BE MINE..NOW AND FOREVER,!!PART 13 UPDATED..01/9/13 page 25

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GUYS...am writing a story fo the first time and I hope u guys will njoy it,,please giv me ur valuable comments.
</div>PLOT :same as EMA but some incidentsd are different that I am not planning to stretch the story..it will b short.
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He tried hard to control himself not to think about her. ..The way she saved him from thefalling chandelier. .. the way she held him. .. d concern which was evident in her eyes. ..'was dat a mere concern fo a boss?her eyes said more. .!'ragav,u r thinking nonsense. .. he corrected himself. .He tried not to look at her but he cudnt resist. ..a small sight of her made him distracted. .. made him feel lost. .. she was so Beautiful. .. he had fallen for her eyes and innocence in childhood itself. .. Her eyes always spoke volumes.. he wanted to sink in them. ..
"Ragav..!!"there stood sammy staring
at his friend who was damn lost in kalpi. ."wat happened. ?wat r u staring at..? "Oh nothing yaar... come let's leave. .. its time fo meeting. .. "they left the cabin together... raghav dint look at kalpi neither did she. . Sammy stopped by her and said her to Leave by 5 as raghav and he won't be coming back to office after meeting. She nodded and added"sammy sir,please make sure that raghav Sir takes d antibiotics as he didn't take the injection"sammy was shocked at her concern but hide it and answered"ofcourse kalpi... he s my friend. ..dont worry...unka khayal rakhna toh banta hai.."he smiled and left...
There stood raghav behind d door hearing their conversation. ."she care for me. .. After all those insults and taunts. .. ?how can she. .?Her eyes proved she was genuine. .. "she never lied and he always knew it. ..!!"nd y did sammy call her kalpi.?y cant he call her kalpana. .!!"ragav u need a reality check man..r u getting jealous..?he cudnt believe wat he ws thinking...!!This girl is driving me all crazy dammit ..he murmured. ..
Just them he saw sammy nearing. ..he asked him"ho gaya sabse baat.?ab chale.?" Sammy smiled and they both left..sammy could clearly sense it dat his friend was now jealous. ..he said in his mind"guess am right!he has feelings for her. .!".
They both reached home by 8.. raghav sat on d sofa nd he cudnt just stop thinking about kalpana.."hope kalpana wud have reached home safe. .. no. .. its kalpi." .. he smiled... Just then be found sammy talking on phone with a wide smile. .. sammy rarely smiles on phone. ..shud b maya,raghav thought. .."ohh no... did I hear it ryt..?but y.?!!"raghav was amazed...sammy just said"Ohk kalpi.,bye. ..c u 2mw... stay safe and make sure u text me after reaching home. .". He disconnected the phone ..,kept it on the table and went to kitchen. ."y shud he
call kalpi now. ?nd she still dint reach home yet. ?where d hell is she. ?How will she reach home alone now. ?yeh ladki zarur pagal hai aur mujhe bhi pagal kardungi!!Now how can I know where she is. ?Can't ask sammy,he already found me today starting at kalpi. .wat if I call her. .. but wat will I ask her n how. .?he smiled naughtily thinking of an excuse. .. This is surely gonna make her turn junglibilli... he loved taunting her. .!he dialed her number. ..
In the office kalpi was just about to complete the work. . She had promised to complete her colleague's work as she had left early. ..kalpi was indeed shocked
on seeing her phone ..MR.KHADOOS calling..."he. ?Now. ?attend karoon ya na karoon...!!Come on kalpi,he is ur boss. ."she composed herself and attended the call. .
K: Hello
R:hello ms.jhadav I just called to know when u left office.
K:(surprised! Is he concerned. ?)y sir.?
R:just to make sure u dint leave before 5 as both me and sammy were not dere. . He smirked. .. he knew now he wud get her fuming at him
K:dekho sir..mein kaamchor nahi hun...I do my work well. ..aur waise mein abhi bhi office mein hi hun...khush..?
R:good fo u ms.jhadav.. bye
Raghav felt really angry. .."is she mad. .?is wakt office mein kya kar rahi hein.?zarur kisi aur ki kaam kar rahi hogi...yeh itna mahan kyun hein..?when will she learn to mind her own business. ..!and now how will she reach home all alone nd its raining heavily outside. ..I shud leave to office.. NOW!!" Raghav just took the keys and left. .. sammy stood dere Watching all dat happened dere..."dis is wat i wanted. .raghav,u have changed and am sure dis is definitely for good..kalpi will bring all the happiness in ur lyf. .. she is d one made for u...nd I know u had waited all dese years for her. ..
Never letting a girl enter your life. ..u both are meant to b together. ."he smiled to himself. ..

in the office kalpi was really angry at the way raghav always taunted her. .."y is he lyk dis. ?achi se baat karna bhi nahi aata...he rarely smiles but it never reaches his eyes. .. wats wrong in his life.?kya mein kuch kar sakti hun unke zindagi mein khushiyaan lane ke liye...how handsome will he look when he smiles. ..!!kalpi...tujhe hua kya hai.?He is ur boss . Nd don't u c.. he Hates u...!!If so y do I feel that he cares for me too..?chod kalpi...faltu mein kiski baare mein soch rahi ho...ab nikal varna bahut late ho jaaungi..."she left d office
and was shocked seeing the rain. .. she always loved rain. .But at that point she was confused. .. she decided to Walk and stood at the road waiting for a cab. .."wow ..!she is too sexy man..!"Raghav cudnt just take his eyes of her. .. she was totally drenched. . Her sleeveless orange top and black skirt fitted her perfectly and her wet figure Xactly showed how perfect a woman material she was. .. he cudnt resist drooling on her. .. Water dropswere drippingfrom her ears.. he lips were wet. . He felt like dey were calling for him. .. SHE IS MINE. .ALL MINE..!!NO WAY AM LOSING HER FOR ANYTHING. .!!He winked.
Just then he saw a man nearing
her .. no.. he is starting at her body. ..!kalpi felt awkward at his looks and asked"khoor kya rahe ho.?zindagi mein pehli baar ladki dekhi hai kya.?""tum to kamaal ki Item ho yaar"he said trying to touch her..."how dare you. ?"she slapped him. .. nd dis made the man more angry...he got hold of her hands and pulled her towards him...she was struggling. .. raghav had his blood boil. ..he stepped or off his car.

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Will update soon..plz giv ua valuable comments..

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PART 4-PAGE 6
PART 5-PAGE 9
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PART 7-PAGE 13 PART 8-PAGE 14
PART 9-PAGE 15
PART 10-PAGE 17
PART 11-PAGE 18
PART 12-PAGE 21
PART 13-PAGE 25
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thank u guys...will be updating soon...my university xams r goin on ..dats y a small delay...

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