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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
Suprb update Mini.. Sorry to late swthrt... What an emotional update dear.. Rula diya re tumne.. 😭 and this Kamla.. 😡 dear plzz update nxt chappy and thnx.. U kno for what...

Hey,

ThanX for reading yaar.

Please so tell me what you like or dont like about the future updates. Also, if you have doubts that need to be cleared.

I appreciate you support... I will always need it. 😊

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farhana04

@farhana04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Very emotional prologue.

Eagerly waiting to read more.

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premap

@premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

What a 'heart-wrenching' prologue! Love the way Kalpi does not cry over her wounds but instead gets up and ready to go ,to do her chores ! What a strong spirit. Hope to read more of the FF soon. thanks ,dear.

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Skyfalls

@Skyfalls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Ok Ok I'm a big chicken I cried while reading ...

Omg how can a mother be so mean a to innocent child especially to her daughter ...Ahhh I hate Kamla 🤢🤢 ...My heart breaks for her ...She is so afraid of her mom ..I luv the last part where Rags had Kalpi the chocolate & pen ...

Mini amazing start Sweetheart 👏👏👏 ...hehehe where were you all this time

RES 😳😳

Where 's Child Service ? 😆😆

CONTINUE SOON 😉😉

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Such an awesome starting mini. Made me really sad for kalpi. Kamla is a very mean mother . Why is she like that? And what I like myist us the strength that kalpi exudes. I hope she conquers all and turns things around when she's older. I m waiting for chapter 1 . Continue soon.

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: farhana04
Very emotional prologue.
Eagerly waiting to read more.

ThanX yaar,

Do stay with us even when the going gets tough 😊

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: premap
What a 'heart-wrenching' prologue! Love the way Kalpi does not cry over her wounds but instead gets up and ready to go ,to do her chores ! What a strong spirit. Hope to read more of the FF soon. thanks ,dear.

Yes, Kalpi is has a good and string spirit. Not much options for her either. Hope to see you stay with this Kalpi 😊

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: GUYCAN
Ok Ok I'm a big chicken I cried while reading ...

Omg how can a mother be so mean a to innocent child especially to her daughter ...Ahhh I hate Kamla 🤢🤢 ...My heart breaks for her ...She is so afraid of her mom ..I luv the last part where Rags had Kalpi the chocolate & pen ...

Mini amazing start Sweetheart 👏👏👏 ...hehehe where were you all this time

RES 😳😳

Where 's Child Service ? 😆😆

CONTINUE SOON 😉😉

By you reaction now I am totally worried if I am doing the right thing by writing such a sorrowful tale on this forum.

Thank so much for giving this a try. 😊 I hope you will like this journey of Kalpi although its hard and harsh.

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sunyy
Such an awesome starting mini. Made me really sad for kalpi. Kamla is a very mean mother . Why is she like that? And what I like myist us the strength that kalpi exudes. I hope she conquers all and turns things around when she's older. I m waiting for chapter 1 . Continue soon.

According to me Kamla, has already been a mean mother... if Kalpi's mom was nice in my story I would have changed her name. Kamla will never be nice. 😛

Yes, My Kalpi is a wonderful soul. very Loveable and positive always. 😊