The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: fairylover
Look I am again late 😆
Awesome update Charu... U have gone crazy with RagNa romance n ur update is driving us crazy as well. Super duper update n keep giving more romantic updates but with that move the story ahead as well. M dying to know how Rags is going to handle Pakhi now.

Kalpi is the superwoman.. handling all the responsibilities at office and at the same time trying to be a good wife by taking care of her hubby's health n not stopping him from romance. I loved Rags confidence in Kalpi and he abilities.

Shalini was confused...With the pace RagNa are romancing and Kalpi making blunder of letting that cook call her Bhabhi is surely going to reveal their secret. Rag's room has turned operation theater.. Till red light is on no one can enter,😆 I like it. Smart man.. knows how to steal some private moments with his wifey.

Update soon. M in love with all ur stories,😊

No Vish you're not late. 😃 Thanks and yes it really seems so that Ragna romance has made its way in my blood lately, LOL! 😆 I'll try to move the story ahead in next updates. 😊😃

Red light wala idea I got from what i had seen in some high profile government offices. So decided to use it here. 😊 I'll try to update it soon and thanks for shower of your love on all my stories. 😃🤗

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Excuuussseee me ye office hai ya bedroom!!!
I mean I know they are hubby n wife but Raghav with Kalpi in any room could turn into their love abode!!! LOL😆

And I think there is no secret thing going to be involved here! Everything going to be out in the open!

Does Kalpi's cabin display a red light too when Raghav's cabin will have one on!???? LOL then toh secret will become an open book!

Oh so Paakhi still thinks Kalpi is married to Sammy? Funny indeed!

Hmm hope she does not end up calling Kamla the great!

Well, its heights of desperateness of Raghav I guess, especially with his wifey not in his home's bedroom! 😆😛

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: Asyalover
Awesome update

Thank you. 😊

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Thank you Ritu. Your comment brought a big smile to my face. It was sweet and again for details. Thanks for liking those business details and Kali's wifey avatar in office.😃 Thanks for liking the romance too! 😃 🤗

sacchi...my comment is that kind of good which can brought a smile on your face...
that is lovely
at least my comment bring smile on your face...
i m so glad that you like my comment.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: chahat4u

No Vish you're not late. 😃 Thanks and yes it really seems so that Ragna romance has made its way in my blood lately, LOL! 😆 I'll try to move the story ahead in next updates. 😊😃

Red light wala idea I got from what i had seen in some high profile government offices. So decided to use it here. 😊 I'll try to update it soon and thanks for shower of your love on all my stories. 😃🤗

Ur good luck that u got opportunity to visit such offices... The govt offices i saw in my town doesn't have proper lights to work in dark.. Can't even think of red lights.. The only red light i saw were in the hospitals and the traffic signals and most of them were damaged.😆

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Kiaraah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Hi Kiara, I became so happy to read your comment. 😃 The way you bring your interpetation of the updates is awesome, and very close to my own view when I write. n yes I realised later on that the way I had written Ragna hot scene, was besharmi ki heights! 😆 ☺️ Hope that was not a cause of worry and uncomfort! 😛 Yes, Pakhi may definitely call her Kamla Maa. 😉 Thank so much for encouraging words; I am happy & relieved that it was not found to be boring. 😃🤗 Thanks a lot. 😊 ❤️

Thanks a lot Charu! I'm relieved to know that you like my comments. I'm always apprehensive as to whether people may like my dissection of their story. But it's the only way I know how to appreciate your efforts in writing each and every scene. By the way I really enjoyed ragna romance in office. Maybe I'm besharam too in case of ragna 😉 There was no uncomfortable factor in the update , at least for me. But I'm grownup on a steady diet of M&B romance and I enjoyed reading' Fifty shades of grey' series too. Oh yes, I'm naughty 😳 So it's all fine with me. You are one of the awesome writers in the forum, so how can anything written by you be boring? I'm equally in love with all your ffs. You revel in writing romance! Glad to know that we share same point of view. Just the reason why we bond so well 🤗❤️

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Awesome charu!!love wicked rags and innocent Kalpi!! Too good! Damn awesome! This is just getting better and better with every update! Hahahaha and I love the way rags threw the phone away! Desperate lover/husband 😉

Edited by DiVirgo - 11 years ago

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vyshuu..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#567

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beautifulll n lovelyyy update charu..

yeahhh day by day ragna's romance s increasing Lol.. and dint expect he would all these arrangements to romance with wife heheheh... frst he gives her a lot of work n then wants tym to spend with her..lol

I hope d doubt which shalini s gettng nw wouldnt be ny problem before..

Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Thanks a lot Charu! I'm relieved to know that you like my comments. I'm always apprehensive as to whether people may like my dissection of their story. But it's the only way I know how to appreciate your efforts in writing each and every scene. By the way I really enjoyed ragna romance in office. Maybe I'm besharam too in case of ragna 😉 There was no uncomfortable factor in the update , at least for me. But I'm grownup on a steady diet of M&B romance and I enjoyed reading' Fifty shades of grey' series too. Oh yes, I'm naughty 😳 So it's all fine with me. You are one of the awesome writers in the forum, so how can anything written by you be boring? I'm equally in love with all your ffs. You revel in writing romance! Glad to know that we share same point of view. Just the reason why we bond so well 🤗❤️

Believe me you do a very good job for writers. 😃👏 You know sometimes its good to let go in fantasies. What we read or write in stories, we may not necessarily do in reality. I understand that, as like you I too have read a lot of M & B stuff; and its a fantasy world altogether. 😆😳 I have heard a lot about 'Fifty Shades of Grey' series and that its hardcore erotica. But haven't read any till now; do tell me something about it sometime? maybe in PM or twitter or fb??

@Bold: I guess so. I hadn't realised this. But I do say always that i am forever in love with the feeling and different shades of love; and that's mostly found in fantasies. so I love fantastical, beautiful, dream world of love, especially Ragna one because they portray it perfectly. Sometimes its good to enjoy just as a fantasy. 😃

Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: ragnaareangel
Awesome update

Thanks dear. 😊

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Awesome charu!!love wicked rags and innocent Kalpi!! Too good! Damn awesome! This is just getting better and better with every update! Hahahaha and I love the way rags threw the phone away! Desperate lover/husband 😉

Thanks Di. 😃 I hope I do better ahead too. 😃 I knew you'd love it. 😆😳🤗 ❤️