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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Update was good n intrestng one..!!
So raghav himself had said her to leave 😲 dat is sumthng diffrnt.. eager to knw more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Lovely update dear. I read all chapters. Pls update next chappy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
CHAPTER -3
"What raghav are u gone mad????
The day after tommorow u and pakhi are going to be engaged and now u are telling me that u can't marry her .
U are the one who is desperate to marry pakhi to take ravenge from kapoors but now what happen suddenly that in a day u change ur decisson"- sammy said
" i admit that i'm the one who want to marry her and now also it's my decision that i don't want to marry her and for now plz don't ask further questions on this topic and do what i say call the lawer and ask him vo ready the papers and plz for some time leave me alone " - raghav said
S- do what u want to but atleast tell me that now what are u planning to do with kapoors and what explanation u are ging to give pakhi
R- i know very well how to handle her u just wait and watch and for sometime leave me alone
S- okk,i'm leaving , gud night and take care(after that sammy left from there)
Sammy how this night is gud when she is not with me raghav thought and remember the night after her confession

...
FLASHBACK
(after kalpi confession)
Raghav stop his car in front of chawl and take her hand in his and place a kiss n it .
Both don't want that the night end.
Bcoz today they found the warmth , love and care with each other for which they are carving for since ages .
Raghav has nobody which he claim as his and hence he turn in stone but kalpi have her parents but despite of this she is alone .
bcoz, for her mother pakhi is always her first priorty and her baba and dada never speak for her.
But today they are finally with each other they know very well now they have someone whom they claim as only his/her
,whom those love only belong to them and they not need to share whom love with others .
But kamala call kalpi and ask her to come home as it's too late and raghav want to spend some more time with kalpi so he ask sammy to drop pakhi as kalpi need to do some changes in a presentation urgently so that he get some more time to spend with kalpi and now they are outside singhania chawl both take leave with heavy heart but despite of this they are happy as now they know they only belong to each other .
Kalpi enter in her home and busy in thoughts of her love , her raghav when kamala noticed that kalpi is blushing , she thought that she need to ask kalpi about this but her chain of thoughts broken by paakhi calls who want to share her day events with kamala and again her focus
shift on pakkhi..
The night is quiet long for both raghav and kalpi bcoz sleep was far away from there eyes and there though only occupied with each other memories
kalpi try hard to sleep but all in vain so she decide to go outside for some fresh air and on other side raghav position is not better than kalpi .
He is tossing and turning on his bed but he miss her so much so decided to meet her and immediatly grab his car keys and headed toward chawl ( love side effects u know)
jise zindagi dund rhi h
kya y vo mukam mera h
yha chan s bas ruk jau
kyun dil y mujhe kehta h
jasbaat naye s mile h
jaane kya asar y hua h
ek aas mili phir mujko
jo qubool kisi n kiya h

He stop his car at some distance from chawl so that no one notice him and start walking toward his destination his love so that he atleast feel her presence

kisi shayer ki gazal jo de
ruh ko sukun k pal
koi mujko yun mila h jaise
banjaare ko ghar
naye mausum ki sahar
y sard main dopehr
koi mujko yun mila h
jaise banjarre ko ghar
Kalpi came near temple bcoz she want to share his happiness with someone .
She closes her eyes and thanks bappa for sending someone's love in her life
( unknown to the fact that a pair of eyes watching her from some distance and a small smile automatically spread on his lips )
Raghav can't belive his luck he came to chawl so that he atleast feel her presence and here she is standing in front of him thanking bappa for sending him in her life

jaise koi kinara deta ho sahara
mujhe vo mila kisi mood par
koi raat k tara karta ho ujala
vaise hi rashan kare vo seher
dard mere vo bhula hi gya
kuch aisa asar hua
jina mujhe phir s vo sikha rha

"Thanks bappa from my side too for sending an angel in my life , for giving me a second chance to live life again , for sending love in my life, for sending u in my life " - saying so raghav came and stand beside her
naye mausam ki sehar
y sard main dopehr
koi mujhko yun mila h
jaise banjaree ko ghar
jaise banjaree ko ghar
at first she can't belive that raghav is here
She thought that he is her imagination but when he hugs her she came out of her thought and realize that he is actually here with her aur vo bhi subah k 4 bje...
Then he take her with him in a nearby park and both spend some sweet moments with each other
FLASHBACK END
...

He hug her photo tightly and said
"vo bhi ek raat thi aur y bhi ek raat h
tb bhi inn aankhon main neend nhi thi
ab bhi inn aankhon main neend nhi h
bs fark itna h tb tum mere saath thi
ab tum mere saath nhi
tb mujhe zindagi dubara mili thi
aur ab mujhe pta chala maine dubara zindagi kho di"
...

Thank u all for bearing my torture , hope i don't disappont u.
sorry for mistakes
and one more important thing hope u like songs actually mujhe songs sunna bahut zyada pasnd hain and i sucks in writing romantic scene so add songs but if u dont like then i stop adding songs in update for otherwise if u have any song u want me to add then plz tell me
and plz suggest me some name for this ss
and if u dont like any part then tell me i edit that part and if u have some suggestions fpr this story then plz tell me
ab bus meri bakwas yhi pr khatam

@mariee - i also like tadapta raghav so in future updates i torture him more promise
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Nice update. Lovely flashback.pls update some info about kalpi soon. Waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
nice update neha... I luvd it nd i 2 luvd songs nd iluvd this song... Plzz continue writng songs... Nd u said u suck in romactic update.. Well mei usse bhi buri hun... Accordng 2 me it was fab
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
No dear nahi is update boating dha ornahi ap hamai torture Karrahaiho or rahi bath romantic scene ki tho har writers ke alag alag style hote hai or I like your writing style its different 😛 and update is superb 👏 or meriliye jealous raghav dekhavoge beacuase I like jealous raghav 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Really nice update neha plz plz update soon.wanna knw wr is kalpu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
NOTE
decide which tittle suit this ss
1. - ragna ss - story of two wounded souls
2.- ragna ss- ways of life
and if u have any plz suggest
for those who want kalpi back
frnds abhi main kalpi ko story main nhi la sakti bcoz for now everyone each person who hurt her is need to find her importance in there life but i u all want then i'll try to give small intro after some chapters
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Lovely update but please start telling where kalpi is and what she has been doing for past year. And maybe move a bit faster to where rags finds kalpi. But please don't have kalpi forgive him easily. Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Wounded soul is good I mean best

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