The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 97

Originally posted by: chahat4u

How sweet of you Cindy dear to comment again after reading the edited version. it helps me a lot. Thanks a lot for liking it. Lately you have been giving some superb comments lengthwise and otherwise and I am loving it. 😃 🤗 Love you.

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Thanks replying. Love u too🤗

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Oh Charu! The updates were fabulous. Double whammy!!!!! Nobody can go into detail about relationships like you can! Don't ever doubt your creativity dear! You are awesome!!!!!!!
Thank you so much. You encourage me and are too sweet. 😳

Loving this Raghav more and more. How truthfully he explained his relation with Kalpi to Sammy. I loved him when he said he can bear her anger but not betray her trust. Really, love and trust go hand in hand. It's very important to trust the one we love. The moment trust falters, love disappears. Sammy can't believe the change undergone by Raghav. Seeing Rags transition from a ruthless business man to a loving husband, Sammy can't wait to meet his own dream girl...lol. Yes it is important to trust the person you love, else the base of love weakens and especially in a relation as sacred like marriage.

Shalini surprised by seeing Kalpi questioning her about coffee but don't know that it's the wife's concern for her husband. Kalpi is still upset with Raghav over the Pakhi fiasco and her anger extends to Sammy as well for supporting him. She feels he is prolonging the marriage drama with Kapoors. Sammy is right though, her anger truly matches Raghav 's. Raghav is still happy that she remembered his coffee. The guy is seriously too much!

Yes, I think Shalini shall be one of those persons who'll get 'zor ka jhatka zor se' only once the truth is out. 😆 LOL, yes Raghav knows that despite everything Kalpi loves him. 😆😳😃

Kalpi though angry with Raghav couldn't help feel proud of her husband's persona, his command and the power he exudes. Only Sammy and Sonal understood ragna eye conversation.

Yes 😃 she is one proud wife. 😃

Sonal has finally come to know that Raghav is the special person in Kalpi's life though she had her doubts from the start. But she doesn't know about the marriage. For sure she understands Kalpi and respect her decision. Yes, she'll not get to know about marriage for now. She is satisfied with whatever she knows. She is a bit over-inquisitive but she is a caring friend.

Kalpi in a red dress. Wow! no doubt she's looking fabulous. Raghav knows what suits her better than anybody else. The trial room scene was so passionate. Loved how he kept his promise not to look at her. The scene gave me goosebumps just thinking about it. You have left me blushing again 😳 Really? thanks, feels good to hear.😳😉😃

Gauri is feeling bad for Kalpi. She regrets her decision to take revenge which caused her son and daughter in law to live separately. Though Kalpi assures her it's ok, she can see the pain in Kalpi's eyes.

Gauri will also 'sudhro' one day completely. 😛

Though they had a lot to say, Raghav and Kalpi's journey to the hotel was in silence. Seeing Saakshya hugging Kalpi and their comfort level, Raghav felt a momentary pang of jealousy . Loved how Raghav pulled her close to him , thereby staking his claim. He's upset that she called Saakshya ' Saks' and not called him 'Rags'...lol. He's really a kid, sometimes. But then all men are! When Saakshya asked him permission to take Kalpi for a dance, he couldn't refuse but their intimacy has left him insecure. He trusts her but can't bear anybody being close to her.

Thanks for loving all those scenes and Raghav's dialogues to himself.😃

Kalpi sensed his discomfort and she even reprimanded Saakshya when she came to know that he was do it this purposefully. Loved how she told Saakshya that only she has the right to hurt him or be angry with him. Ragna understand each other so much and don't need words to explain themselves. Love that bonding they share!

Yes, Kalpi won't let anyone else hurt her husband, especially when she knows he has undergone his shar of pains in life already.

Peeyush finally had it from Rags. Was waiting for this day, since he had started getting close to Kalpi. As if her Raghav will allow that. Hope Peeyush doesn't turn into an obsessive lover with revenge on his mind. One Pakhi is enough in ragna's life.

For now I have not planned much on Peeyush, at least right now he is not needed much, except one or two scenes more. but later on I don't know.

Loved the scene in office after the Peeyush fiasco. Raghav finally explained why he's doing all this and what's stopping him from revealing his marriage in front of society. He wants her to understand he's doing everything he can to protect her, not giving his enemies a chance to hurt her. At the same time he wants her to be strong and be able to differentiate between good and bad people. Finally the tears have started falling which both had withheld for so long.

Thanks dear for liking it. 😊

The kisses that followed, the love making was their way to heal each other's wounds , the loneliness they suffered for long being away from each other. It was so well written that I had tears in my eyes and felt happy at the same time. The way he opened her shirt... oh my god! Here I go blushing again... 😳

LOL, I guess I love such scenes. yes they both are too lonely without each other, and sad too. Planning to give them some alone moments in future updates, let's see how things plan out.

I think Sonal is on the verge of knowing about their marriage, maybe on their outing with Saakshya. By the way is Raghav calling Maya because he feels threatened by Kalpi's friendship with Saakshya and wants to flaunt his friendship with Maya in front of Kalpi? Or is it something else?

No, Sonal will not learn anything now. But then, if logic demands I may show so. Yes, Maya is coming to make Kalpi just a bit jealous. I am very poor in showing jealous scenes, and I am unable to drag such scenes so I don't know how successful I will be. Besides as per reader's choice she will be Sammy's love interest. or do you think I should introduce a new character for Sammy's girlfriend?

Sorry, didn't understand why there's confusion about karvachauth and teej. Why do you have to rewrite and make it karvachauth? Why not give us another awesome romantic update on karvachauth celebration? I'm all for whatever you decide, buddy. After all you know better. Do enjoy your break and come back fast. Already missing you.

Oh yes, like this idea more. Actually someone had requested me to show some Diwali Dhamaka, and although that update shall be much-much after Diwali, but I cannot skip such important festival to show Diwali, LOL. I will try to come back soon. 😳😃🤗

Love you lots 🤗❤️

Love you loads too. 😃🤗❤️

Originally posted by: appyK

U know charu that's called emotional blackmail .. Long comments for reducing your break.. But these awesome updates surely deserve super big comments..

Let me start with what I was saying literally murmuring while reading the update is I LOVE THIS RAGHAV .. He's just perfect.. Super perfect infact.. He cares about kalpi ,loves her a lot but yet is focused on his work and revenge..

Sammy and Raghav's convo was really funny.. Loved Rammy parts a lot..

Sorry zyaada detailed comment nahi hai but really loved the updates.. They were totally rocking..

Waiting for Maya entry and just a request pls don't pair Paakhi with Sammy or Sakshya uske toh Ramu hi thik hai...

Originally posted by: vasishna

Heyyylooo charu...

Wowww u gave us a double damaka surprise!!!!! I loved it a lottt.. and dat too longgg updates uh.😃. yipeee!!😆 Ha ha...Thanks to you too for rubbing your happiness on to me and for such sweet reaction. 😃 🤗

part 23:

cumng to d updates.. they were as usual awesum with ragna spice n few nok jhok's.. frm strtng it was really good with RAMMY scenes and nw sammy s dreaming abt her dream girl by seeing changed raghav ie caring,loving n possessive husband! and poor sammy had to bear kalpi anger hahaha.. dat was funny yaar.. and abt gauri.. well she ll be alryt by gng through d sessions with her Dr after all our kalpi had choosed doctor na so she ll get well soon and nw its too late fr to regret fr her actions fr d revenge as she was asking to kalpi come back.. bt our kalpi has self respect and wouldn't accept easily and her reasons r quite right.. and yeah abt sonal as u tld she was first person (aftr saakshya) to knw abt ragna.. and dat too she found it easily w/o ny much of nagging n all.. I lykd way u showed it.. I mean wen sonal asked abt raghav, kalpi left w/o answerng which gave sonal d correct ans lol.. dat was good one.. n pakhi.. she really too dumb n hate her to d peaks!! I hope she won't try to cum btw ragna usng her senseless brain rofl..

Thanks for loving Rammy scenes, and Ragna nok-jhoks. I love Rammy. 😃 Yes, though Gauri is repenting but it is toolate now; and Gauri is still unwell mentally. She'll be fine after sometime. Glad you liked Sonal scene. 😳 LOL, I don't know most readers wanted me to show Pakhi grey or negative. i don't know how'll I manage that, but I have to somehow. 😆😳😛

part 24:

really d edited part made d update perfect yaar.. strtng part which u added was superrr cute one.. as both were finding each other hot n sexy and couldn't divert their attractn easily lol..

and so here cums d jealousy raghav's part.. it was really fun to read bt I shld say poor raghav yaar.. he felt so alone dat he thought off bringng sammy over there lol n even he thinking dat why does kalpi won't cal him "rags" rofl.. and saakshya-kalpi's added more jealousy thing to me.. n saakshya wantedly makng raghav jealous! good dat kalpi has stopped d dance with him and her justificatn abt raghav was really good yaar! and ragna dance.. haye haye haye.. it ll be magic and nlyyy tum hi ho song suits them well n perfect.. even saakshya can't deny dat fact..

and nxt at last peeyush had enuf from raghav.. at least nw he ll thnkng "n" tyms talking to kalpi and d next part was awesum.. I loved part where they ll sortout things n both ll be crying n d dialogues were too good n couldn't point anyone..n ragna romance in d last part.. no words.. as I was blushing reading those scenes n yeah d flashback scene! hw can I forget dat.. indeed it was romantic one yaar..!!! so new character maya's entry ah..? very curious abt it.. totally it was wonderfull n marvellous ones! I mean it!! Thanks for loving the update with edited part as well. 😃 LOL yes jealous Raghav. For the first time he had to share Kalpi's attention with some another guy.😛 Glad you loved Kalpi's scene with Saakshya and Ragna dance.😳😃 Yes, Raghav would never tolerate indecent behaviour with his wife, and Peeyush will surely think many times before approaching Kalpi, but he'll not go away right now. Thanks for liking RagNa sorting our things part and their romance and also flashback scene. Glad you liked that, as I am always nervous while writing such scenes because every reader has different choice. Maya maybe Sammy's love-interest. 😳

and thnk uuu soo much fr updating yaar.. and I hope ur break ll get over soon n u ll be back with amazing, diffrnt n superbbb ideas.. nt nlyy in dis ff.. bt in all ff's.. love u.. Love you so much for such awesome comment. I'll try my best to return from break sooner than what I have planned. 😃 Loads of love. ❤️

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Really !!!!! It was not a conscious one but I think I got carried away by your fabulous double updates. I really enjoyed reading it but then your updates are always a thing of joy! You are such a gifted writer.

I don't know about Sammy. Maya is Sammy's pair in most of the ffs. But then you can bring in a new character like how you brought Saakshya and Sonal, if she's going to be relevant in the story. If it is just a side kick then Maya would suffice. Initially I thought Sonal maybe a love interest for Sammy or Saakshya but don't know why when I imagine her, I think of a little older woman, elder than both of them. Maybe because Kalpi thinks of her as an older sister. So entirely up to you to decide though I love fresh pairing.

Love you too and come back soon. 🤗

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I'm sooo sorry Charu for missing chapter 22
Idk what happened, it's so weird that I didn't know that u updated. I shall make up for it though:)

Hey it is okay, these things happen.I understand, what matters is you commented when you could. 😃 I don't mind genuine reasons. 😃🤗

Sorry in advance for the super long comment but I read all three chapters together Do you really think I'll mind long comments? 😃😛 I love them. 😃 ❤️
I love how Raghav figured Pakhi plan and turned the table on her lol
That what she get to play with Raghav dignity. Omg!!! Ramu was superb lol
His concern for Pakhi was nice, but I like how Raghav get him to shut up
I can only imagine the look on Neetu face when she saw her darling pookhi like that lol Thanks for loving Ramu, Pakhi and Raghav scenes. 😃
Poor Kalpi she has to be the savior for everyone. Her comforting Kamla over the phone was nice
Oh wow! I just love Sonal, her instincts are correct and she wanted to know the truth but I like that she stop herself from snooping and asked Kalpi herself.
Aww Kalpi is so angry at Raghav and she has all right to be but I love how she can't stop drooling on her sexy hubby lol and Raghav is no less. Poor guy can't get enough of his wifey. Their car scene was romantic with Raghav pulling Kalpi on his lap while he work on getting her earring out of her dupatta. I love possessive Raghav Aww..thank you. 😳😃
Oh gosh this Pakhi is getting on my nerves with her stupid thoughts when will she figure out that Raghav don't want her 🤢
Sammy laughing at Raghav misery over angry Kalpi was superb lol
I enjoy the bonding between Rammy, they are closer than brothers. Yes I too love Rammy, maybe that's why their scenes come out better than others.
Aww angry Kalpi is too cute, I love how she took the coffee to Raghav cabin and just give them and left but not before letting Rammy see how angry she is lol
I love the understanding that RagNa shares, they understand each other without verbally speaking... Angry Kalpi is always cute yes, in her full form! 😆
Kalpi FB on her red dress was amazing. Raghav is so damn romantic
So finally Sonal knows about RagNa at least some of it. I'm glad because she is good to Kalpi and she will keep Kalpi secret.
RagNa going to meet Saks for their dinner date was super fun especially with jealous and possessive Raghav around ;) Saks pulling Kalpi leg and Raghav getting more and more jealous was so much fun, I love every mintue of it. Oh wow! How can I forget RagNa senual romantic dance and that too on my fav song it was a magical moment. RagNa is the most passionate couple
Uff... Finally that idiot get the slap, how dare he hug Kalpi without her permission
Oh damn, angry Raghav is not someone to mess with...
His outbursted at Kalpi make sense but at the same time he should know that his Kalpi try to see the good in everyone. I love that he truth his Angel and he knows that she will never do anything to break his truth in her. Kalpi letting her guards down and letting Raghav knows exactly how hurt she is was very emotionally... My heart breaks for Kalpi 😭
Raghav hugging Kalpi and comforting her was a beautiful moment and I love that although he wanted more than anything to have his Kalpi with him he think of her safety first. Uff... Damn RagNa and their passion now I'm blushing like a fangirl lol
Idk why but I like spontaneous romance ;) and with RagNa its sooo much more fun
It was a sizzling hot make out, catching up and making up for weeks of not being with each other love making. I can't only imagine the intensity in the room 😳
As you can tell I love all three chapters, they were wonderfully written with the perfect among of fun, romance, anger, jealousy, possessiveness, passion, bonding and the whole nine yards. Sorry if I miss any important points and if I did just let me know ;)