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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Wonderful updates

Loved dat kalpi is ready for marriage hope kids convince raghav

Loved dat both ragna decorated house

Ragna gifting each other was lovely

Missing diary part

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Read 27 parts in one sitting!! Update the index so that I can read the remaining.

The story is mindblowing!! I was laughing crazily on kid's dialogues... Even my fiancee called me mad coz of it. I was just free today and was flipping pages when I read ur name and started reading it. Please tell me the page numbers of remaining part as I am dying to read them. Will give detailed comment after reading whole story.

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: WonderQueen
Read 27 parts in one sitting!! Update the index so that I can read the remaining.
The story is mindblowing!! I was laughing crazily on kid's dialogues... Even my fiancee called me mad coz of it. I was just free today and was flipping pages when I read ur name and started reading it. Please tell me the page numbers of remaining part as I am dying to read them. Will give detailed comment after reading whole story.

dear i will update the index tomorrow but try to give u page no..

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#784

DEAR,

PLS UPDATE THIS FF TOO.

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#785

Aru dear,

Even 90 percent of this ff is complete.

Just finish that diary sequence and make Rags to agree for the marriage

and end the ff on a happy note..

SO THAT AFTER THE COMPLETION OF YOUR EXAMS,U CAN START WITH

A DHAMAAKHEDHAR RAGNA FF OR SAKHI FF WITH RAGNA SUPPORTING THEIR LOVE.

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: laavanya4u
Aru dear,

Even 90 percent of this ff is complete.

Just finish that diary sequence and make Rags to agree for the marriage

and end the ff on a happy note..

SO THAT AFTER THE COMPLETION OF YOUR EXAMS,U CAN START WITH

A DHAMAAKHEDHAR RAGNA FF OR SAKHI FF WITH RAGNA SUPPORTING THEIR LOVE.

actually this ff is not complete son.. i have plan something else after diary part..but now seems i have to end thiss ff also..soon...i think i wrap-up this story..

ok i try to update next part soon..

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darkloveriam

@darkloveriam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#787

no plz don't end this one

take ur time to update but plz not end this

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: Aru18

actually this ff is not complete son.. i have plan something else after diary part..but now seems i have to end thiss ff also..soon...i think i wrap-up this story..
ok i try to update next part soon..

hey don't end it abruptly ...pls write it as u want...don't wrap up ...pls

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#789

Phew!!! Finally read the complete story by flipping the pages!! I deserve a treat for doing so much!! But than the story is so addictive that I was not able to leave it in the mid.

I am in love with this story... This is mindblowing babes!! The kids are awesome and their antics are too cute.. Darsh is a cutie pie with all his questions and Tiya... Awww!! I love her bonding with Rags... There is originality in their dialogs and I laughed a lot while reading about them. Their bonding with Ashu, Kalpi and each other is truly unique.

Kalpi is a confused and hurt soul here... N she is right at her place. It is tough for her to trust Raghav after what he did in the past but she still agreed to marry him just for the sake of kids. She is undoubtedly a good mother... The way she knows her kids shows that despite being a CEO she dedicated all her time to them.

Ashu is a sweetheart... A true frn who knows everything about Kalpi and wants the best for her. She can got o any extent for Kalpi's happiness. I liked their first meeting and the bond they shares. Ashu is helping Rags too as she knows that Kalpi still loves him. Ashu's bonding with kids is what I admired in the story.. The way she said someone is coming in our lives was truly touchy and she proved that some relationships are much stronger than that of blood relations.

Just like Rags, I do not like Ajay... I know he is anice guy but I felt he is somewhat showoff type of person... May be coz I feel for Raghav coz he dint know anything about his kids childhood and Ajay was showing their pics to him. I dint like the way Ajay fooled Rags for birthday decoration but I guess that was becoz he wanted Rags to help in the decoration which was truly a brownie point for Rags.

Sammy is a gem of person... I like the way he manages all the situation.. He understands everyone very well and is always there for all of them... I still want to know how and why he married Pakhi and how Pakhi turned positive.

Raghav and Gauri are repenting for their mistakes but I want to see Rags reaction on knowing the truht about Gauri and how he came to knew about Kalpi's innocence.