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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Chakuliii
kya baat
ur writing keeda is making u write such beautiful OS's!
Mazaaa aaa gayaaa

Ty Priyeee...😳

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
nice story maru... Nd i 2 luv this song...

Yea ...the song's gr8 I know !!

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Hay awesome update really sweet is ragna meeting their sharing n soon they realise their love n the kiss they share really love rag in it

Heya.. Super glad that u liked it !!😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: lolor
Beautiful...amazing wonderful..awesome...duperb...loved it
👏

Tysm😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sunyy
Loved it ... So awesome. Loved kalpi as guy and how rags started liking her inner beauty and then her outer beauty. Just beautiful absolutely beautiful. I m in awe how u wrote it all in one go. 🤗

Yep that was the exact aim of the entire os ...showing that Raghav first liked her inner beauty & then couldn't escape her outer 1 as well...

Tysm...happy dat u liked it !!

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ovee
Loved ur os ''paakezaah". Awesome update.

Ty😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: switymango
Maruuu amazing OS 😛
loved Paakezaah...😆😆 forest wild love 😳😆😆
u r a fab writer dear...loved read ur story's ..👏👏

Ty swati

& glad DAT u liked the os

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Awesome OS! Maru, you nailed it perfectly... A fabulous job! 👏 I love the fact that you get this writing ka keeda sometimes. Can't say it was short ( I read it in 2 breaks) but it was amazingly sweet! Too good yaar!

Though love is as Sammy says ' like a traditional achar' , I loved this instant coffee wala recipe of love too. Raghav Singhania, the business man who never believed in love , who thought his life was boring had a fantastic encounter with a woman in the disguise of a man and he became a changed man. It was sweet to see him open up to Junaid after knowing their common interests and he actually started having a good time. Kalpana had already fallen for him but since she's parading herself as a man, she can't tell him the truth...

The scene where Raghav asks her to join him in the waterfall for a swim was hilarious. Poor lady! She was terrified at the prospect of that.

Loved it when Raghav finally realises he loves her and goes to her drenched in the rain. The proposal was awesome! He was even ready to wait till she finishes her project. How considerate! All in all it was fantastic. You have excelled again! Oops! Sorry to mention the song... its one of my favourites too 😳

I know there's no point in apologising for being late. I know I'm extremely late this time. Please forgive me ... I'm in the process of reading and commenting as and when I get time.

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Marie!! I didn't know you updated and continued!! 😲

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Wow!! Maire for just three days all this happened ;) you're awesome;) I loved it when he told her that he's in love with kalpana;) that was awesome!! You managed to explain genuinely what is love,how one feels when they're in love, and how one expresses their love!! Damn talented you are 👏 and you always leave me in awe with your originalty 😉 this was super awesome Marie!! Another one?? What say?? 😉
Next time Plz let me know you continued your update!! I had no idea!! While reading kiaras reply to you I realized that hey what is she talking about?? I didn't read that!! Then I went to pg 3;)
In case you missed my first reply?! It's on pg 8 😉

Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago

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