Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 45

Originally posted by: fairylover

Thank u dear... m glad u liked it. I too hate such people but it's true that in India,not only men but women too judge other women on basis of their clothes.

@Bruno's point : Thanks for pointing it out... While preparing outline I decided to include the par where Rachu sends Bruno with Granny as his presence might increase her workload but I guess while writing I missed it. Will add it now.

Thank u once again Kiara for liking the update and the Rachu-Romi part... though I am planning to rewrite it in next part for my self satisfaction... I still feel I can write better than what i have written.

🤗This is for the best reader and a good friend.

Originally posted by: chahat4u

oh wow...such a lovable update. Loved the speech on women and clothes so much! 👏 So right, here in India we judge a girl's character on clothes and in smaller cities it is even worse. Coming to Prem-Rachana, love their friendship so much. Monu was adorably cute, strong, cute and cute, child. n smart too! Romi has started to feel emotions, pains of others, of Rachana and Monu, But he has again managed to overpower his heart and work for his baba. Loved Rachana-Romi moments in last, looking forward to next update to read what all they do in night. Sorry for delay in reading, was busy! 😭 Love you. 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: jiya007

Lovely update

Originally posted by: rani214

Firstly sorry for late cmmnt ...m glad u lik my cmmnts n pls don't say dat u can't write romantic scenes well ...u have beautifully written n poems u write r fabulous

Coming to updates

Eye talk was amazing ...must say u r expert in writing dem too

He hurt our angel in his jealosly😔...loved rachu's attitude wen she covered herself n asked him dat if dis can change her character

Loved hw romi's reflection made him realize his true feeling for rachu

Feeling bad for Rachu is deeply hurt by romie's behaviour

Wat rachu said is bitter truth of society girls r judged by der clothes...u beautifully wrote it

Loved monu n romi convo n also his attempt to make romi smile n gave him advice

Prem n kalpi convo was lovely...lol prem was jealous wit a girl but d incident was funny

Finally angel smiled after prem told her d reason behind romi's action n words

Awww romi trying to patofy kalpi was cute...par aur thoda tadpana chayiye tha kalpi ko

Ragna spending sum time togethr...eagar to read nxt part😉😃

Are u planning to pair pakhi n prem...will love to see how u proceed wit der story

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

I think this part is good enough but you need to satisfy yourself. I can understand. Friend part, I accept. Best reader, who me? Aww. .. coming from a best writer I take it as a compliment. I love you for this. Hope I continue to be a best reader for you. Love you 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I love Rachu speech, it was bang on...
I like how Prem help Rachu to understand Raghav pov
Omg! Romi break into Rachu house and bring gifts as well lol
Hmm... But there he goes again misunderstanding Rachu and judging her
Beautiful update, I love it

Originally posted by: vasishna

😃resss

Unres

Heyylooo.. I know dis tym I'm vry late..

Bt d update was too good one!! Frstly prem making kalpi to realise romi's jealousyness was intrestngg n romi-monu convo was good.. even monu s good at giving advices lol😉😆

And romi did really went to rachu's home..? Dis was unexpected from my side.. bt it was good to read n even rachu's smile after knwng dat romi s jealousy..😉😃

Originally posted by: fairylover

U r the best reader indeed and I am sure every writer of the forum will say it... I can assure u one thing that every writer waits for ur comment on their story as u never fail to analyze story correctly.