The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Awesome update. Loved the besharam Raghav😉Enjoyed Ragna moments. Kalpi care for Raghav. Update soon.

Edited by Cinderella81 - 11 years ago

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Look I am again late 😆

Awesome update Charu... U have gone crazy with RagNa romance n ur update is driving us crazy as well. Super duper update n keep giving more romantic updates but with that move the story ahead as well. M dying to know how Rags is going to handle Pakhi now.

Kalpi is the superwoman.. handling all the responsibilities at office and at the same time trying to be a good wife by taking care of her hubby's health n not stopping him from romance. I loved Rags confidence in Kalpi and he abilities.

Shalini was confused...With the pace RagNa are romancing and Kalpi making blunder of letting that cook call her Bhabhi is surely going to reveal their secret. Rag's room has turned operation theater.. Till red light is on no one can enter,😆 I like it. Smart man.. knows how to steal some private moments with his wifey.

Update soon. M in love with all ur stories,😊

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Excuuussseee me ye office hai ya bedroom!!!

I mean I know they are hubby n wife but Raghav with Kalpi in any room could turn into their love abode!!! LOL😆

And I think there is no secret thing going to be involved here! Everything going to be out in the open!

Does Kalpi's cabin display a red light too when Raghav's cabin will have one on!???? LOL then toh secret will become an open book!

Oh so Paakhi still thinks Kalpi is married to Sammy? Funny indeed!

Hmm hope she does not end up calling Kamla the great!

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: appyK
Again me first before pm😉
Ta da!!!! Stalker is here..😆
I love all your ffs but this one is my favorite... The only thing I was saying almost the whole time reading it was 'has he/she/they gone mad??' ... First kalpi's call me bhabhi and then raghav's super besharmi.. Does he know that its his office not bedroom😆.. Iss pace se toh the secret would never remain secret..😉 Super awesome update..

Thanks for being a stalker. 😆 LOL, this was a mad update, next one may turn out to be more sensible one! That is if I myself am in a sensible mood. 😆😛 Thanks for loving the update. 😃

Originally posted by: eishe10
Amazing update!! Love the way Kalpi is handling work and Raghav. Also, nice RAGNA moment. Continue soon 😃

Thanks dear. 😃 I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: niru04
Awesome update.so hotty nd naughty ragav

Thanks, hope you liked naughty Raghav! 😛

Originally posted by: sunyy
Omg right in the office... How naughty. Does he plan on keeping it a secret or exposing them! 😆 continue soon

LOL. Maybe he really wants to expose...!! 😆😛😳 I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Awesome update... Loved RagNa romance ☺️
update soon!

Thank you so much. 😃😊 I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Awesome update..

Thanks Shikha. 😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi
awesome update charu😳
update next part soon 😃

Thank you Aditi. 😊 I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
So many responsibilities at once and😭 Still have time to eat lunch together and also time for romance😉 Good
Very nice update 👍🏼

Yes, poor Kalpi, so much to do, even handle her over-naughty husband. 😆😳 Thanks for your feedback and for liking it. 😊

Originally posted by: aryagr
Awesome update and ragna romance is never overdose dear . Plz update soon.

Thank you Arya. 😊 Relieved to hear that Ragna romance ka overdose nahi hua. 😆 😛 I'll try to update soon. 😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
nice update.,oye nai charu..its a romantic update..😆
u described business every field very well...from starting to so on..
kalpi is loaded with never ending love..na na na...with work😆
kalpi angry lo😆ok was awesome when shalini ordered outside food for raghav...she acted like a typical wife without realising nearbtyenvironment..and after that most angery look to raghav in his cabin was supereb...she behaved like proper typical wife..oh yes she is actually wife...after that romance was a romantic romance..never ending romance😳
raghav is too too too despirate for kalpu..he never left any chance to romance with his wifey kalpi..he is raghav singhania ie, why he could find any chance to romance with her...he ignored his fake wife nd answer of kalpi given to him that really Unwanted..😉yes she was invited bt him only ie only like bin bulai mehmaan.
lovely romantic update..

Thank you Ritu. Your comment brought a big smile to my face. It was sweet and again for details. Thanks for liking those business details and Kali's wifey avatar in office.😃 Thanks for liking the romance too! 😃 🤗

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
Oh come on u cut off at such a peak very bad girl I would love to scream at something right now why why why u didn't finish OMG I love your writing this story is really a romantic one I just can't get enough of it and then u go and cut the romantic part at it's peak. I just love the Office Romance please give us more of this in the future and please update soon thanks ❤️

Aww...Shivani I am sorry. You know I can actually go on and on and write more of romance and that too in details, maybe use the right words too. 😆 😳 But then I become scared lest i might be kicked out of IF LOL. 😆😛 I could show more. Maybe in future updates later on I may recreate Ragna SR like situation and then you all can enjoy again. 😛 I'll try to include more of Ragna romance. 😊 ll try to update soon. n thanks a lot for this lovely-lovely feedback. 😃 ❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Awesome update Charu! Kalpi is loaded with responsibilities. But Raghav is sure she will handle everything with ease. He's proud of his superwoman wifey. Even though she's not staying with him, she's handling the role of a dutiful wife to perfection, not allowing him to eat junk food. The camaraderie between her and Raghav's peon didn't go unnoticed by Shalini. Raghav always want Kalpi to sit on his lap. Smart guy, doesn't leave any chance to romance. He's so naughty that he undressed her right there in the office. Besharmi ki heights! Pakhi calling and congratulating Kalpi on her marriage. She gets to know that Sammy is not Kalpi's husband. Pakhi will definitely ask her pyari Kamala ma whom did Kalpi marry. Wonder what will happen then. By the way it was a very interesting and romantic update. Not at all boring. Stop blaming yourself Charu! 🤗

Hi Kiara, I became so happy to read your comment. 😃 The way you bring your interpetation of the updates is awesome, and very close to my own view when I write. n yes I realised later on that the way I had written Ragna hot scene, was besharmi ki heights! 😆 ☺️ Hope that was not a cause of worry and uncomfort! 😛 Yes, Pakhi may definitely call her Kamla Maa. 😉 Thank so much for encouraging words; I am happy & relieved that it was not found to be boring. 😃🤗 Thanks a lot. 😊 ❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: snacky
updates full of ragna moments can never be boring mmm.. just loved it

Thanks dear for the precious feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 😊

Originally posted by: Anjinie
awesome, loved how he cut Paakhi's call, office romance lovely, looking forward to the next update, just curious will Paakhi take Raghav's advice off looking for a job, ,

Thanks. You really sum up everything so well in one-two lines; and also add relevant questions. Helps me a lot. Thank you for loving it. 😊