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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: GUYCAN
Mimi how r u sweetie ?

DOing good buddy!! working on the update. 😕

ps- Y do ya always call me Mimi? Na its okie... one more name added to the kitty.😆

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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

LOVE ...

A thirteen year old Kalpi ...Is so humble...she cooks for her family ...cleans for them and does whatever possible things she can to help out...she tries her best to please her parents...

What does she wants in return ???? love...

Her father seems to be fond of her...

What is her mothers problem ?? Why is she always taunting her???

Prem is such a rascal...a big bully...why is he picking on Kalpi ???

I am glad Kalpi doesn't have desire for others fancy food...she doesn't have choice does she???

And how dare kamla ...compares..Kalpi with the other rich brats?.

Gosh!!!! She is such a heartless woman...

Will Kalpi ...always be this unfortunate ...Mini...????😭

I want Kalpi to get her share of Love...

The pen Raghav gave her ...is the lucky charm...she thinks...

She wishes for love...

Will Kanha...grant her this wish????

Mini...this is a Heartfelt ...and ...emotional ...update...sweetie...

You made me cry...😭 But I admit...I love this brave Kalpi ...

Thank you...

Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

nice update 😃kalpi I don't feel pity on her but proud that she at that tender age manage to be so mature 👏

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

you seem to be a very committed writer. I am glad. Give your best ,to your satisfaction, we will appreciate it. Thanks for this 'sad' update. Feel Kalpi's pain and hurt. For a 13 yr old kid , she has leant tolerance of pain.

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ssna

@ssna

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Loved it dear
Fab update.
Y no ragna talk?
Hope in next part we get dat.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Beautifully written chapter
Kalpi is trying her best to please her mother but no matter what she does Kamla also put her down
I like that atleast Kalpi dad is there for her...
Hope someday Kalpi get all the happiness she deserve

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Anusuya

@akshara82

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

A very good start fr a wonderful story..
woulf love to read more..
i cried fr kalpi..
She s bearing everything just to get love frm evryone.
i hope she finds it soon..
Kanna will give her d love soon rite???

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

How I wish rag come t her help her from prem plz

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Vsapras
LOVE ...
A thirteen year old Kalpi ...Is so humble...she cooks for her family ...cleans for them and does whatever possible things she can to help out...she tries her best to please her parents...
What does she wants in return ???? love...
Her father seems to be fond of her...
What is her mothers problem ?? Why is she always taunting her???
Prem is such a rascal...a big bully...why is he picking on Kalpi ???
I am glad Kalpi doesn't have desire for others fancy food...she doesn't have choice does she???
And how dare kamla ...compares..Kalpi with the other rich brats?.
Gosh!!!! She is such a heartless woman...
Will Kalpi ...always be this unfortunate ...Mini...????😭
I want Kalpi to get her share of Love...
The pen Raghav gave her ...is the lucky charm...she thinks...
She wishes for love...
Will Kanha...grant her this wish????

Mini...this is a Heartfelt ...and ...emotional ...update...sweetie...
You made me cry...😭 But I admit...I love this brave Kalpi ...
Thank you...