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laavanya4u thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
TODAY IS SUNDAY.
WHEN ARE U POSTING THE UPDATE??????????
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Posted: 10 years ago
pls update...want to read kalpis diary...kalpis life in last 5 yrs...& rags reaction on that
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

TODAY IS SUNDAY.

WHEN ARE U POSTING THE UPDATE??????????

writing kar rahi hoon dear..half complete and half pending..
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Posted: 10 years ago
yes try to update in this week
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lolor

pls update...want to read kalpis diary...kalpis life in last 5 yrs...& rags reaction on that

dairy writing ho rahi hai..and i try to update as soon as
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Posted: 10 years ago

ARU DEAR, PLS UPDATE SOON,

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Originally posted by: laavanya4u

ARU DEAR, PLS UPDATE SOON,

yes dear friday tak ho jayega..party part bacha hai bas...
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Chapter.

Ashu-Kalpi how much time more?? (ashu ask enter the hall..and she amazed to see the decoration..the hall decorted by white and purple ballon's..and also balon's spreate everywhere in hall...1 table decorate by different type of candy's and choclates and the rest of hall decorated by flower's.. )

Kalpi- almost done ashu..just tying this big ballon on top and then its complete..(kalpi tye the ballon and come down form ladder." Its done..now plz just help me to do palce this decoration boxes and store room.

Ashu- I love to do dear but sorry i have other work..why don't you ask raghav..where is he??? he left you alone here and you alone doing all prepartion?? how could he do this?? wait i scold him for this today

(Ashu take a step to go to raghav's room but kalpi hold her hand and stop her)

Kalpi- ashu stop..he not leave me alone actually he do all prepartion alone bcoz i sleep...

Ashu- what?? how u sleep kalpi...tumhe help karni thi naa phir tum so kaise gayi..

Kalpi- i don't know ashu but kaam karte karte main sofe pe so gayi aur raghav also not wake up me..

"Ashu- why he wake up kalpi..he is very sweet..tum itni peacefully so rahi thi ki uska maan nahi hua tumhe uthane ka..

Kalpi- means???

Ashu- means ye ki main bich main aayi thi dekhne ke liye kya ho raha hai tab tum so rahi thi..main raghav se kaha ki tumhe utha de but he say no and i left...you know he is very sweet..and care for u so much..he really loves you kalpi.

(Kalpi smile unknowingly..and ashu see that..she feel change in kalpi...1st time she smile on her comment and not answer back or not deny what ashu said)

Kamala- you both are still here...go and get ready half and hour only left for oarty (kamala said enter the room)

Kalpi- aai but still work not done..i have to shift this boxes on store room...

Kamala- i'll d that you go and get ready...i buy a new saree for you..you wear that saree in party..i send it on your room but 1st go and fesh..

Kalpi- but aai...

Kamala- kalpi plz now no more talks..go and plz be ready soon

"Kalpi nod her head and left from there)

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Raghav's room:

(Raghav is getting ready for party.he wear a white designer shuit..a simle and elegnet but classy too.tiya and darsh ente the room)

Tiya- wow dad you looking very handsome today.

(Raghav is happy to see kids there..he come towards them and bend down infront on them)

Raghav- Thanks sweetheart...you looking also very bautiful.

Darsh- and what about me dad??

Raghav- you also looking very handsome darsh..now tell both of you what are you doing here??

Darsh- dad we come here to ask about our birthday girf..where is our birthday gift??

Raghav- actually i don't know about likes and dislikes so i not buy any gift for you but yoou tell me what u want i promise i will give you.

Tiya- think again dad...warna you not take back after when we ask.

Raghav- dear i think..i'm not take back ever..so tell me what do you want..

Darsh- not now dad after cut the cake..

Raghav- ok as you wish..now go i'm coming in 10 min's..

Both- ok dad..

(both turn to go but stop in mid)

Tiya- oops i forget why we came here..

Raghav- means you came here for the reason??

Darsh- yes dad..tiya give that to dad..

(tiya open her small bag and give raghav small box.."

Raghav- what is this??

Tiya- don't know dad but mom tell to give this box to you...

Raghav- mom?? means your mom??

Darsh- yes dad..who then eles???

Tiya- come dad open it we also want to see what is in that box..

(Raghav open the box and fine a beautifull brooch..)

brooch look like this

[http://i01.i.aliimg.com/wsphoto/v1/1616476203_1/Gorgeous-pearl-font-b-brooch-b-font-CZ-font-b-diamond-b-font-with-freshwater-natural.jpg]

(he is really happy to see that brooch...and also see the note with that borch..he open that and start reading it..)

Thank u so much for today..i thought angel's not celebrate there b'day today..but you fix everything..i know its your duty to do that and i'm really happy..and also saying sorry for misunderstood you every time..this is the way to say sorry..i'm happy if u except this brocch and wear it today n b'day party..

-Kalpi

(Raghav smile and kiss that brooch..)

Tiya- dad what is this (Tiya saw a box on raghav's bed and she open it..she find a very beautiful saree..)..wow dad its so beautiful but from whome u buy this saree?? dadi???

Raghav- no its not for your dadi??? (Ragahv take a box from tiya's hand)

Tiya- then for aaji??

Raghav- no not for ajji also..( he see that saree 1 more time and closed that box..

Tiya- ohh then for pakhi massi sure..

Raghav- no dear not pakhi massi also...(raghav open cupboard for place that box)

Tiya- then for whom dad?? (raghav small pause and reply)

Raghav- for your mom dear..i want that shewear this saree in today's party..

Darsh- then why not you give it to her..

Raghav-bcoz i scared ...what if she reject it??

Tiya- humm that's a bic problem...

Darsh- i have an idea...

Tiya- what idea tell me???

Darsh- i don't belive in telling..i belive in action..dad give that saree to me...

(Raghav give saree to darsh and he run towards kalpi's room...tiya and raghav follow him..trio enter room)

Tiya- darsh what were doing here??

(Kalpi is in washroon..and she hear a noise in room)

Kalpi- how are there..pakhi is that you..

(Trio get scared..specailly raghav)

Raghav- let's go from here before she come out..(raghav say in low tone).

Darsh-no dad..i'm not leave till then work not complete..

Kalpi- how are in the room..

Darsh- mom its me and tiya..aaji send saree for you..

Kalpi- okkk bacha..place that saree on bed i will come soon..

Darsh- ok mom..(low voice)..work is done..now mom wear this saree only..let's go from here, before mom come out..

(trio come out from roomm and see ashu come with kalpi's saree which send by kamala..they tell there plan to ashu and ashu go back with that saree..after 10 min's kalpi come out from bathroom and see the saree..a pinkish purple net saree..she loved it..)

[http://ruhanigroup.com/images/Leafy-Embroidered-Pinkish-Purple-Net-Saree-2.jpg]

Klapi(self talks)- wow..its beautiful..aai's choice change alot..i thought aai give me a heavy saree with lots of embroidery in that but its not heavy at all..simple but ellgent..i still can't belive that aai choose this type of saree..kalpi don't think to much and get ready..u already late

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Party venue :

(kalpi enter the hall..she wear that raghav;s saree..and everyone look at her..raghav lost in her beauty..she is looking beautiful and no one say's that she is mother of 2 childern's..sammy shake raghav's shoulder and he come real world...kamala is shocked to see kalpi bcoz she not wear the saree that she buy for her.)

Kamala- kalpi why don't you wear that saree i give you??? (kalpi is confused now and not understand what kamala said)

Kalpi- aai what are u saying?? this is the saree you give me naa???..

Kamala- no kalpi this is not saree i send for you..

Kalpi- aai but this is the saree i got..tiya and darsh give me this saree..

Kamala- but i send saree with ashu..not with tiya and darsh..

Kalpi- what?? wait i will ask them..

Kamala- ya but plz today is there b'day so don't angry on them.

Kalpi- don't worry i'm just asking them..

(kalpi call tiya and darsh )

Tiya- wow mom u looking to beautiful..

Darsh- yes mom looking very pretty..

Kalpi- thank u so much angel's but now tell me where is saree that aaji send for me and who give you this saree/???

Dasrh- mom actually..

Tiya- mom actually dad buy this saree for you and he want that you wear a this saree in party..so we replace this saree with aaji's saree...

Kalpi- you..both of you are to much..i'm sure you papa tell you do this right???

Tiya- no mom he did not tell anything to do..infact he hide this saree from us when he going to give that box to dad but we catch him and then plan to give this saree to you..

Darsh- sorry mom if hurt u mom..

Kalpi- no my angel's you never hurt me..now come let's cut the cake...

Tiya- ok mom but before that call dad also naa...

Kalpi- sure dear..go and said him to come here..

(Tiya do as kalpi said..she call raghav..kids cut the cake..and give 1st peace to raghav and kalpi smile on that...she feel that her decision of marry raghav is right..she feels that tiya and darsh need raghav in there life. )

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Note: sorry for late..actually i struggle with story..sorry if dispoint you.,.don't know when give u next updatehope u like this part...thank u for support and sorry for mistakes
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice..plez cntinue😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice... Plzz update nxt chappy soon

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