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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update. Niw this time pkz update soon.
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Hai vish update is super.thanks for the rangnalicious update dear 😛
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Lovely,cute update dear. Waiting for special ragna movement.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really great update. Glad to read after a long time. Continue soon
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Though I have decided to update another FF but I was comfortable with Rachu and Romi so giving another part of it only. Thank u for commenting on previous parts... I will reply to all of u later...n I promise this time u will get individual replies.

Dedicating it to Prii aka Priya_Remix as the poem was written by her. Thanks Prii... As i promised... I am using ur 1st poem.

Sorry for all the mistakes and chhotu sa update but things are still not going in my way... Some unexpected guests arrived. Again no proof readin so expect tons of mistakes.

For once they had let their emotions flow freely... The fear of facing the other person was not letting them pull themselves and they were still hugging each other in such a way that they can hide their faces from each other... For Rachu it was the kiss of love... It was her best moment of life... She was always scared of being kissed as her classmates used to tell her that kiss is first step towards physical attraction but here she felt like being kissed by her soulmate... There was no sexual tension between them and none of them wanted to even deepen their kiss... And she was pleasantly happy for her 1st kiss of life... But for Romi it was a weak moment... he was still scolding himself for not being able to control his emotions... He was guilty for breaking Rachu's trust and touching her.. but somewhere he too enjoyed the kiss... For the first time, he was feeling as if he is not alone in this world.. but in his denial mode he was not able to realize the reason of his happiness... Finally Rachu sees the remote kept on his side n finds a way to break the hug and that awkwardness... She switches on the tv and quickly breaks the hug while focusing on the show... Romi too feels relieved on realizing that she is not interested to talk about it further... Though both of them were stealing glances at each other but none of them spoke a single word...

"Rachu... this is not going to work!! Find a way to start the conversation... Make him feel comfortable... u did nothing wrong. " Rachu thought in her mind. She notices a biscuit packet kept on the bed and wonders who kept it...

"Biscuit... I just love it. Can I have one??" She said loudly while grabbing the packet... Romi realizes that it's the same packet which he had brought for Bruno. He snatches it from her before she can eat one...

"What is this?? " Rachu asked shockingly.

"This biscuits are expired... u can't eat it." Romi said with a stern face and throws it out of the room... but unfortunately it lands in the balcony.

Rachu makes faces on this and thinks... "Thank God... he at least talked to me." She starts flipping the channel and finally decides to watch movie "Andaz Apna Apna". The next 2 hours were laughter riots for them coz of the movie... Though both of them remembering the kiss but pretending as if nothing happens... Finally Romi dozes off while watching the movie... Rachu covers him with the sheet and takes out her diary... She writes...

"Barson se rahi banjar zameen ki tarah

Par baarish ki boondein jo mujhpe padi zara

Ye Ehsaas hua kitni pyaasi thi mein

dhoond rahi thi tujhe, ye mere udaasi se bhare nain

Teri labon ne jo aaj mujhe is tarah chuaa

Mano ye banjar zameen bhi phoolon ka baagh hua!!"

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@John's Adda

John and Sammy are sitting somewhere in the dark and talking about their next deal when John's cell rings up... he was informed about Romi's location and John gets happy on hearing that he is with Rachu right now.

"Sammy... This Romi is really too good in his profession... I was really doubtful whether he will able to become her friend or not but he is already spending night at her home." John said to Sammy.

"What... Romi spending a night at Girl's place?? Dad... I hope he has not fallen for that girl and he won't cheat u. "

"No one can cheat me Sammy...I have already hired a man to keep an eye on him. Though Romi is not the kind of person who can fall in love but I still has to keep an eye on him as he doesn't know anything about our business and if he will ever come to know about it then I will have to kill him."

"But why don't u include him in our business?? When he can kill someone then why can't he sell drugs??"

"No Sammy...It's not same for Romi... he kills only those people who are threat to me or who had done something bad to us but he can't play with life of innocent kids and youngsters... He made it very clear on the first day when he joined our business... It was just his love for Rani that is stopping him from leaving the business."

"Rani.. who is she??"

"When u brought Romi home... He wanted help from me for searching his childhood friend Rani and I promised him that I will use all my sources to find her... Till now he believes that I have hired a detective to find her details but in reality I have not hired anyone for such stupid task..."

"Dad.. what If he falls in love with Rachu and forgets Rani??"

"His love for Rani is so strong that he can't fall in love with anyone else and I m sure about it. So u do not worry. "

Sammy nods in head in little confusion as he knows Romi very well and he is not the kind of person who can spend even 1 day with someone and here, he is spending one whole night with a girl.

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Next Day Morning...

Rachu wakes up early and looks at Romi who was sleeping peacefully... She gives a quick peck on his forehead... He moves a bit but she runs to take shower before he can open his eyes... He looks around to see who was there and sleeps again on not finding anyone.

Rachu switches on the shower and let the cold water fall on her... The touch of water was shivering her and she was remembering the kiss she shared with Romi.. She traces her fingers on the lips and blushes a little... "I am in love... I am in love..." She jumps in happiness... While holding the hand shower as mike she starts singing...

"Dil tha yaha abhi abhi..

le gaya koi ajnabee...

M yaha jagi ni soi nahi...

Uski yaad m

Ab toh socha nahi

hoga wahi,Iske baad m

Pyarr m suno...

Hai yahi Karabai!!"

While singing she was splashing water with her feets and shaking her hair in to and fron motion.. the water droplets leaving it's trail on the wall.. With her wet finger she draws a heart and washes it off with the hand shower... Romi gets up on hearing her loud sound.. There was still a sweet smile on his face... He gets up and picks the glass of water... Hearing it's sound Rachana gets alert and stops her antiques... Finally she comes out of the room wearing a white knee length embellished kurti with white Patiala salwar and multicolor dupatta. She was looking breathtaking and Romi was not able to take off his eyes from her...

"Gorgeous.." He said unknowingly..

She blushed on his compliment... His constant stare was already making her uncomfortable... The memories of night were still fresh for both of them...Rachu cheeks turned red coz of the constant blushing... On seeing her, he realizes what he just uttered... They share a beautiful eyelock..

"I love u so...

I can never let u go...

in the whole wide world...

u r the one for me."

Rachu's ringtone breaks their eyelock and she goes to the balcony to take the call... Romi was not able to hear what she was speaking but her happiness was evident on her face... he wonders what made her so happy and hence moves towards the gallery to hear what she was saying...

"I love u... I love u... I love u so much Prem... u r truly a sweetheart... I will reach ur home by 5 in the evening and don't worry I will bring clothes with me."

Romi was shattered on hearing it... He again misunderstood PremNa relationship and felt cheated... He looks at Rachu's face which was glowing with happiness and the smile on her face was flaring his anger... he clenches his fist tightly and leaves the balcony while Rachu continues talking on the cell...

"I can't tell u Prem, how happy I am... Thank u so much for bringing Adi home today only. Tomorrow is his birthday and I am glad that we will be able to celebrate it at 12. Anyways I will hang now... Romi is waiting for me. I just hope he confesses his love today...Else I will propose him tomorrow on Adi's birthday."

Prem teased her a bit for her boldness and finally they hangs the call.

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P.S. : Hit like and Comment else i won't update other 2 FFs tomorrow. A harmless threat it is.😆

P.S.S. : Please check my index... I have added two new FFs... Tell me which one u want me to start first.

Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Vish, firstly great to know everything is fine now. 😃 Secondly, it is so-so good to have you back and we get double updates. 😃 What updates, with RagNa kiss, and this was so-so cute and pure. They really share a soul bond, but then why does that bonding of souls doesn't let Romi realise that Rachu doesn't love anyone else, that she does not love Prem? Why does he misunderstand her, or he does not want to listen to his souls's voice? You gave a hint today that Romi may leave company of John and Sammy when he'll get to know of their real business.
It is such a contrast or an irony that the same Romi who is a killer also seems innocent at the same time. He is doing all this because he believes his Baba is helping him in finding his Rani, because he respects him. But he still is so naive to believe him blindly? But then many a times, love is blind! His love for Rani and the hope doesn't let him see anything else. Or he doesn't want to let go of the only ray of hope he has; and he has no where else to go too. Romi has again misunderstood Rachu and she is going to propose to him on her brother's birthday/ Will he misbehave with her again?

The story is going really interesting; and what is this you start two new stories!!! 😲 Some brave girl you are, hats off!! So excited to read them I know they must be good. I'l read your writing index and let you know. 😃 Muah...welcome back once again. 😃 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's really good to have you back Vish! Missed you so much dear! A double whammy!!!!! Loved it. Romi and Rachu are coming closer. Romi was hesitant at first to stay back thinking how can she spend time with him when she already has a bf. For a person who never had any sort of relationship with anyone , it was easy for him to misunderstand the rapport she shared with Prem.

Loved how he volunteered to make tea. She was surprised to see this side of him. Finally Rachu has made him let his guard down and open up with her. Though hesitant at first the sincerity in her eyes made him reveal more about himself. He was affected by her emotions, the way she shared her feelings about her parents, brother and also the risks she face everyday in her life. It was lovely to see them having a moment, both hugging each other, crying in each other's arms.

Being in a vulnerable position , they don't know when they started kissing each other , taking it slowly more like healing the other's wounds. Rachu was the first one to break it and both decided to behave as if nothing happened. He didn't realise he spend the night with her.

I thought though he is a gangster, John has some feelings towards Romi. But it seems he was only using him. Even made Romi believe that he is investigating about Rani. Seems he will know soon that Romi is in love with Rachu. Sammy already have his doubts because Romi doesn't spend night with anyone. Romi feels bad for Rachu and wants to tell John not to kill her. Guess they are going to have a fight
regarding this.

Romi overheard Rachu's conversation with Prem and misunderstood once again. Whereas she was happy as Adi is coming home. Will Romi go back to his shell and also insult and hurt her again? She's planning to propose him at the birthday party without knowing that he misunderstood her again.


So many questions floating in my mind. Will John find out that Rachu is Rani and use it against Romi? Will Rachu find out Romi had planned to drug Bruno with drugged biscuits he left behind? Will he understand Prem and Rachu's friendship?

I know so many!!! Sorry !!!!! I know I will get all answers in the future updates. 😆

Please update LR too. Can't wait to read it!

I'm happy to know your grandma is hale and hearty . God bless her!

Love you darling! 🤗


Awesome poem Prii darling !!!!!! Amazing you are!!!! Love you sis!
🤗
Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey awesome update After all you dedicated it to me!!!!!😊Thanks dear! I feel so special!
chotu hi sahi...Lol.. had even forgotten abt that poem.
He he kalpi singing n dancing in the bathroom was cute. Moreover loved Rami moments. Oh no Romi ka hrtbrk!! So rachu will propose him? Interesting...waiting for the next update. 2new ffs mere toh chaandi hai. But please dont forget to drop me a line when you update them!
Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really awesome update love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update di...happy dat u r back..nd happy dat ur granny is gud...take care di...

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