Your detailing and style of writing is something else. Its so simple yet engages you completely. Makes it seem I am watching the scene again in my mind but with more oomph.
I loved the fact Raghav could care less about Paakhi's kiss instead this provoked him to flaunt a wife around that would kiss him all the time. Not anyone but his wife. Its only his honewali wifey's kisses for him and no one else.
I wish I could add more but you have said everything. If Kalpi can be seen fighting for her mothers love then what makes people think she won't fight for her Aasman in Raghav.