OS : Paakezaah - Pg 3 17/1 - Page 9

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive

Mariee what an absolute darling of a story . Very very different but very lovable too this instant Wala love .😳 Enchanting my dear !!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

RagNa found each other in the most unconventional places lol
Kalpi acting as a man was cute ;)
I love their confession
Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Mariee too good os ya#superb#awesome#superb story from ur khazana none of ur stories can be phaltu or bakwaas too good.

Originally posted by: abxetz

Waw mariee your a brilliant writer darling 👏 👏 thanks for this wonderful ragna os 🤗

Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Awesome OS! Maru, you nailed it perfectly... A fabulous job! 👏 I love the fact that you get this writing ka keeda sometimes. Can't say it was short ( I read it in 2 breaks) but it was amazingly sweet! Too good yaar!

Though love is as Sammy says ' like a traditional achar' , I loved this instant coffee wala recipe of love too. Raghav Singhania, the business man who never believed in love , who thought his life was boring had a fantastic encounter with a woman in the disguise of a man and he became a changed man. It was sweet to see him open up to Junaid after knowing their common interests and he actually started having a good time. Kalpana had already fallen for him but since she's parading herself as a man, she can't tell him the truth...

The scene where Raghav asks her to join him in the waterfall for a swim was hilarious. Poor lady! She was terrified at the prospect of that.

Loved it when Raghav finally realises he loves her and goes to her drenched in the rain. The proposal was awesome! He was even ready to wait till she finishes her project. How considerate! All in all it was fantastic. You have excelled again! Oops! Sorry to mention the song... its one of my favourites too 😳

I know there's no point in apologising for being late. I know I'm extremely late this time. Please forgive me ... I'm in the process of reading and commenting as and when I get time.

Originally posted by: mariee

I took 8-9 hours in a line to write this entire thing ...but it was fun re ...the fact that I was busy drooling behind the song playing in the bg.

Hahahah...maru ka Raghav hamesha tubelight hi raha hai ..lol...pyaar realization always late. Ekdum antique hote hai ki nahi maru ke Raghav ?😉

Kalpi 4 ft ki nahi hai re... & waise bhi she had come prepared as junaid

Heheh ...me too like that end wali line sho

At the end ...tysm for this comment

Love, Mariee

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Marie!! I didn't know you updated and continued!! 😲

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Wow!! Maire for just three days all this happened ;) you're awesome;) I loved it when he told her that he's in love with kalpana;) that was awesome!! You managed to explain genuinely what is love,how one feels when they're in love, and how one expresses their love!! Damn talented you are 👏 and you always leave me in awe with your originalty 😉 this was super awesome Marie!! Another one?? What say?? 😉
Next time Plz let me know you continued your update!! I had no idea!! While reading kiaras reply to you I realized that hey what is she talking about?? I didn't read that!! Then I went to pg 3;)
In case you missed my first reply?! It's on pg 8 😉

Originally posted by: appyK

I know i know mujhe phirse daat padegi for being late.. Iss baari mein bhuli nahi but time probs so hardly read any updates and finally read the os..

Wrong warning.. Its impossible to read the os in three parts coz ek baar padhna chaalu kiya toh rukne ka mann hi nahi kar sakta.. 😉

Fabulous story .. Ab itna recommend kiya hai toh gaana bhi sunn lungi..

Btw really loved the os..😃