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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know the story is very much unpredictable thats why i get few comments
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Part 15

Sanjana : Please Didi don't be angry on me. Please forgive me

Kalpi : If I did not have found about Ray and Riya you would have spoiled your life with your foolishness.

Sunita sees the understanding between two sisters. She notices a holy thread on Sanjana and Kalpi's hand and remembers something about it.

Sunita : Who gave you this thread ? Are you both the daughter of Siya Oberoi's daughters ?

Kalpi : Yes how do u know? Do you know our mother ?

Sunita : I know her very well and Sanjana's mom too

Everybody shocked with her sentence

Sanjana : What do you mean? Whose daughter am I ?

Sunita goes to ACP

Sunita : Do you want me to tell the truth or you will say by our own that Sanjana is your daughter

Sanjana breaks down hearing the truth including everyone.

ACP Rathore reveals that how he met Sanjana's mom and married her but due to some problem he left her when Sanjana was supposed to born. Sunita tells that her husband was a friend of Mr Oberoi who is the father of Alina. Sanjana's mom had complications in her delivery. Before dying she handed Sanjana to Alina's mom and told her to raise her child as she does not want her kid to suffer. Alina's mom adopted Sanjana and happily raised her like her own child but soon enough Mr Oberoi and his wife dies in an accident by leaving two girls alone.

Flashback ends

Sunita : It is a god's gift that both sisters who are not even blood related has a stronger bond than real sisters.

Sanjana goes to her father and questions him

Sanjana : Can I ask you the reason for leaving my mother and making me orphan

ACP: I wish I could answer your question. Forgive me if possible

Sanjana Forgive you? You made me orphan in childhood if dad did not have raised me I would have not standing in front of you. I will never forgive you, I will not leave my sister who gave me new life and she is my life. (runs away from there)

Farm house

Raghav : I don't know how will be Sanjana and Kalpi

Yohan : Life is always been cruel to them but they never cursed their luck

Riya : I know Sanjana and Didi, they are strong enough. Nobody ever thought that they would face this .

Anjali : I never imagined dad would ever do this

Ray : I think we should give them some time alone. I am sure Sanjana will never leave Kalpi

Kalpi goes at the temple.

Kalpi : What did I do wrong to anyone ? Why does it happen with me always? I always considered Sanjana more than my sister.

Priest : Dear

Kalpi : You? You are the same one who told me that I have to face the bitter reality in future. Why is this happening with us?

Priest : God always test their devotees. He gives everyone only what they deserve. If he give you problem he also give strength to face the challenge. You have to fight for your rights. There is something you have find out about your past to get your answers. God bless you (leaves from there)

Kalpi : I will not let anyone snatch my sister. I will not lose easily

Oberoi house

Sanjana at home is venting out her anger by breaking things. Kalpi comes there

Kalpi : What are you doing? Have you gone crazy?

Sanjana : I will not forgive that person Didi. Destiny is trying take me away from you

Kalpi : Do you think I will let you go away from you ? Nobody can seperate us not even death. One truth cannot weaken our relation.

Both sister hugs each other


Precap : Will both sisters be able to find the answers about their past or is there something they are unaware of?

So how is it guys?

Edited by ashpat3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...i love it😛 and don worry do 1 thing send buddy requests to somewhat 10 to 15 people and then pm ( message.) them the next chapter...u will get comments and likes for sure😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really unpredictable but really interesting.. Gr8 update..continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks guys for your comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story is still long should i still continue?
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Part 16

Kalpi finds a letter from her dad's belongings which makes her shocked.

Next day Kalpi visits Abhi's house to meet his mom. Door bell rings

Sunita : How are you dear? Come in

Kalpi : I am fine. I want to talk to you something important

Sunita : What is it about?

Kalpi : It is about my dad. I want to know did he had any enmity with anyone?

Sunita : I think he had enmity with Ranveer Singh but I do not know too much about it. He made your dad bankrupt and brought him on the street. Because of him he mortgaged his farm house to pay the loan. After your father's death he closed the case by making his death as an accident and in real it was a conspiracy. Somebody is behind his death.

Abhi : Who can be the killer than?

Kalpi : Who ever he will be I will definitely find out and the killer won't be able to escape this time.

Sunita : I am sure you will find the real culprit and punish him. Did you talk to Sanjana about this?

Kalpi : This is not the right time to tell her. I will tell her later. She is angry right now

Abhi : Let me know if you need my help

Kalpi : Thank you so much. You have done such a big favor on me

Sunita: Don't say that. Find your dad's real culprit and fulfil your duties by punishing him

Kalpi leaves from there. The city gets into a riots because of some threats by some extremists and politician. Some terrorists fixes bomb at various places. Kalpi's phone rings

Kalpi : Hello

Sonia : Where are you? Do you know what is happening in the city

Kalpi : I saw the news. I am coming to headquarters.

Headquarters

ACP : I want to know what is going on in the city

Sonia : Sir I have send the team around the whole city

Karan : We are investigating

Kalpi : I feel the suspect will be around the areas where the bomb blasted

Sameer : Sir turn on the phone

ACP turns on the speaker

Stranger : How did you like the new shock

ACP: Who are you and what do you want ?

Stranger : I want Rajveer's release and there is still gonna be a big blast if you did not listen to our demands in 48 hours

ACP : Why are you killing innocent people for that ?

Stranger : There is no time for talk. Do as I say. I will call again in few hours. Hangs up the phone

ACP : We have to release Rajveer to save the people

Sonia : But Sir how can be believe if he will spare the public after the release. He will get the power to kill more people

Kalpi : Sonia is right we have to do something.

Sameer : There is something fishy in my opinion

Karan gets a call from Riya to turn on the TV. He turns on the TV and is shocked to see the news including everyone. Ranveer Singh blames Alina for the riots going on and make it look that she is a traitor.

Karan : What nonsense is he speaking

Sonia : Do you think the people will believe it ?

Sameer : Lets go and talk to him

Everybody leaves to talk to Ranveer Singh. It is revealed that he created in the riots. He decided to teach a lesson to Alina as she foiled their plan by snatching the land he wanted to buy. Kalpi, Sameer, Sonia and Karan barges in his house

Ranveer : Welcome Kalpi

Kalpi : So this was your plan. Arent you ashamed of doing this ?

Ranveer : You should have thought twice before messing up with me and my son. You sent him to jail

Kalpi : Yes I did sent him to jail and your turn will come soon. Be ready for it

Ranveer : So you will send me jail. But how ? Nobody will believe you without proof ? You are considered a betrayal in front of people. Stop me if you can

Kalpi : I will not let suffer the innocents in the hands of you who is traitor. I will stop you within 48 hours. Thats my challenge and warning to you

Ranveer : Lets see who will win

Kalpi : I do not like to lose. Counting begins now. Leaves from there

Headquarters

ACP : You tarnished the image of yourself and the whole department.

Kalpi : Sir believe me I didn't do anything

Sameer : Why would she risk her life to arrest Rajveer if she would have betrayed

ACP : The media wants answer and nobody is ready to believe Kalpi. I suspend you right now. Just be thankful I am not taking any action against you.

Kalpi : But sir

ACP : Leave from here

Kalpi leaves from the headquarters disheartened


Precap : Will Kalpi be able to prove her innocence? What will be Sanjana's reaction on this ?

How is it guys?





Edited by ashpat3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good going..nice...continue soon...😊
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Part 17

Oberoi House

Sanjana : What is this going on? Who is doing this ?

Kalpi : Ranveer Singh, he want to ruin us because I arrested Rajveer

Sanjana : I am not going to spare him (angrily)

Kalpi : Stop, you will not do anything wrong

Sanjana : Do you want to stay silent so people's doubt can turn right? Wait I called the headquarters and Sonia said you were not in there. Everybody is supposed to be there right now. What happened

Kalpi : Sanjana (stammers)

Sanjana : What are you hiding ? Tell me

Kalpi : ACP sir suspended me for being a traitor.

Sanjana : How can he do this ? He knows very well that you can sacrifice your life for your country. He do not have right to call you traitor. You cannot keep silent this time.

Kalpi : I want to stay alone for a while

Sanjana : Okay Didi

Sanjana's POV : I will not let you down this time.

Sanjana goes to headquarter to meet ACP.

Headquarters

ACP : What are doing here?

Sanjana : Why? Shocked to see me. On what basis you called my sister a traitor. The one risked her life to save innocent people from becoming homeless. You accused her of betrayal the country by believing a corrupt politician who is the root cause of these problems. You have to answer me. Even I should be punished in that case since I am her sister who was with her always.

ACP : I know you are upset with what happened. But believe me I know what I am doing. And do not say that again that you are a sister of a traitor

Sanjana : Oh you will make everything right, but how will my sister face the people with this allegiance against her.

ACP : Will you still help the girl cheated her own country

Sanjana : Yes I will help her because she needs me the most right now. I am not like you who leave their own loved ones in the crisis situation. I am her pride and I will prove that to everyone who thinks blood is thicker than water. Thank you so much (leaves from there)

Riya's farmhouse

Raghav : Everyone is blaming Kalpi for the riots

Ray : Only the public support can help us fight against that politician

Sameer: But if we do not release Rajveer they will kill another millions of people

Kalpi : Who was the caller

Sonia: I guess we did not trace that call.

Sanjana : Do you have the number of that caller? I can trace it right now

Karan : I noted that number here it is

Sanjana starts tracing the number.

Sanjana: Someone is calling on that number

Caller : Don't worry this time if they did not fulfill the demands they knows what can we do (cuts the call)

Sanjana : Found it. I traced the location

Riya : Where is it?

Sanjana : The location is 5 km far from here and this is the address. It seems similar to something

Raghav : Thats the address of Ranveer Singh

Kalpi : What?

Raghav : So the caller is from his house. He told someone else to call so nobody can suspect him.

Sonia : But how can we prove Kalpi's innocence by this

Sameer : We can prove it but there is only one way

Karan : What is it?

Suddenly noise of bullets comes from house. Raghav and others get into fight. The girls tries to save themselves. The people kidnaps Alina & Sanjana and takes them to Ranveer.


Precap : Fights and revelations

Any guesses what is ahead




Edited by ashpat3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am wrapping up this FF soon

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