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Natasha

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Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

The first version was awesome but this one is super awesome :)
I love the way u expresses Romi POV starting from him entering into Rachu house
The extra details was amazing...
Omg!!! Rachu POV at the end is mind blowing, she admitted she love Raghav lol
Beautiful update, I love it

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow vish dear..awesome hai yaar🤗🤗🤗

Thank u Sharan.. 🤗❤️🤗

Originally posted by: chahat4u
the optional update was s dreamy and good. 😃 keep it up. 😃👏⭐️

Thanks Charu... M glad u liked it.😊

Originally posted by: Cinderella81
Nice update.

Thank u dear...

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Wow loved this improvised version too Vish!!! Tussi great ho!!!! Awesome!!! I was so happy last time just reading about all this and then now again!!! Lovely update.

Thanks Priya... I know people keeps calling me mahaan but always in a funny sense... hope u r not making fun of me.😆

Originally posted by: sunyy
Really nice update. Like rags sorry to rachu.

Thanks Sunny.,

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Awesome Vish! Now I understand why you needed to write the improvised version. I loved it. Though I liked the old version too, after reading this the other one seems so rushed up. This is slow, romantic and sweet as well. Also covering all the grounds, even Bruno. You are simply awesome. Hats off to you. You never cease to amaze me! 🤗

Thank u Kiara...🤗

Exactly... The previous one was rushed up as I was too tired to let my creative wheels churn. So I excluded details. But I wanted the scene to be beautiful so rewrote it.

I am so happy that u liked it.

Originally posted by: niru04
Lovely update

Thanks Niru.

Originally posted by: jiya007
Lovely update

Thank u Jiya

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
The first version was awesome but this one is super awesome :)
I love the way u expresses Romi POV starting from him entering into Rachu house
The extra details was amazing...
Omg!!! Rachu POV at the end is mind blowing, she admitted she love Raghav lol
Beautiful update, I love it

Thank u Natasha... m glad u liked it. I was not satisfied with the first version as I felt I have not given my 100% in that.

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Sorry guys but like button not working... I too do not know what issues IF has but it keeps on behaving weirdly again n again... Sometime it doesn't let me log in or reply... n since yesterday like button is troubling me. 😡

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#465

haila i miss dis update😲
resh😳
unres
superb update. It is optional update 😲 i think it is bonus update.
Full on ragnatious update😳
wow wat an amazing thing did romi to please kalpi. Haye kash sum1 do dis for me as well
their eye talk are amazing, so romantic.
Romi gave her rose, chocolate, cake, her potrait n last 1 apologies with holding ears, hw romantic yar☺️
so so so sweet and romantic update. I love it❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Edited by shonali164 - 10 years ago

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Though I loved d last update too but dis improvised update is super awesome ❤️ 🤗

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: fairylover

😭 i wrote a big comment and it washed away due to internet prob.

Thank u for liking the update... i feel super happy when someone says that I can write romantic scene... though it's not my forte but m still improving.😊

I hate those people who judge girl by his clothes and specially those leads of our daily soap who are rude to their lady and gets away with everything.. that's y i wanted Rachu to respond and Romi to say sorry.

I am going to pair Prem n Pakhi in this but Pakhi is John's daughter here so I am planning to use her in trapping John.

glad u lik my cmmnt

Surely u good at writing ragna romantic scenes dear...latest being improvised rachu romie part...loved it😉😊

Edited by rani214 - 10 years ago

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

im loving a lot😳

jaldi update karo😊

Edited by sharanya0011 - 10 years ago

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#469

Hi Vish,

Dear how is your health now!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Missing your ff's badly yaar.Pls kuch karo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Update??????? Pleeease

Sorry again... But something is deffo wrong with me... Need to visit some baba for solution.😆

Laptop crashed now. 😭 Had to format it yesterday n lost almost all data including next part of E2E n LR... updates I can write again but lost some precious memories n work data.😭 Even Lapo screen is not working now... Will give it to service center now.

God knows what is happening with me. It feels like my luck is not supporting me. As soon as I overcome one issue, other issue is ready to trouble me. God knows when I m going to update now... Will try to write through mob/tab but not sure till when I m going to tolerate it.

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