BE MINE..NOW AND FOREVER,!!PART 13 UPDATED..01/9/13 page 25 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww romantic update
loved the confession
pls pls update soon
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amazing read it one go continue soonnn...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

oh my god...your update...👏 lagta hai Ragna ki wine peekar lihi thi tumne, aur humein bhi pila dee. 😃 I can't tell you how happy & intoxicated I felt again after days...(since no Ragna since one week in the show). BTW..aise Raghav ko Kalpi toh kya, koi bhi ladki resist nahi akr payegi...any girl would go weak in her knees.😆 n I loved that lipbite and naughty smile part.😊😃👍🏼 please update soon.😊

haha...I myself find peace in writing dis coz d show is all crap now..nd watching dat melodrama spoils d essence of ragna...so its bttr to read d wu and write stories like dis...am really glad dat u njoyed..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: babydolll

amazing read it one go continue soonnn...

thanx dea...shall update ssoon,..!!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome superb update
Plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys am not bringing in any serious moments in the story right now bcz ab light moments and romance is needed...full on tragedy toh show mein ho raha hai...

PART 3:

Raghav replied:"madam ,aapki ghar ki raasta blocked hai..baarish ki vajah se isiliye aap ghar nahi jaa sakthi...!aapki aai ne kaha hai ki mujhe aapka khayaal rakhna hoga aur kal tumhaare ghar pe drop karna hai...!!"

"whaaattt???no way..!i wil walk home.."she said..

He looked at her confused and sad too ...n asked "kyun ?tum mujhpe bharosa nahin karti?"

Kalpana really felt guilty of wat she just said on looking at his face."girl,u hv hurt him"!!she wanted to hug him at dat moment."no sir,aisi koi baat nahin hai...vo aaj subah ghar se jaldi nikli thi toh aai baba ko dekhne ka man kar rahi thi...!!bus aur koi baat nahi hai..!!aii ne kaha hai toh..koi baat nahi..theek hai.."she said.

"har raat unhi logon ko dekhthi hun na aaj ek change keliye mujhe dekhlo..!watsay??mein zyaada handsome nahin hun lekin teek taak toh hun na??he smiled(haaa haa...wahi naughty smile jinpe hum log fida hai;) )

"aap toh killer hai sir!!"kalpi just realised wat she said"girlll..crap!!wat did u just say??hav u lost it???reality check needed girl.."she thought.

He was suprised seeing dis naughty side of kalpi.."i am gonna love dis girl more and more...she is just awesome..""

Raghav:wat did u jzt say?

Kalpi:oh nothing...hum chale plz??"

Raghav: really??nothing??

He smiled and she cudnt just look at his eyes..she knew he wud make any bahana to touch her..she felt shy...kalpana:sir plz chale...

He had dat sexy lip bite and nodded saying:"as u say madam..!!"

He then remembered nd said.."by d way since d road is blocked we shall go to my guest house..its nearby."

"yeahh..Ohk "kalpi replied.

They reached the guest house,he looked at her getting out of the car.she was still drenched..water drops tipped fron her ears thru her neck!! "sexy she is !and yeah she is mine" he reassured.

They got out of the car and he realised that d main key was wth Sammy nd d one he had cointained only one rooms key..he took her to the room and said"look kalpi,am sorry..i hav only one room's key..sso u will stay in dis room and i shall sleep in d hall"

"no sir...aap pareshan mat huiye..mein hall me sothi hun.u plz b comfortable here..."kapi said.

Raghav looked at her sternly and replied"dekho kalpi..pehli baat ..am not letting u sleep in d hall...nd doosari baat...argue karna hai toh karlo but v will have to share d same bed if so...isliye meri baat maano aur sleep in the room..got it?"

Kalpi:"koi baat nahi..!its a double bed..batwaara karte hain.."she divided d bed into two using the pillows...:ab teek hai?"she asked...

"Iski zarurat thi??really..??"he asked..(winking)

She cudnt hide d blush..."haan haan ..zarurat thi...ab chal niklo...!mujhe change karna hai.."she said him..."but into wat??"she stood dere confused...

Ragav understud the situation..he opened the cupboard took a saree and gave it to her saying ,,"its my mom's..change into dis..nd ya dere is d washroom.."

She smiled and he left the room...

He came to the hall...wearing dat wet shirt was uncomfortable...he removed it nd then realised dat his dresses are in the cupboard..he decided to go aftr sometime as kalpana wud b changing..

He waited fo some minutes and then went to the room thinking kalpi wud hav changed...he opened the door and stood amused dere..infront of the mirror stud she,holding the half draped saree not knowing how to drape it..

"ohh hoo bappa!!ab yeh saari kaise pehnu??aaii bhi nahin hai"!!she was wondering wat if ragav sees her like dis..!

He cleared his throat!!she turned shocked!!"ohh no..!!"she dint know wat to do..she held the half draped saree close to her.

"shall i help?"he asked like a perfect gentleman...she was indeed shocked at wat he just asked..."raghav singhania aur saree??"she wondered.."tumhe saree pehna aata hai?"she asked.

"haan haan mohtarma..!!mein toh roz saree hi pehanti hun na?tumne dekha nahi aaj tak?"ragav said smilingly...haha..she just corrected herself"i mean saree pehnana aata hai"

"dikhata hun"he said and moved close to her..as the distance btwn dem decreased her heartbeats increased..he just took the saree from her hands ..seeing her beautiful slim waist ,the saree just slipped off his hands..he cudnt jzt resist staring.."sir"kalpana called...'oh...am sorry..""raghav tuk d saree from the floor..he just realised how cheaply he stared at her"control ragav!!controll..!!she is going to be urs oneday..!! he took the pleets and pinned it to the saree and during dis his hands brushed her waist and she felt the current...

Shall update as soon as possible.

Next update-2nd missed kiss and ragavs effort to make kalpi call him"ragav"

Give me ur feedbacks abt any changed needed..thankyou.

Edited by aswathi.mc44 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
🤣bechare raghav ki halat kharab hai...i can imagine this scene in the show as well🤣 specially kalpi's saari line to raghav and his reply to her🤣
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
very funny..i luv it...sari part was awesome...🤣
update soon...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
my my my...😳 enjoyed the Saree scene. I could actually visualise/imagine it. u r very good in this. 😃👏 Kalpi ka toh pata nahi, mujhe zarur blush ho raha tha!it was hot. 😊 i am loving this.😊👏n cute sweet Raghav, bechara...😛😃
Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Haha saree part was awesome... pls update soon:)

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