is not something that can be researched but rather something that has to be imagined. That is why my updates take a while to write, usually take a few hours a day once it involves stuff like the ceremonies and battle scenes because I have to think about how I want the scene to play out 😊

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