Hota kya hai yeh pyaar? SS/FF - Upd Chap 5 Pg 18 10/09 ;)

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Nyc update... RagNa meet n ofcors fight 😆What else could they do? M looking forward to reading more 😳
Again commenting without pm, but this time giving benefit of doubt that u wud've pm-ed later 😉😛

I'm sorry I didn't PM anyone for last update, sowie😳

But this time you commented before😛😆 I completion of my update😆

This as you already given comments, I have not Pmed you, Next time will surely PM you😳

Thanks for the feedback dear🤗

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arya

@aryagr

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

The update was awesome. U ve gr8 style of writing.

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: fairylover
Are we not going to get pm kya?? ur story reminds me of so many characters in one.. i am loving this Kalpi a lot.. She is cool n lovely.
N tra NAUC fever sach m ni utara.. Ab bunty b aa gya yaha??? But this bunty is so sweet n he made idol n Nisha's potrait as well. I m dying to know what Rags was doing in that appartment. But loved their first meeting.. Soon thier fights will turn into love.. Kalpi had to meet her life partner n she met.

update soon n why r we not getting pms?? Any issue?? If not than pm me yar.. i do not want to miss ur updates.

Nahi me Vish, 2nd update me thoda lazy this issliye PM nahi kiya per 3rd update abhi kiya and you commented before I sent a PM to you😆

Haan dhek maine bunty ko bhi yahan le aayi,😆 NAUC me itne sare characters hai , I'm using their names😉😆

I want them to fight a lot before they fall in love, what you suggest?? itna jaldi pyaar nahi hoga😃

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: aryagr
The update was awesome. U ve gr8 style of writing.

Thanks Arya😳 Trying my best, as this is my first FF😃

Edited by WhiteQueen - 10 years ago

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: WhiteQueen

Nahi me Vish, 2nd update me thoda lazy this issliye PM nahi kiya per 3rd update abhi kiya and you commented before I sent a PM to you😆

Haan dhek maine bunty ko bhi yahan le aayi,😆 NAUC me itne sare characters hai , I'm using their names😉😆

I want them to fight a lot before they fall in love, what you suggest?? itna jaldi pyaar nahi hoga😃

Ab I was toh checking ur reply n update dekh k mne reply kr dia.😆

Let them fight re!! I enjoy such scenes more than romantic ones... But dekhna kahi apas m lad na mare!! unse saare weapons chhupa dena.. Their tongues are sharp enough.😉

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Ooo... Tujhe Raghav interesting laga.. Arey kisi ko toh kalpi ke liye chod de..😆

Btw great update.. Kalpi ka mr.perfect finally aa gaya..😃 Iss baari pm bheja is liye bach gayi tu warna leeches ready the.. 😉

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: fairylover

Ab I was toh checking ur reply n update dekh k mne reply kr dia.😆

Let them fight re!! I enjoy such scenes more than romantic ones... But dekhna kahi apas m lad na mare!! unse saare weapons chhupa dena.. Their tongues are sharp enough.😉

Both charaters are equally navie and headstrong people, I miss writting in hindi, coz some reader only understand english, agar hindi me hota tho mast dialogs nikalte😆

Did you read this, did i forget to send PM(may ber) check this😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112660057

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Arey i missed it.. So manu unread pms.. may be I missed.. Anyways u r among those whose pm I generally open on time so may be u missed to send pm. Let me check that n comment there.😊

Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago

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Wild_Cat

@Wild_Cat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

kaal padh k unres karungi nd nw updts k liye cmmnt v...😃

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WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: appyK
Ooo... Tujhe Raghav interesting laga.. Arey kisi ko toh kalpi ke liye chod de..😆
Btw great update.. Kalpi ka mr.perfect finally aa gaya..😃 Iss baari pm bheja is liye bach gayi tu warna leeches ready the.. 😉

Tere leeches ke darr se hi PM bheja😆

Agar Raghav pe dore nahi dalungi, toh usse kaise intersting bana sakthi hoon bol??😆

Usse pehle main aachi tarah nihar loon phir kalpi ke liye chod dungi😳😃