OS- No Entry *Last Part Page 5*

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Hey guys, I love writing so I am back with another OS. I hope you all enjoy it but if it's terrible let me know so I could improve.

Note: This OS is on three couples. Prem+Maya, Sammy+Paakhi, and Raghav+Kalpi😊
All three couples are positive.


All three couples are really happy. The confessions had took place almost a month ago. Now, it was time to inform their families. It would be a tough job but it had to be done. First, comes Raghav who is all set to show Prem and Sammy that he was the best even when it came to this. One day, Raghav went to Kalpi's home to talk to her family. He had explained to her parents how much he loved her. Only problem was they didn't think Raghav was the person for Kalpi. Kalpi had gotten angry for a moment and had yelled, "Ai! Baba!" And so they kicked her out of the house. Raghav told Kalpi not to worry and that she could live at his house after he told his parents.
"Ma!" Raghav called out. Kalpi and Raghav were standing inside a huge haveli and they would be telling Raghav's parents about their relation today. Raghav's parents came rushing down the stairs."Haan Behta?" his mom asked. "Ma.." "Yes?" his mother asked him impatiently. "Mom, I have fallen in love" Raghav said simply. His mother gasped. "What?" "Have you gone mad, Raghav?" his father asked him. "What?" Raghav asked. "No, we can't let you marry her" his parents told him. "We don't like her. "But what's wrong with me?" Kalpi asked, curiously. "Tons" Raghav's mother said. "You are too smart for our son, dear. You don't know..he is a man, very true, but his actions are very childish indeed." "But that's because you're my mother" Raghav said. "I will always be childish for you." "Your mother is right" his father said to him. "Oh jeez, mom dad" Raghav said rolling his eyes. "So you're not listening to us?" his mother asked him. Raghav was silent for a few moments. Then he took a deep breath and said, "No, I am not listening to you guys. What will you do?" What Raghav didn't know was that his parents could do a lot! A few minutes later, he and Kalpi were standing outside of the haveli. Both of them were now holding their small suitcases. Raghav's mother wanted to punish him so she took all his money from him.
"Where do we go now?" Kalpi asked. "No worries" Raghav said with a smile. "There's always Sammy." But the next thing they knew, a similar thing had happened to Sammy and Paakhi and so they were kicked out of their own homes with no money either. When Prem called Raghav to inform him that he was going to tell his family, Raghav immediately said, "No! You don't want to suffer what we had to." But Prem never took Raghav seriously. Raghav often played tricks on him. So he went on along with Maya to inform his family. And guess what? They were out of their homes by the evening.
It is evening and all three couples are sitting at a bench on the road. "These parents are very similar" Sammy said. "All of them had to kick us out?" "That's.." Prem started, but Raghav stood up angrily. "I had told you to not tell your family about your relationship or else you would end up in the same situation as us. But NO you had to go on and tell them" Raghav said, angrily. By now the other two boys were standing as well. The girls yawned and dropped down to sit on the bench together. "But Raghav" Prem said. "How was I supposed to know that this was not another one of your tricks?" " 'How was I supposed to know' " Raghav mimicked. "You're always going on and on about how you're the best so you were supposed to know." "Ra-" "Relax, guys" Sammy said. "There's no use fighting among ourselves, now." "Relax?!" Paakhi asked, standing up. "Do you guys realize how many mosquitoes there are here?" "Paakhi" Sammy started. Maya stood up as well and took Prem aside. "Arre idiot, hotel mein six rooms book karao hum raat bhar kya yaheen ruke ge?" "Sure I would, Maya" Prem said. "But currently I am broke." "Ugh!" Maya said shaking her head, annoyingly and plopping back down on the bench next to Kalpi. "Guys, looks like we have to spend the night on the road" Kalpana said. "I think too" Raghav started, but was cut off by Paakhi. "We? We girls are supposed to stay out on a bench all night when we have you three to find a place for us? For goodness sake, go to your office and get some money from there!" "Dad" Prem mumbled and the other two guys nodded in agreement. "Vah!" Maya said, chuckling sarcastically. "Humaare dilo mein ghus gaye tum teeno magar apne hi ghar mein no entry!" "Look who's talking" Prem said, with a sarcastic smile. "Do you girls have a home to live in right now?" *Sigh* This was leading them nowhere. Kalpana started yawning and said, "Sona hai mujhe!" "Lekeen kahaan?" Paakhi asked. "There's only one uncomfortable bench." Maya smirked. "Haan toh yeh teeno hai, na?" she said.
"Now, sit down criss cross apple sauce" Maya ordered the guys. Once the guys were seated on the ground, the girls lay their heads on their laps. Prem started stroking Maya's hair but she snapped, "Sone do!" He immediately stopped.
When the girls heard a car coming their way, they immediately jumped to their feet. "Ab kya hai?" Raghav asked them. "We don't want to look stupid" Kalpana told Raghav. "Sleeping on the road" Paakhi added. "Lekeen hum toh neeche beithe hai" Sammy said. "Haan toh yeh tumaari problem hai na?" Maya asked. "We girls are just worried about what people think of us."

Precap: A lost dog is wandering on the street and the girls scream. The guys looked at each other obviously annoyed. These girls were too much.

I hope you guys liked. I am planning to write 3 or 4 parts of this story. I will only continue if you guys think I should. How was it??😊
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pl continue feels good to read something nice amidst the pall of gloom.like ur positivity always.
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Amazing...
Just loved it...
Plzz continue soon... 😊
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OMG..!! That was amazing..!!! R : "Maine kaha ta tumse ki apne relationship ke baare mein mat batao..lekin nahin..!!"😆😆😆😆
M : "sone do!!" 🤣🤣
Amazingly writen darling..!!! 👏👏👏👏👏
Plz continue soon..!! 😳😳😳
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awesome os its like a life line in the mess around us do continue soon👏
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🤣oh all out of their homes...hahahahah gud one dear🤣
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finally kuch to achha mila padhne k liye
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Awesome os as always..
😆😆😆Bechare beghar ho gaye..
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ahahaa loved it!! please update sooon
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Part 2:

A few moments later the boys are pacing back and forth while the girls are seated on a bench. Suddenly, they hear a dog bark. "What was that?" Maya asked, her eyes widening as she stood up. "Yeah..what was that!" Paakhi said, jumping up. Raghav looked at Kalpana. At least, she wouldn't be frightened, he thought. But he realized he was wrong as Kalpi joined the girls. "It's a dog!" Kalpana said very loudly. The guys looked at each other obviously annoyed. These girls were too much.
They all turned around and saw a dog walking towards them. The next thing the boys knew, the girls were running in the opposite direction. "Oh come on!" Raghav yelled after them, but no use. They were already far off. Sammy chuckled and reached down to pet the dog. It was so cute. "Come on" Prem said, jogging after the girls.
All six of them reached a beach. There were a couple of beach seats left there so the girls immediately lay down on them. Prem went over to stand next to Maya. "Maya.." "Arre chup!" Maya said, shutting her eyes as if she wanted to sleep.

But their sleep was disturbed yet again when it started raining. "Oh my gosh- what is going on here!" Maya complained. "Ek Prem kam tha ki baarish ko bhi abhi aana tha!" The guys looked at each other for a moment before nodding to each other. They pulled their love aside. Raghav tried to talk to Kalpi. "Kal-" "Do mujhe" Kalpi said. "Kya?" Raghav asked, confused. "Apna coat aur kya!" Kalpi said. "Mujhe thand lag rahi hai." "Magar mera coat kyun? Tumaare paas toh suitcase hai na?" Raghav said. "Kyunki filmo mein aisa hota hai!" Kalpana told him, frowning slightly. "Oh ok" Raghav said, taking off his coat and holding it out for her. She glared at him. "Patta nahi, kya? Filmo mein hero heroine ko coat penaata hai!" "Of couse, meri drama queen" Raghav said going behind her to put the coat around her.
Meanwhile, Prem was trying to get on the good side of Maya. "Tumaare aankhein.." Prem started. "Meri aankhein kya?" Maya asked, angrily. "Khoobsurat hai" Prem responded. Maya nodded as if she already knew that. "Tumaare gaal gulaab ke tarra-" "Arre shut up, Prem!" Maya said, crossing her arms. "Yeh dialogue mujh par nahi chalne waale!"
"Paakhi meine kiya kya hai?" Sammy asked her. Paakhi glared at him. "Kya kiya hai?" she asked. "Boht kutch! Mein yahaan bhook se marre jaa rahi hoon aur tum ho ki bak bak chapar chap karre jaare ho!"
And they kept on arguing like that. Who could say that these people were actually lovers of each other?😆
"Come on guys, let's look for an apple tree, there are lots around here" Kalpana told them. They agreed and followed her. On the side of a road there was an apple tree but the apples were much too high to reach. "Prem!" Maya ordered. "Ghoda Bano!" "What?" Prem asked. "Do as I say!" Maya ordered him. "Why should I?" Prem asked. "Just chill guys, I'll do it" Raghav said, going down on the ground next to the tree. "Lekeen Kalpi mere upar khari hokar apple pakde gi?" Raghav asked, nervously. "Fikar matt karo Kalpi tumaare upar nahi khaddi hogi" Paakhi said. Raghav let out a sigh of relief but paused midway when Maya said, happily, "Prem khadda hoga tumaare upar!" "What!" Raghav said. "What are you saying, Maya?" Prem asked. "Just do as she says!" Kalpi said, her hands on her hips. "We are very hungry and don't have time for you boys' nonsense!" "Come on, yaar, relax" Sammy told Raghav.

A few moments later Raghav had gotten down with exactly three apples. The girls immediately grabbed an apple each. Kalpi paused. "Aap bhi khaaoge kya?" "No, you girls eat, we boys don't eat apples" Sammy told her calmly. Prem glared at Sammy. Who said they didn't eat apples? And since when? Sammy looked away.
"Ab let's go back to the beach where there are at least seats to lay on!" Maya ordered them a few minutes later. They all agreed. The girls were fast asleep. They had been very tired as they had never spent a whole day outside like that. Raghav went and knelt next to Kalpi and just gazed at her. He saw as the moonlight reflected off her face. Raghav brought his face closer to hers. He stroked her face softly and planted a kiss on her cheek.
Maya who was fast asleep kept muttering in her sleep, "Idiot! Prem bhi na! I love him! No, he is so annoying! How did I end up loving a chap like him?" Prem who was standing right next to her, chuckled. His Maya was really cute. He loved when she called him names. Normally, people don't like it when someone calls them an idiot. But coming from Maya, it sounded special. She always called him idiot whenever she got irritated by the littlest of things. How sweet...😳
Sammy went over to Paakhi and took her hands dangling off the seat and placed it on her stomach so she'd feel more comfortable. He grabbed one of her hands and murmured, "I am sorry, Paakhi. I can't even go get a decent place to have you stay in for the night." He quickly kissed her hands and placed them back down.
The guys spent all night gazing at their lady love.😳 Whenever one of the girls would look the slightest bit uncomfortable the guys adjusted them to their proper position. By 4 a.m. in the morning the guys dozed off on the ground.
At six when Kalpi woke up she woke the other two girls up as well. "Lakta hai yeh sab thake huye hai" Paakhi observed. "Whatevs" Maya said, bending down to run a hand through Prem's hair. Standing back up, she asked, "Now what?" "I have an idea" Kalpi said with a smile.

An hour later when the guys wake up, the girls are nowhere to be seen! "Where did they go?" Prem wondered out loud. "They can't just leave like that" Sammy said, frustratedly. Raghav sighed. Whenever these girls got together they always did girly stuff.😆
Last time they had gone on a shopping trip and the three girls had done nothing but wander around the make-up-shop.

"Here we are" came the sound of Paakhi's voice. All three of them turned around to look at the three girls and their eyes widened. There the girls stood wearing saris! "What is all this?" Sammy asked. Paakhi batted her eyelashes shyly. Maya was always arguing with Prem, so he was surprised when she spoke up sweetly. "Ji..ap kaam par jaaiye aur hum aap keliye khaana tyaar kar ke rakhenge." The other two girls nodded. Sammy and Prem wanted to laugh out loud but were afraid of hurting their feelings. Raghav however, did not hesitate to speak up. "This is no movie, girls! And which work, huh? Filaal humaara kaam hai apni families ko manaana!" Raghav said. Dropping their sweet attitude, the girls nodded. "Toh pela stop Prem ki mother!" Maya said. They all nodded. One by one they would together, convince all their families. Mostly it was their mothers because once the mother's decided their husbands usually agreed with them. "Mission Entry" Prem said. "What?" Maya asked. "Ab humaari entry hokar rahi gi apne gharo mein" Raghav said, with a smirk. What will these guys do now? Read on to find out!😆

I have completed part two of this OS. I hope you all enjoyed it!! Sorry for any errors! I will try to update soon!😳
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago

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