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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER-2
"raghav wake up"- kalpi said , he open his eyes and found kalpi by his side .
Kalpi the only word left from his lips
tears start forming in his eyes again and he hug her tightly fresh tears start flowing from his eyes
kalpi plz don't leave me plz i need u
plz by my side always
i'm so sorry that i doubt u plz
plz forgive me
plz don't leave me again - raghav said
Kalpi smiles sadly and say,
Raghav look at me
( by breaking hug he look at her but can't let go her hand he hold her hand possesively)
i'm always with u whenever u need me i'm always with u by ur side ,
u need only to close ur eyes and only for once call me and u always found me by ur side always
(saying so she closes his eyes)
"Kalpi u trust me na i never want to hurt u sorry for that day
I'm gone mad that day and in anger i hurt u ask u to leave me, leave the city and nvr show me ur face again but i never meant that u know na" - raghav said
(silance)
kalpi why are u not answering me tell me u are not angry with me na ,
u forgiive me na
(again no answer )
he panicked kalpi answer mee and immedatly open his eyes he found nothing kalpi is no where
Kalpi ...kalpi plz stop this plz where are u plz stop this hide & seek kalpi (he start screming her name loudly)
Raghav Raghav
Wake up raghav - sammy said
( when sammy enter in raghav room he find him lying unconsesly beside his bed and his one hand is injured badly and in unconcisness he is muttring kalpi's name again and again and again he's trying to wake him up but he is only muttering continiosly kalpi's name)
Sammy shake raghav by his sholders and shouts loudly "RAGHAV WAKE UP"
Raghav open his eyes and start looking here and there kalpi he said
Sammy is some what confused bcoz in past one year never for once he took kalpi name and suddely today he is continuiosly looking for kalpi
"Raghav kalpi is no here , she left us bcoz u ask her for this and after that..." -Sammy said
Raghav know very well why sammy stop in middle
He immidately control his emotions and tell him that now i don't use pakhi for revenge plan now we need to plan something else for kapoors ...

Tell me friends how is it hope i don't dissapoint u Sorry if u find it boring and for mistakes
abxetz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Neha its interesting dear. 😛 past mein aisa kya hua Jo ragsnanai kalpi ko choddiya zaroor us kapoors Nazi hi kuch kiya hoga 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
@abxetz - u will find out in further updates😉
Edited by ....neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Really lovely
Poor rag update soon
maarushkaa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
it was indeed am interesting update neha
I have always loved tadapte taraste guilt filled men ... & this updte was toh completely filled upto the brim with my fav tadapta hua Raghav 😆😆

I know i might be 1 of the very few who might tell this ...but Raghav ko thoda aur zyaada tadpao 😈
😈

Do update soon

MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 11 years ago
MagicalMadness thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Will kalpi come back to him? Pls update soon.
charvi3 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Interesting story dear...but where is kalpi
SamBricka thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
neha... Meri jaan... Meri paan ki dukan... Update dedena re baba...
swara2504 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awsm update...👍🏼
give next part soon with nice name🤓
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice story neha update soon

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