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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
chapter - 5
Stop
and everyone attantion shift on door
Police enter in kapoor mantion with some ngo member and a 3 and a half month child
Inspector come forward and ask who is mr. Kapoor here we need to talk with him
Sahil came there and ask what's the matter inspector and why u stop this engegment
In- we are not here to stop engagment we need to talk to u
Sk- inspector here my daughters engagment going on so we discuss this later
In- mr. Kapoor we are not ur employess who follow ur order we are here to hand over this child to u
Sk- child ???
( neetu ,prem ,paakhi and sahil got tensed)
...
FLASHBACK
( a day before)
Kapoor mantion
Some rang bell of kapoor mantion
Neetu open door of there house and no one is there but she got tensed when she saw a baby of almost 3 and half month on there door and there is a latter with him
When she open letter she start screaming sahil , sahil where are u??
Sahil came down and her what's the matter?
N- how could u do this to me ??
How could u not for once u think about what happen when it got revlled th...
Sk- neetu stop drama and tell me clearly what happen??
N- u don't think for once before cheating me and now i'm doing drama
( meanwhile prem and pakhi also came in hall bcoz neetu is continiously screming )
Sk- tuhara dimag kharab ho gya h .
Okk, u don't want to tell me then leaveit chillati rho aise hi( and he turn to go)
Pr- mom what happen what's the matter
N- ur dad cheat me he has an affair and look at this child he is his son
Sahil,prem& pakhi in unioun what???
Sk- y kya bakwas hain???? ( what L
ononsense is this)
I don't know whose child is this and maine tumhe cheat nhi kiya h , tumhe to jhelne ki himmat nhi h mujme main aur ek headache kyun pallonga
N- look prem now it's confirm it's his child only y he call me headache and now what i tell my friends when they came to know about ur dad's affair
Pr- mom will u plz relax and how could u say that it's dad so...
N- read this letter and read loudly
( prem open letter and start reading it)
Mr. Kapoor now take care of ur child
" but neetu in this letter dad name is not written may be bhai..."- pakhi said
Shut up pakhi u know what are u saying maine aisa kuch nhi kiya - prem yell
( neetu , pakhi and prem start arguing)
When sahil yell STOP and trio look at him
Sk- someone came and put a child and this noye on our door and we start blaming each other i think it's some misunderstanding we need to find out who piut this child here i tthink we need to ask watchman he must know
(and with sahil call watchman in his house)
Wm- yes sir
Sk- who came here and put this child ???
Wm- sir nobody came
(Prem grab his collar and ask him to tell truth otherwise he handover him to police watchman get scared and tell him that he is at gate but nobody came but sir some people fighting in front of gate i only go there to solve out and remove them)
Sk- u may go now
P- but dad wh...
Sk- it's someone trap
N- but what do we do now
Pr- we need to call police
Sk- no , we can't do this this child is here with this note and if we call them then they ask 100 question and
this news spread as fire in jungle and tommorow pakhi and raghav are going to be engaged and if this news sperad then ...
" no, we can't inform anyone i can't risk my engagment after my so much planning i'm going to engage with him no i can't risk it" - pakhi yell
N - then what we do now
Pr - i think we leave this child somewhere like garden or something
( after thinking a while sahil said i think it's better idea bcoz we need to sort it out today itself as tommorow is engagment but it's risky )
N- don't worry sahil nobody is at home except us we only need to shut watchman mouth and we leave this child somewhere in night
All noded
At mid night sahil and prem leave child in a garden

Flashback end
...
Done . Sry if u find it illogical and for mistakes plz bear with me but this flashback is needed and soon ur all question's get answered plz keep patiance
SamBricka thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
šŸ‘ nice dear.. 🤣 mr kapoor take care of ur kid.. 🤣 nd u kno what when pakhi said ispe to dad ka naam nahi likha hai may be bhai that was suprb dear 🤣 🤣 🤣 cant stop my self 🤣 plzzz update nxt chappy soon waitng
lolor thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hehe...i like raghavs this plan to trouble kapoors & stop engg...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Nice update šŸ˜† poor sahil kapoor 🤣
ovee thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nice update.interesting. Pls update soon .
shahsb_26 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Neha..!!! Pls.. Pls.. Give index on page 1 and PM me ..!!! Yaar :( I wanna read this story..!!! Raghav is Sad Sad In this story..!!! I love stories where he has to BELLOFY the Papads and make Chutneys..!!! WhICH CVS never gave..!! screw them.,!! but pls.. index dedo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
very nice story..read in one age...plz continue and pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Lovely update dearšŸ¤£šŸ˜†...
Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
@shahsb_26- index is there on page 1 -
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Lovely update
I can't wait to no who child is that

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