my life your love:ff note on page 123 - Page 80

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Aruhi dear,

I think you have misunderstood my POV.

I don't want you to end this ff abruptly.U must have planned certain outline and ending

for this story in your mind.And it is quite natural,that while writing,the writer would like to

include certain elements or characters according to the situations and also try to give some additional twists n turns.

Atleast,if you progress this ff upto your original vision,then we will be damn happy and stay connected to the characters more.

HENCE THE CHOICE AND THE DECISION IS????????????????????

Originally posted by: WonderQueen

Phew!!! Finally read the complete story by flipping the pages!! I deserve a treat for doing so much!! But than the story is so addictive that I was not able to leave it in the mid.

I am in love with this story... This is mindblowing babes!! The kids are awesome and their antics are too cute.. Darsh is a cutie pie with all his questions and Tiya... Awww!! I love her bonding with Rags... There is originality in their dialogs and I laughed a lot while reading about them. Their bonding with Ashu, Kalpi and each other is truly unique.

Kalpi is a confused and hurt soul here... N she is right at her place. It is tough for her to trust Raghav after what he did in the past but she still agreed to marry him just for the sake of kids. She is undoubtedly a good mother... The way she knows her kids shows that despite being a CEO she dedicated all her time to them.

Ashu is a sweetheart... A true frn who knows everything about Kalpi and wants the best for her. She can got o any extent for Kalpi's happiness. I liked their first meeting and the bond they shares. Ashu is helping Rags too as she knows that Kalpi still loves him. Ashu's bonding with kids is what I admired in the story.. The way she said someone is coming in our lives was truly touchy and she proved that some relationships are much stronger than that of blood relations.

Just like Rags, I do not like Ajay... I know he is anice guy but I felt he is somewhat showoff type of person... May be coz I feel for Raghav coz he dint know anything about his kids childhood and Ajay was showing their pics to him. I dint like the way Ajay fooled Rags for birthday decoration but I guess that was becoz he wanted Rags to help in the decoration which was truly a brownie point for Rags.

Sammy is a gem of person... I like the way he manages all the situation.. He understands everyone very well and is always there for all of them... I still want to know how and why he married Pakhi and how Pakhi turned positive.

Raghav and Gauri are repenting for their mistakes but I want to see Rags reaction on knowing the truht about Gauri and how he came to knew about Kalpi's innocence.