Hota kya hai yeh pyaar? SS/FF - Upd Chap 5 Pg 18 10/09 ;)

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Swetha, I cannot reply to any of your PMs 😆

I get this message "WhiteQueen has exceeded the maximum number of Private Messages they are allowed to receive." 🤣

Purane PMs ko delete maar aur space badha 😛😆

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: erikalui
Swetha, I cannot reply to any of your PMs 😆
I get this message "WhiteQueen has exceeded the maximum number of Private Messages they are allowed to receive." 🤣

Purane PMs ko delete maar aur space badha 😛😆

O teri😆 Main soch rahi thi ki tuje kya hua PM kyun nahi kar rahi hai😆

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niranjana

@niru04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Nice story.ur writing style so good.update.soon

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Loved this narrative style.. Nicely written swetha.. Continue soon..

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lovely

@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Wow, Shweta, your writing style is so different. Its really good. Loved it. Waiting for the next update.

Thanks 😊

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sweet_aditi

@sweet_aditi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

awesome start dear 👏👏
i lov ur way of writing.. n thanx 4 pakhi n kamala free ff 😆
nw update next part soon 😃
n when will be raghav ki entry?? is dat khadoos boss of kalpi is raghav??
lots of q na?? 😃
so update jaldi se 😳

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

wonderful shwet@

ur style of presenting the story like we r watching the beginnig of a movie.

nice introduction to the characters of the story..🤗

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

It's awesome sweetheart.. specially the way u narrated it n mind it before entering the rooms... U r not allowed to enter RagNa room while they are doing *Ahem Ahem*. U can close ur eyes and tell us what u heard.😆 Thodi cheating b chalegi... u can peep from keyhole but unhe disturb na krna.😉

So Kalpi is not able to see his Mr. Right's face in dreams.. Aryan has gf n Kalpi is gonna be heartbroken on knowing it. Great. Thanks for pm.

BTW hows u?? I heard u were unwell.Hope everything is fine now.

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jiya

@SJ001

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Awesome update and love the way you narrate the story, continue soon

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow swetha its awesome👏👏
loved the way u narrated the story...
i loved kalpi and patel uncle scene😳
kalpi is chooo nice 😛
aryan ka gal frnd😲
aryan ka scene bhi bahut acha hai yaar😊
overall loved a lot...
its so interesting...
continue soon dear😳

Thanks Sharanya, You can also give some suggestion and Ideas, I'll try to add those scenes😃

Updating Chapter 2 waiting for your res😆