RagNa SS: Hamara Naya Watchman Chapter 10: Pg. 37 (Nov. 15) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Dear plzz update nxt chappy waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
so kalpana's rxns r justified nw😳
Well action, caring helping, mind blowing combo.😃
Come wid nxt part soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Beautiful update
Aww no wonder Kalpi is so hard on Raghav lol
His dad put Kalpi up to it...
I like that Raghav is realizing his rude behavior a little to others
Omg! Raghav has really out done himself when he was in school
All that mischief. Kalpi saving the files risking her life was awful
But I love that Raghav came in time and save Kalpi along with project info
I'm looking forward for RagNa friendship
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for delays guys... will update this soon... Mostly after one more update of Gauri-Kalpana...
I will work on this..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😡

Ejii!!

Kabse Waiting for u to update..!! 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Btw...Nice story aa..watchman Raghav.😃

I so wish Rags get more tortured 😛 ...mean hu mei 😉 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: cutechikku

Superb update dear luvd it
Luvd chote sahibs mischievousness 😉
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Thanks...
😛 I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

U know i thought kalpi and Raghav's dad had teamed up and are doing it coz kalpi's behavior seemed fishy for me from the day he joined 😆 but he made up this kind of story Cop and all 🤣 what a story teller he is and kalpi how will she react when she get to know about this angel of her future father in law 😛

that part where kalpi scold him for screaming and waking up everyone and viraj explanation to Raghav was nice he is slowly camparing his behaviour too with that of others, life teach us best lessons in hardest way possible Raghav is in same situation 😆

Raghav baba save kalpi and she is so loyal in that state she is thinking of how to answer her boss than her safety 😃
both updates are good 👍🏼



😆 Yes... Now that Nicely summarizes the whole update...

and Whatever, I had plans to keep that whole part as mystery, why is Kalpana asking stupid questions to him about his previous works and stuff, but I guess, even this will do...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

lovely

update
ragn his dad
hmm dad knows all the deeds
rag saved kalpi n now a step towards friendship
update soon


Yes... Working on that Part for now... 😛😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive

Interesting concept and nice story but why is Kalpana so harsh ? Her attitude is not up to the mark . She too needs a lesson in behaviour .Raghavs character is understandable as he is spoilt n you are showing his gradual transformation very convincingly , but I am not satisfied with Kalpanas characterization . Totally my Pov dear as it's your story but felt it so -----


I am hoping now, it would make sense ... after chp.3 😊
Kalpana is just one confused soul here... and that's what i had made her... She has this tendency to often take wrong decisions and make herself get in trouble...
I would soon also focus on how she has added trouble by inviting Suraj as watchman.

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