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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Nice update Swetha 😊

Kalpana is like a tom boy 😆 Wearing torn jeans, tops 😛😆

Love the two friends Asha and Nisha 😳

Kalpana gives her dad so much work and even for joining dance classes she puts a condition before him. 😆 So sweet. 😳

Waiting to know what happens next when Aryan's parents meet Kalpana. 😳

Edited by erikalui - 10 years ago

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Me 3

yaha kya dekh rahi ho shweta...see below..my comment is waiting for u to read,😆😉

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rani214

@rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Sweetie fabulous ff ...Lovely prologue

Luv ur writing style...stalking style... wil hav fun reading it also happy dat its pakhi n kamla free story😆

Chap 1- so sad kalpi apne dream man ka chehra nahi dekh saki...patil uncle wrong timing

kalpi n patil uncle convo was nice...loved it

Aryan too is so cute

Chap 2 -kalpi to puri tomboy hai ...interesting

Like nisha n kalpi convo

Shayad mere kalpu ka dil toot jaayega kal 😔...also expecting raghav's entry 😉

Eagerly w8ng for next update n sorry dear for late cmmnt

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

I'm loving this style of writing
It's a reality show where the host is keeping a eye on the people and narrating their activities lol
Kalpi and her dad relationship is amazing. I love the bond they share
I hope Kalpi don't get hurt by Aryan. Asha and her big mouth had to call kalpi :)
I can't wait for Kalpi to meet her love Raghav ;)
Wonderful updates

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Swetha mujhe pm nahi mila😡 jaa mein comment nahi karti ( waise bhi abhi tak padha nahi..tujhe suna ne ke liye comment kiya😆)

Ok sirf accha update that issliye comment kar rahi hu...

Kalpi is jhalli.. Wow... Mr.perfect toh aayega.. Raghav toh aayega..

Darn that jhooti informer😡

Ab agar next time pm nahi mila toh jab tu soyegi tab tere bed pe leeches milenge😉

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Nice update shweta..

kalpi wore tore jeans ..

her dad.care for her very much...his talk with his wife's photo was too good.

nd that boss.,kalpi put cotton in her ears...loved it..

waiting for his mr. Perfectionist..

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

You did not pm me for this update😡

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

NAUC ka asar itthe b.. Ur Kalpi is inspired by Nisha. N u named one of her frn as Nisha as well... Neways fabulous update.

I am sure Kalpi will her Mr. perfect on Ganesha chaturthi.. she might not recognize him but she will meet him na?? Aryan is a stupid guy. creating MU in name of surprises n her frn Asha... i feel he never took Kalpi's name but she just thought it's for Kalpi. I am happy that Kalpi is not in love with Aryan and just ready to accept his proposal coz he is the one with whom she is most comfortable.

Sorry for late. Continue soon.🤗

Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: erikalui
Nice update Swetha 😊
Kalpana is like a tom boy 😆 Wearing torn jeans, tops 😛😆

Love the two friends Asha and Nisha 😳

Kalpana gives her dad so much work and even for joining dance classes she puts a condition before him. 😆 So sweet. 😳

Waiting to know what happens next when Aryan's parents meet Kalpana. 😳

Aww Erika, lovely feedback🤗

Intoducing new friend of Kalpi in next chapter😃 Hope you like him too😛😊

Updating next chapter in some time😳

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
I'm loving this style of writing
It's a reality show where the host is keeping a eye on the people and narrating their activities lol
Kalpi and her dad relationship is amazing. I love the bond they share
I hope Kalpi don't get hurt by Aryan. Asha and her big mouth had to call kalpi :)
I can't wait for Kalpi to meet her love Raghav ;)
Wonderful updates

Thanks Natasha, Ya Kalpi will meet Raghav very soon😳

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